Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 36

Originally posted by: pearl.white

What a delightful update!!
"When the night is darkest, can the dawn be far away?"
Never!
Brilliant beginning!! Sumo's introspection over their past and present was amazing. Itna amazing ki thoda out of character laga. Bandi itna soch leti toh itna raita(scratch that , daal) na phailta!! 😆
Aaisi hi thi woh pehle, baad mai assasination of character happened😆
But really glad that she felt every bit of his pain.
Me too!
And the love that was resonating through their eyes waa finally translated into words. Shravan was a sweetheart with his assurances and love.
That man always is❤️
But Ramu had to interrupt. Gadha kahi ka!!

Ramu kaka pyaar ka dushman haye hayhe!
The ultimate reveal was powerful with Ramu baring it all. I dont care what type of people, Ramu-Niru are, but I find Ramu a better parent.
Agreed!
And Daal devi had the gall to act all snooty and saint-like asking Shravan to come stay with him.
She had always been self centered in my opinion...
Loved the way Shravan responded to both. Even Sumo had to bear the brunt of her actions /inactions. But I loved how despaired she was when Ramu was revealing the truth. That redeemed her so much, only Shravan and his pain mattered to her.
Yo!
Now Shravan's cerebral haemmoerage was Pure Bollywood and I love intense drama.
Hahaha! Honestly, he was hit with a hammer, kuch nahi toh kam se kam sar dard dikha dete CVs
🤢 Is Nirmala for real. Her one son was dyinng because of her other son and yet she was so detaches. Useless woman!
Aditya puran... The way her character wasy, mujhe kabhi nahi laga that she cared for Shravan!
Ramu ka bhi blame game on hai!! 😡
Uska beta almost marr gaya cause of chomudent, gussa lazmi tha😆
Loved the fiery Sumo. Aditya ki band bajani hai isne!! ⭐️
Humare sapno ki chamat
Shravan was well and finally they talked!!

The finale was perfect with perfect balance of romance, love, guilt; grief.
Shraman were live. Sumo acted as his strength and anchor.
Finale? Ek part baaki hai abhi... Nahi chahiye🤣
Lovely story!!

Thank you!!

Hey dear, this episode is beyond perfection👏...a perfect blend of emotions...Sumo's realization & Shravan's breakdown is awesome...loved the flow of whole story...

Itz nice to see that sumo is remembering each & every moment from the past when she was rude n emotionless towards shravan..(kaash show me bhi kuch dikha dete) and finally realizing HIS pain.😭

ShraMan's converstion-full of emotions & finally sumo's confession was cherry on the top..❤️

And then finally ramu's confession scene..it was mind blowing dear...really liked it..

Poor shravan...its good to see that he confronted all the three because no one is dhoodh ka dhula..well done..

Shravan's hemorrhage- yaar rona aagya(so senti..)😭..sumo's slap another highlight of episode..🤣

And again ShraMan's convo-wow.❤️twice in single episode and that too hilarious...

So ma'am overall ,a superb episode..waiting for next..

And the lines in the beginning & at the end are sooo sweet..loved them...

Originally posted by: Uroojj

Finally we could see the shravan n suman with their real characters. It is so simply kept compact like every corner was addressed. Itna mushkil bhi nahi tha k cvs na kur patay but they distroyed it, I hate when I think of it.

Jaane de bro.. Raat gayi baat gayi...

Any ways no tension now we can remember this ff as an ending to make ourselves happy n satisfied.

Thank you so much.

Aww yey!!!!

Plz keep writing.

Yes! I will!

Originally posted by: khadz20

First of all , Thank You for the PM.

WHAT AN UPDATE !

True to your words , Bollywood ka dhamaka tha yaaar.

Tha na!!!! 😆

Dark chocolate , yahaan bhi ?🤣

Maine promise kia tha uss thread mai ke I'll mention it, toh I did😉

That hospital twist , dude, completely unexpected.

Shocker! Woh hazam nahi hua tha mujhe, ke sar pe lagi aur sar dard tak nahi hua🤣

Loved the proposal ❤️

I'm glad you did!

ab shaadi ke bina khud par toh nahi chada sakta toh sar par hi sahi... BRO , I died 🤣

Don't die! I'm gonna have to get Prii to resuscitate you😆

All in all , awesome. <3

Thank you!!!

HUGS 🤗

Hugs back!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb

absolutely loved it

amazing

Originally posted by: an_chau

Zoya...

Kya karti hai yaar!!! Aise sapne kyun dikhati hai jo poore nahin honge!!! 😭 Mujhe mera ShraMan wapas chahiye!!! 😡

Arey yaar! Tu ne hi toh kaha tha, sapne poore nahi hue, write about them toh we can relive, ab likha toh aaisa😒

But lovely update bro... full-on Bollywood ishtyle... loved the confrontation, so glad that your Shravan could give voice to the questions pent up inside many of us... And so happy that your Sumo actually looks beyond herself, and recognizes the man for what he really is... Ab lag rahe hain done ek due ke vaaste...

True to the name of the show! True to their initial characters😳

Sach men aise log manufacture hona bandh ho gaya hai... ❤️

Kasam se

Achchha was I imagining or did I just find some sneaky glimpses into the Aa Jao thread in this update?

You did not imagine it! It was very much there😆

Dark chocolate, Mat Jao (a la Aa Jao) in a husky voice... ☺️ Almost expected Adi to barge in with one of his goondas named Saras...

Saras🤣 Ramu did barge in though😆 And killer right! Imagine Sumo eating him like a slab of dark chocolate! Uff!🤪

Love!

Love back!

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

freaking awesome update❤️

Shukriya!

the cute romance and proposal were super adorable and just warmed my heart👍🏼❤️❤️

I'm glad you liked it so!

and the ramu kaka confession was well written👏

Thank you!

i like that you incorporated some injuries from kidnapping...always wondered how he just got away from it feeling fine...but hero hai toh kya kare😆

Cause he was wolverine 🤣

lovely update

thanks for the pm

You're welcome!!!