Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 38

Originally posted by: Akriti12

Hey dear, this episode is beyond perfection👏...a perfect blend of emotions...Sumo's realization & Shravan's breakdown is awesome...loved the flow of whole story...

I like how you refer to these as episodes, makes me go

And thank you!

Itz nice to see that sumo is remembering each & every moment from the past when she was rude n emotionless towards shravan..(kaash show me bhi kuch dikha dete) and finally realizing HIS pain.😭

Kaash!!

ShraMan's converstion-full of emotions & finally sumo's confession was cherry on the top..❤️

And then finally ramu's confession scene..it was mind blowing dear...really liked it..

Shukriya...

Poor shravan...its good to see that he confronted all the three because no one is dhoodh ka dhula..well done..

Agreed! Sab at some level or the other were wrong...

Shravan's hemorrhage- yaar rona aagya(so senti..)😭..

Awww...

sumo's slap another highlight of episode..🤣

He deserved much more than the chamat😆

And again ShraMan's convo-wow.❤️twice in single episode and that too hilarious...

Hehehe...

So ma'am overall ,a superb episode..waiting for next..

Ma'am! Itni izzat! I hopefully won't keep you waiting long...

And the lines in the beginning & at the end are sooo sweet..loved them...

Glad you do!

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Congratulations dear 🤗You are an awesome writer.I like your writing style.I expected the same kind of revelations in the show,but unfortunately we don't get this.Now I am so happy to fulfill my wish👏.Especially Sumo slapped Aditya 😆.Keep writing.I can't wait for your next part.🥳

Originally posted by: Safire

Hai, i have no words to describe! I read it in one go! And throughout i had mixed feelings.and to be honest I needed full towels and not just tissue paper s!!!and after the conversation part with ramanathan where shravan falls ill,arey meri jaan tho nikalnewali thi! What a writer you are!!! Amazing! I wish you write more and more!God bless you!!

Zoya <3
*squishyhugbro*

The morning was beautiful:)

Sumo's realisation was bang on.
The flashbacks ^_^

As easy as breathing he whispered, "Toh sach hi toh hai na yeh Sumo. Har baar jab tumhe dekhta hoon,tumse phir pyaar ho jata hai. Lagta hai jaise pehli baar dekha hai tum ko."

Koi is ladke se kaho aisi baatein na kare. Sheer love <3

"Mai toh saari zindagi intezaar kar leta tumhare izhaar ka.."
My heart in the puddle of mushiness :)

"Mat jao."
Bro , I am single kay ? This is just too many feels . Haha :D

And Papa Malhotra aur Mummy Malhotra ka sach aaya bahar.
Everyone was at fault.
My heart went out to Shravan </3
Poor lad.

Sumo-ness back at the hospital.
Aur do teen thappad lag wahi deti Aditya ko.

"It's ironic, itna tootne ke baad bhi, mera dil sabko jodne ki baat kar raha hai."
Sharvan <3

How in the world ?
This was amazeballs writeup ! :D

And Rumi at the end.

This was awesomeness :*
Sorry for the delay.
But a big jhappi and a pappi for you .
Not like their's though. Haha
-Love and best wishes always <3

Originally posted by: sahiba402

sare loops cover ho gye 😳 👏
Nahi saare nahi, abhi ek adh baaki hai...😆
and that one dialogue which i loved was:
"qutab minar"

"bolo"

❤️

Enduring hai na!
chomu ko kichke ek 😆 maja aa gya

Bas uski jaan nahi nikli, warna lafa zor daar tha🤣
Awesome update zoya... ending was 👏
Thank you!!!
thanku😃
Anytime!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! How have I not read this one before? 😲

Happens bro!

Loved the first part.. The scne where she punched him in the chest was funny yet, sexy..

Thank you!😆

Going on to the next 2 parts.

I'll await your comments!

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Zoya <3
*squishyhugbro*
Adeeba <3

*Squishy hug back*

The morning was beautiful:)
That it was!

Sumo's realisation was bang on.
The flashbacks ^_^
Kaash ek toh bhi flashback show mai hota!

As easy as breathing he whispered, "Toh sach hi toh hai na yeh Sumo. Har baar jab tumhe dekhta hoon,tumse phir pyaar ho jata hai. Lagta hai jaise pehli baar dekha hai tum ko."

Koi is ladke se kaho aisi baatein na kare. Sheer love <3
Hahaha! Woh aaisa nahi karega toh humara kya hoga!😆

"Mai toh saari zindagi intezaar kar leta tumhare izhaar ka.."
My heart in the puddle of mushiness :)
Mine too...

"Mat jao."
Bro , I am single kay ? This is just too many feels . Haha :D
Mai bhi yaar. And that gives me hope.. We might just find our Shravan Malhotra 😆

And Papa Malhotra aur Mummy Malhotra ka sach aaya bahar.
Everyone was at fault.
My heart went out to Shravan </3
Poor lad.
Absolutely!

Sumo-ness back at the hospital.
Aur do teen thappad lag wahi deti Aditya ko.
Mai toh jaan se hi marva deti, then I though zyada ho jayega 🤣

"It's ironic, itna tootne ke baad bhi, mera dil sabko jodne ki baat kar raha hai."
Sharvan <3
Shravan indeed ❤️

How in the world ?
This was amazeballs writeup ! :D
Thanks bro!

And Rumi at the end.
His idea of love is
This was awesomeness :*

Shukriya!

Sorry for the delay.

Koi baat nahi!

But a big jhappi and a pappi for you .

Right back at you!

Not like their's though. Haha

Thanks for clarifying! It was getting scandalous 🤣

-Love and best wishes always <3

Love back!

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold

Nuts🤗

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold

Nuts🤗

Thank you so much!