Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 35

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Posted: 8 years ago
THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!
GIVING ME ALL THE FEELS!
You've outdone yourself Zoya

*Charan sparsh*

How I wish it was like this
But no complaints, I love the way it was back then. But I love this too!

Please write more for my inspiration sake 😆😉

Love & Admiration

(I hope you know who I am, I need not mention my name)😛😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the pm Zoya...and what should I say...again a masterpiece...u were right, we should have kept tissues for this...this is beautiful, emotional, awesome etc etc...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I've commented. Ab maafi mil jaayegi? Pakki waali!😳
I'll comment on Mr. & Mrs. too😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

I've commented. Ab maafi mil jaayegi? Pakki waali!😳

I'll comment on Mr. & Mrs. too😉

Arey pagli!
Maafi toh tab milti na jab mai naraz hoti😆
And you're truely one of a kind...
Cause no one else liked the ending we got 🤣


@everyone thank you so much!
I'll reply individually later😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya,
This is a different level of awesomeness... How do you manage to pen down what I expected all the time...
Ram's coming clean, Niru still being tje woman I hate n still bickering... Pushkar was so cool. Sumo was everything I wanted her to be... Shravan, aahh!! This is the Shravan I fell in love with... The man whose love n pain defined him... The man who could love n forgive the people who destroyed him. This is who Shravan Malhotra is... This line though is epic..
~~~Ab shadi ke bina khud pe toh chada nahi sakta, toh sar pe hi sahi..."~~~
I loved the chapter... It was amazing.. Can I say that I love you... Ok.. I already did... 🤗
Cheers!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoyaaa!! That was a long part indeed! And must I add, very intense!
Sumo reminiscing all that had gone by in the last decade, her realizing how much she has hurt him, and how he still loved her, was so beautiful!👏

Loved her honest confession to Shravan the next day. It was much needed. And he was ready to wait for her, for eternity.😳Aww! Jaan leke rahega Shravan.

So he has finally decided to quit alcohol. That's a good move! Well done Sumo!😆

I love the way the Ramu-Shravan conversation shaped up. It was very intense, and I could literally picture it happening in front of my own eyes. Well done Zoya!👏And his breakdown was so shattering. Sumo the rebel was pretty convincing in the hospital. And the way she nursed him back to normalcy was very endearing. The last part was mushy and neutralizing. I did need a lot of tissues, like you mentioned!😃

Looking forward to some more, and if possible, would love to see her pouring her heart out to him, about whatever she had in mind in the last ten years.

Thanks for the PM.

Cheers!
Nuts
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks zoya
Such a beautiful piece
Love it
Very well written
Bahot hi emotional tha
Update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Amreen Beta waisi cheezen likhne humko aati nahi😆

Hum fluff likh denge, insinuate kar denge, baaki aap khud sanskaari ho😉



Kya yaar!! Chal theek hai!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz



Kya yaar!! Chal theek hai!!

Woh sab ke liye Anjali ko request kar😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Zoya Zoya !!!
I simply love love love Shravan and the way you have portrayed the progression in Shravan and Suman's relationship. The cerebral hemorrhage and subsequent Sumo's sumoness in dealing with Nirmala and Aditya was ingenious.
Ab thoda shaadi, recetion aur suhaag raat😉 ke bare mein bhi likh do na...please...ab show mein toh humlog ko Preekar romance mila...tum saare fandom ki kwaish puri kar do😊
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