Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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Uroojj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#331

Finally we could see the shravan n suman with their real characters. It is so simply kept compact like every corner was addressed. Itna mushkil bhi nahi tha k cvs na kur patay but they distroyed it, I hate when I think of it.

Any ways no tension now we can remember this ff as an ending to make ourselves happy n satisfied.

Thank you so much.

Plz keep writing.

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donottulip

@donottulip

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Posted: 8 years ago

#332

First of all , Thank You for the PM.

WHAT AN UPDATE !

True to your words , Bollywood ka dhamaka tha yaaar.

Dark chocolate , yahaan bhi ?🤣

That hospital twist , dude, completely unexpected.

Loved the proposal ❤️

ab shaadi ke bina khud par toh nahi chada sakta toh sar par hi sahi... BRO , I died 🤣

All in all , awesome. <3

HUGS 🤗

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#333

superb

absolutely loved it

amazing

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an_chau

@an_chau

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Posted: 8 years ago

#334

Zoya...

Kya karti hai yaar!!! Aise sapne kyun dikhati hai jo poore nahin honge!!! 😭 Mujhe mera ShraMan wapas chahiye!!! 😡

But lovely update bro... full-on Bollywood ishtyle... loved the confrontation, so glad that your Shravan could give voice to the questions pent up inside many of us... And so happy that your Sumo actually looks beyond herself, and recognizes the man for what he really is... Ab lag rahe hain done ek due ke vaaste...

Sach men aise log manufacture hona bandh ho gaya hai... ❤️

Achchha was I imagining or did I just find some sneaky glimpses into the Aa Jao thread in this update? Dark chocolate, Mat Jao (a la Aa Jao) in a husky voice... ☺️ Almost expected Adi to barge in with one of his goondas named Saras...

Love!

Edited by an_chau - 8 years ago

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Ishq-high

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Posted: 8 years ago

#335

freaking awesome update❤️

the cute romance and proposal were super adorable and just warmed my heart👍🏼❤️❤️

and the ramu kaka confession was well written👏

i like that you incorporated some injuries from kidnapping...always wondered how he just got away from it feeling fine...but hero hai toh kya kare😆

lovely update

thanks for the pm

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avni01

@avni01

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Posted: 8 years ago

#336

That was an awesome update. Reading this gave me the contentment of the kind of closure I expected grin the show. Thanks orion23 . Felt a lot of peace👏

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#337

Beautifully narrated zoya👏 Such raw emotions...shravans pain, hurt, the betrayal from the 3 most imp ppl of his life...everything was so intense. Im falling short of words now...have always said this, still saying it again..u are Brilliant!! Girl...start writing a novel now!😊👍🏼 Waiting for the final fluff chappi😉 Thanks fr the pm😊

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Tilly718Lilly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#338

Wow! It was amazing! You are awesome. Thanks for making my day. 😃

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

#339

Res

Will unless after coming back from school.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#340

This is amazing...So balanced it was... A perfection...I won't ever find words to describe how much I would have loved to have our forum's writers writing the ending of EDKV...

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