Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 37

Originally posted by: avni01

That was an awesome update. Reading this gave me the contentment of the kind of closure I expected grin the show. Thanks orion23 . Felt a lot of peace👏

Originally posted by: Faith28

Beautifully narrated zoya👏 Such raw emotions...shravans pain, hurt, the betrayal from the 3 most imp ppl of his life...everything was so intense. Im falling short of words now...have always said this, still saying it again..u are Brilliant!!

Thank you so very much hon! Dil se!

Girl...start writing a novel now!😊👍🏼

Thoda zyada nahi ho gaya😆 Thanks though!

Waiting for the final fluff chappi😉

By weekend hopefully!

Thanks fr the pm😊

You're welcome!

Originally posted by: Tilly718Lilly

Wow! It was amazing! You are awesome. Thanks for making my day. 😃

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

This is amazing...So balanced it was... A perfection...I won't ever find words to describe how much I would have loved to have our forum's writers writing the ending of EDKV...

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!

GIVING ME ALL THE FEELS!

Thank you so much Mahi!

You've outdone yourself Zoya

Ooi Ma! Honoured!

*Charan sparsh*

Bas kar de! Charan Sparsh🤣

How I wish it was like this

But no complaints, I love the way it was back then. But I love this too!

You are one in a million.. Cause none of us here were satisfied with what was dished out. Namik was wow and the proposal was fab, baaki sab, chala liya bas😆

Please write more for my inspiration sake 😆😉

Hahaha. Yes Ma'am!

Love & Admiration

Right back at you!

(I hope you know who I am, I need not mention my name)😛😆

You did a fab job at trying to make me forget, but I managed to remember none the less😆

Originally posted by: manisha771

Thanks for the pm Zoya...and what should I say...again a masterpiece...u were right, we should have kept tissues for this...this is beautiful, emotional, awesome etc etc...😊

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Rosh🤗

This is a different level of awesomeness... How do you manage to pen down what I expected all the time...

Pata nahi yaar, I just write what I had expected, turns out we like the same things😆

Ram's coming clean, Niru still being tje woman I hate n still bickering...

I never liked her😃

Pushkar was so cool.

I hated what they did to his character since the PreeKar Wedding!

Sumo was everything I wanted her to be...

At lease in our imagination 😳

Shravan, aahh!! This is the Shravan I fell in love with... The man whose love n pain defined him... The man who could love n forgive the people who destroyed him. This is who Shravan Malhotra is... This line though is epic..

That was him! Agreed!

~~~Ab shadi ke bina khud pe toh chada nahi sakta, toh sar pe hi sahi..."~~~

Hahaha😆

I loved the chapter... It was amazing.. Can I say that I love you... Ok.. I already did... 🤗

Love you too!

Cheers!!

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Zoyaaa!! That was a long part indeed! And must I add, very intense!

Sumo reminiscing all that had gone by in the last decade, her realizing how much she has hurt him, and how he still loved her, was so beautiful!👏

It was what I always wanted to see...

Loved her honest confession to Shravan the next day. It was much needed. And he was ready to wait for her, for eternity.😳Aww! Jaan leke rahega Shravan.

So toh woh lega hi!

So he has finally decided to quit alcohol. That's a good move! Well done Sumo!😆

I hated bewdagiri... He was adorable the first few times, but then he became an alcoholic and I lost my shit😆 Toh chudwa diya!

I love the way the Ramu-Shravan conversation shaped up. It was very intense, and I could literally picture it happening in front of my own eyes. Well done Zoya!👏And his breakdown was so shattering.

Thank you!

Sumo the rebel was pretty convincing in the hospital. And the way she nursed him back to normalcy was very endearing. The last part was mushy and neutralizing. I did need a lot of tissues, like you mentioned!😃

Thankfully you were equipped!

Looking forward to some more, and if possible, would love to see her pouring her heart out to him, about whatever she had in mind in the last ten years.
Are you a mind reader? That is included in the 4th part😛

Thanks for the PM.

You're welcome!

Cheers!

Nuts

Originally posted by: krutish22

Thanks zoya
Such a beautiful piece
Love it
Very well written
Bahot hi emotional tha
Update soon

Originally posted by: Hriju321

Zoya Zoya Zoya !!!

Yes Yes Yes!!

I simply love love love Shravan and the way you have portrayed the progression in Shravan and Suman's relationship. The cerebral hemorrhage and subsequent Sumo's sumoness in dealing with Nirmala and Aditya was ingenious.

I'm glad you found it so!

Ab thoda shaadi, recetion aur suhaag raat😉 ke bare mein bhi likh do na...please...ab show mein toh humlog ko Preekar romance mila...tum saare fandom ki kwaish puri kar do😊

Shaadi, reception, fluff, romance, I promise. SR, I'll insinuate, samjh lena... Mujhe aata nahi waisa sab likhne😆