Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!) - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful ending
absolutely loved it
thank you for writing it
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG this is really wonderful 👏...
Shravan found sumo's letter.. . Shravan finally know tha his father cheated on him by blackmailing sumo...
Drunken sumo is really cute...
Finally sumo spoke her heart out..
Shravan very smartly asked the final Question...
The Seven vows from both very emotional and beautifully written by you 👏...
So after all the difficulty, Shravan and sumo are together Forever...

Love
Smita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally you updated the chapter 😉..
Shravan finally knows that sumo loves him..
Sumo never wanted Shravan to hate his father, she just wants him to know the truth of his Mother to start believing womens again...
Sumo drunk 😃 😉 So much fun...
Shravan and sumo's nok jhok is so much fun..
Their emotional scenes are wonderful...
Shravan being a smart and intelligent Lawyer asked his final Question which has been pending very cleverly..
Vows are beautifully written..
Finally they married the way they wanted. .

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Shrujani
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow .. finally the much awaited update ..
Amazing it was !! Their much awaited talk in their style ..
got to see bewadi Sumo too .. 😉
But was fun to see them like old times ..
Swach Bharat Abhiyan was nice ..

auron k karan bahut time waste kar diya , bhad me jaye duniya .. Shadi Shraman ki hai and it happened in their style .. In front of the auspicious fire ,they took the vows & gave their promises to each other .. That's all matters .. coz world has done enough damage to them & only Them together r there for each other so that's what matters ..

P.S.- I wish if u could try to write an epilogue too ..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww so cute sweet lovely beautiful dear so SHRAMAN like jo bane hai EK DUJE KE VAASTE!


Thank you...please Epilogue!


Love,
Spandana
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow its amazing dear..hehehe drunken sumo great idea..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliant update
Drunk Sumo was so cute😃
Shraman's emotional conversation..Much needed one
Swach Bharat abhiyan wali special shaadi😆..The wedding vows
Beautifully penned
Thanks for the pm😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Yay..update.

Chotu sa tha...bit deep tha.
Poor babies. ..shock pe shock
Please, put them out of their misery.


Thanks a lot for your valueable comment!
Do read the next part!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Chutki🤗

Badki 🤗
So sorry to hear about your grandma .
May her soul rest in peace.
Thanks for your words of condolences. #Gratitude
Coming to the update
Her khatara ambassador should take part in F1 😆
No Doubt
He found the cheque😲 ..Poor guy must be so hurt
He will be for sure. 😒
Illusion? I think she is real .
Maybe!😆 (Read the next chapter to know more😉)
She can't just leave him forever . That would make him miserable .
She knows that .
It will and she knows too!
Awesome chappy 👏 👏
Loved it!!!
Thanks!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Awesome...!!! ❤️

All the 3 chapters are absolutely wonderful...😳

Nanu's death gave me a shock too...!!! 😕

Cant wait to read the next part.. Abhiii... pls try to update soon

Thanks a lot Eva Di!
Waiting for your comment over next part!

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