Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!) - Page 21

Originally posted by: Safire

Dear Abhi,first of all a happy new year to you!!

Sorry for commenting late...

This update was simply superb!!!!

The way you have penned the chapter shows what a brilliant writer you are!!!!

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

awesome update abhi..
sumo and her khatara leave shra behind..lol..
he found the cheque and she left..
interesting..continue soon..
thnx for pm..

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

Awesome!

Thanks!

The first part was rather hilariously done! But it got pretty emotional by the end. Good going!😃

Waiting to read next,

Thanks again for your valuable review!😃 The next part is already up and the PM is sent too. Please review!

- I Hope You Remember Me

See, I have two options - a) Get angry on you for writing this line. or b) To be calm.

I will go with second one now but a lot has happened you know!

1.) Everyone in this world has started calling me Cupcake! (I don't have any problem with them calling me Cupcake, until you have one, cause it's your right!)

2.)You have started calling me Abhi, instead of Cupcake. (I do have a problem with it😡)

I solemnly swear I will be upto no good if you write this line again anywhere addressing to me .

(I am quite hurt)

Originally posted by: Sonai_02

It's awesomeee dear 🤗

Just loved it !!

U know if edkv continued with the track u've got...it would have been much more better. So as I said before...tumne edkv ke direcor se bhi achhi story bana di he !!

And I think this is not illusion ...maybe...it's really Sumo. After all she loves him...so she'll not leave him so easily.

But no idea u know. Only u know the story...so the answer is with u.

Post asap dear !!!

Loads of love ❤️

Originally posted by: beasmukherjee

Posted after ages 😭 but anyway it was an awesome update dear.
Glad to know if its illusion or real. I think its real Sumo.
But plz update soon from now onwards if possible 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Res
Hi abhilasha that lovely update



Eagerly waiting for ur update
Shravan is so in tension while driving
When he gets sumo msg
I was like ki sumo kuch ulta sidha na karle
Par lol hoh gaya 😆
But when he reaches the sumo ...
Finally found his sumo
Drunk sumo is always cute
And the way she was talking ...
Loved the shraman conversation
Also getting emotional
But loved the end
When he proposed her
And sumo said deal crack kar rahe hoh ...found this one hilarious
And you ended in different style
They start their beginning where they have ended 12 years ago
So symbolic buddy
And their vows ...so beautifully penned down
Loved the dialogue
And great update



Eagerly waiting for ur next work abhilasha dear
Luv ya
Tina

😛

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Reading all the three parts...than I hv to res!😳

Will come bk soon.!

Originally posted by: Sonai_02

It's amazing Abhilasha !!!

I'm really in tears reading their adorable bond.

Drunk Suman...now Shravan is looking after her condition.

The way they proposed was also very beautiful !!

The marriage and the promises...I'm really out of words.

In totla...the whole TS was fantabulous !!

U r a fab writer dear !!

Love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: bworm

Thank you...this was beautifully done.👏

Originally posted by: beasmukherjee

Splendid chapter 😉
Sumo got drunk and Shravan being her knight in shining armour was protecting her 😊
Their marriage was unique and superb.
Swach Bharat lol 😆
Take care
Love ya ❤️