Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!)

Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: shaggy8
Read all the parts in one go, amazing, beautifully pinned. Looking forward for the next update

Thanks a lot.

Have update the next part and will wait for your response. Hope you have received the PM.

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Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Excellent,fantastic,marvelous and whatnot!

All words fall short while appreciating your story...

The last chapter was very emotional one...

Hats off to you once again.

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

So I have like guests coming over for dinner in a while, a lot of preparation pending, but couldn't resist commenting here first.

So good things come to those who wait and better things come to those who are patient, and since we waited patiently for you we got the best update😃

I loved this update for two things a) the writing style and b) the freshness of the concept.

A drunk Sumo, hurt and pained and a equally agonised Shravan coming out of their misery with that beautifully organised marriage and their heartfelt vows , kudos to you Abhilasha for thinking and executing this brilliant end.

After all that I wrote, I guess it goes without saying how much I loved it. Brilliant 👏

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Safire
Dear Abhi,sorry for mounting pressure on you😲 But,. With much less activity on the forum,reading all of you guys stories is the only solace!!! So please update soon!!!!

It's all fine mam!

Actually it's what that keeps reminding me that I have to write it.

Have update the last part and is waiting for your response.

Edited: Just saw your comment, will reply to that soon!

Edited by --Epithymia-- - 8 years ago

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

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Unress
This was the perfect end to the first day of the new year.
And you will never leave this habit of yours to leave the update at a cliff hanger. Or will you?
Next time pls update sooner
Regards
Arpita

Behena dekhon apna PM Inbox.

Last part ka PM bejh diya!

Will be waiting for your comment

And this time it ended with a peaceful note.

So, do comment

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: vimikrao
So our Shravan Kumar came out of his father's clutch...😲 & started to think after seeing blank check & his London returned mind started to work...😉 Who was standing behind him Sumo or he is just imagining her... 😕
Thank you for PM... 👏

Continue soon...

Vinu

@Bold : You will know in last part.

Will be waiting for your response.

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

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