Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!)

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
awesome update
too good
continue soon
superb

Thanks a lot for your kind words!😃

Hope you have received the PM.

Will be waiting for your valuable comment!

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res

Originally posted by: Nik03
Ressi res 😳

Will wait for you to UnRes!

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Awesome update...Hope this is not an illusion..
Plz continue soon

Thanks a lot again!

You will get you answer in last part 😉

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Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Will wait for you to UnRes!

Oopsii!!
Maine phle bhi unres nahi kiya?...Sooo sorry dear 😕
Will do as soon as I can...After reading all three parts !!
Sorry again

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Haye abhi kya likha hai I mean this is my fav TS I was eagerly waiting from last 2 and half month around for you next update and today you made my day dear🤗

You know you are one of the best writers here 😃

You have started with one promise which sumo made to part away from him once nanu will leave and ended with the another promise to live together till eternity this is the first thing have read today and it made me cry and laugh at same time thank you so much a ton for such a amazing lovely update😊👏

Their convo was bliss❤️

Shravan was a ⭐️

Swachh bharat abhiyan man you really used it in the perfectly🤣

And the 7 promises they did to each other was emotional and full with sheer love and respect to each other👍🏼

I can't even stop me to read it twice before giving comment dear 👏

Ye to expectation ke super se bhi upar wala update tha I mean nailed it not a single stone you left to touch my heart

Thanks a lot for pm dear

Love you ❤️

Priti

Edited by priety.priti - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

It was good ending.. 😛

Sumo was drunk, she was watching Shravan since 6 months drinking.
Shravan's confession was most awaited one..
swach Bharat abhiyan.. 😆
Their 7 vowes of wedding its special in their own way..
Totally worth waiting TS.. 👏

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Nik03

Oopsii!!
Maine phle bhi unres nahi kiya?...Sooo sorry dear 😕
Will do as soon as I can...After reading all three parts !!
Sorry again

It's Fine!

I am the same too! Even I forget about UnRessing at time. It happens with everyone.😳

Take your time!😉

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Awesome update...Hope this is not an illusion..
Plz continue soon

Thanks a lot!

Do read the last part to know more!

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Abhilasha Malhotra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: anonymousanju
abhi thanks for the pm dear :) n wish u a very happy new year :)

finally ur back.. I thought you've forgotten that you're writing an TS sweety but u came back n thank God you came :)

the rapid fire of questions he was playing with himself n his sumo was driving as if she's participated in some car racing..

Delhi traffic is hell .. no matter what, it always remains the same :-/

the flashback was amazing.. finally he found out the reason why sumo didn't appear at cafe that day when he was going to confess. ...

the check n the message was heart breaking n touching..

really father's. are the one who makes you stand when you fall, but here ramu was the one who pushed him to fall n tore apart..

n yeah finally pri opened up her mouth.. better late than never ...true..

n when shravu after searching for her everywhere, entered to school remembering all past moments, believe me girl you just nailed it.. that part was the one I loved the most..

n yeah sometimes the sun doesn't come up but I don't want this here..please I sumo in real saying don't hate ramu ..don't want it to be an illusion of shravu.. it's a request pls (puppy face)

waiting for next part.. pls update soon dear.. loved this one :)