Something Wonderful - ShraMan FF (Chapter10 - 23 Feb)

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My 2nd fan fiction
which I wrote for my FB page long ago.
posting here😳
Hope you'll like😃
Its about ShraMan arranged marriage.

-Index-
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
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Chapter-1


In Delhi city, here lives Tiwari family. They are simple sweet & religious. Their morning stars with aarti, a family that eats together. Their kids are very obedient of elders. Mr. Tiwari was a lawayer in profession. He lives with his daughter, son, daughter in law, son in law & grand childrens.

Suman, his late daughter's only daughter lives with them also. She is very much sweet, polite girl. She loves her family very much. She is a medical student of final year. She is jolly & so much brilliant student. She loves to paint.


Morning.
Tiwari family members get up form sleep listening to a sweet voice of bhajan.its Suman, doing aarti & singing. Her family join her.

She gives prasad to everyone. Daboo is baby of the house, Suman's little cousin brother. He is standing sleepy. Suman smiles & gives him one extra ladoo. He gets happy & looks up. Suman takes elder's blessings as its her convocation day. Daboo wishes her luck. He brings sweet for her as lucky charm. She hugs this little cutey.

She comes out of the house, waits for transport.
She sees a man is buying a lots of ice cream, though she doesn't see his face properly as he's so far away. She gets interested to see what he does next. She sees he's giving all those ice creams to a group of school going kids. She smiles. He leaves with own car. Suman sighs, she gets a transport & leaves for college.


Shravan gets a call from home. Its his aunt. He picks the call.

: Yes chachi!
: Shravan! where are u!? Did u forget u have to go a college's convocation?
: nope. I didn't. I'm going there.
: Good. Please don't be late. Your dad will be angry.
: Chachi, No Matter I reach early or late he'll be angry on me for sure. Its obvious.
: Hahaha okay. And remember, Her name is Suman Tiwari.
: Yeah of course.
: & of course get some flowers for her! (Vandy yells from aside)
: Hmm okay!

Shravan cuts the call. He stops his car in front of a medical college. He parks the car & goes to a nearby shop to buy flowers. Suman sees his car & recognizes as the same boy's car who bought ice creams for kids. She smiles.

Shravan buys flowers & is about to get into college gate, he collides with Suman. Flowers fall from his hands.

: I'm so sorry! Its my fault.
: its alright!
: no. Its not. Let me buy some flowers for you.
: No no. It doesn't nee...

Before Shravan could complete, Suman rushes to flower shop. Shravan smiles arching brow.

: She's strange.

Suman gets the flowers from shop & turns back, but can't find Shravan. She gets confused. She goes inside with flowers.


Anchor pronounces Suman's name as she got honours marks. Shravan, who's sitting on special guest's row, gets interested hearing her name. But at that moment he gets a call from his office. He goes outside the hall room as its so much crowd & noise inside. Suman gets her certificate. She thanks God, her late parents, her family & nanu for supporting her to achieve this goal.

Shravan gets into hall room but till then Suman gets down from stage. He missed the chance to see her. He tries to trace about her asking students and authority but couldn't find her as its a large crowd.

Ceremony ends. Everyone is leaving. Suman comes outside to take autorickshaw. But she couldn't find as its too late hour. Shravan comes there & asks if she need help. She refuses. She can't find the flowers with her that the bought to return him. She apologises again. He laughs & leaves.

Suman returns at home. Everyone is eagerly waiting for her. She gets inside & its dark everywhere inside the house. She worries. Suddenly light turns on. all family members welcome her saying congregations. She gets happy. All come forward to congratulate her. Daboo gives her flowers. She smiles.

Nanu tells her about the alliance. Masi teases her. Suman blushes.

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Malhotra's mansion.
Family members have sit to eat dinner.

Ramnath Malhotra says tomorrow they all will go to Tiwari mansion to finalize the alliance. Pushkar, Shravan's cousin brother smiles at him. Shravan arches brow with annoyance but can't protest.

At night.
Shravan is restless in his room. Kamini comes there.

: Chachi! Glad you're here. now you save me..how'll I face this trouble tomorrow.
: what trouble?
: papa wants me to get marry!! Isn't it trouble enough to mention?
: not at all.
: Are you serious?
: yes. You're enough matured. You think, isn't it the acurate age to get married?
: but I don't want. How can I...

Kamini gets it all. Shravan must be thinking about his parents' broken marriage.

: Beta, some people are destined to be together. No matter what happens, they're remain together forever.
: How'll I know that she's the one for me? I don't know anything about her except her name!
: then know her, you're going to meet her tomorrow.
: but what if we can't love each other?
: Thats not possible! None can resist loving you. She's bound to fall for you! And as far I heared, Suman is a very good girl, exactly perfect for you! You'll like her I am sure!
: lets see!!

Kamini laughs & leaves.

Shravan switches the light off.
His POV- Seriously!? Doesn't it sound funny? Two families will bring two completely strangers and they're bound to like each other. What kind of nonsense is this? What if I don't like her or she doesn't and marriage happens. We have to stay together without consent? Dad & mum's marriage didn't work, will it happen to me also?

He falls asleep worrying.

Suman looks out of the window.
Her POV - Doesn't the moon is shinning more than any other days? Or I'm thinking so much? Why does it feel different? I mean I never thought about any boy in my life, always remained busy with study, my aim, my ambition. Then what happened today? Am I happy that I'm going to be someone's? Just like my dad & mom, will I fall for him after our marriage?

She falls asleep with a smile.


Morning,

At Malhotra mansion.
Kamini comes to wake Shravan up. She says him to get ready to go Tiwari mention. He sighs.



At Tiwari mansion.
Family members are preparing to welcome Malhotra family. All are busy. Suman is alone at her room. She is tensed. Mamaji comes there to bless her. He sees her tension & asks what happened. Suman says nothing.


Malhotra family arrives. Tiwaris welcome them.
Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 8 years ago
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Zoya 😆
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Wow!! This OS gives me barjatya's movies feels
Sweet simple joint family , arranged marriage 😳
Suman is a medico 😃
Its so gud to see kamini as a motherly figure to shravan
Lovely start 👏
Cant wait to read the next part.
You know i am singing milan abhi adha adhura hai after reading this
Update soonish janeman ❤️
Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Prii🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice sadia...!! 😊
Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: EDKV_Ciara

Nice sadia...!! 😊
Update soon!

Thanks haan! will update tomorrow😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes I already read it on your fb page
It's name was Agar tum saath ho
Anyway it is superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. It is so nice getting inquisitive to know what will be their reaction after seeing each other. Pliz pliz do continue
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Bahut kam mauke milte hain mujhe aise 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow
sounds awesome
cannot wait to read more
continue soon
superb

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