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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Fari21
Oh Oh Me First... Yay...
It was flawlessly Stupendous! loved the update! gah beautifully penned dude! Just loved every single bit of it! and the song <3 Its meh fav... ThankYou For This Amazing Update.

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Beautiful it was! just loved the way you write...continue soon pls..👏👏

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Amazing yaar ritu...👏
KAUN TUJHE...❤️apt choice yaar...mera fav song..😳
Loved it dea...😊

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Hi Ritu,
Lovely update, I was waiting for this, so finally they're in Goa for Honeymoon. Shravan is such a doting husband. You write really well. Waiting to read more special moments between ShraMan.😉😊

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Chapter 9

They reach at their hotel room late night after dinner. Suman's cheek is still forming crimson red shade due to shyness, still thinking about their unforgettable moment. She starts to remove her necklace to avoid meeting Shravan's gaze. He notices. He reaches near her, lightly touching her arm.

: wifey, its adorable how you blush when we get close but its obvious such moments gonna take place as its our h-o-n-e-y-m-o-o-n.

Her heart starts beating fast when he whispers in her ear and then kissing her earlobe. She sighs closing eyes. He smirks & goes inside the bathroom, leaving a spellbound Suman behind.

~~~

After shower.
Shravan wears a loose gray t-shirt & with black sweatpant. He sets his hair with brush while he hears Suman getting hiccups. He turns back to her, she smiles and blinks. He smiles back & turns to mirror again then realisation hits his mind, he turns back to her again.

: Suman! Whats in your hand?
: Oh thats "Dreamsicle Moonshine", very tasty.
: What!!
: Oh, don't shout, hubby! - she squeezes her head.
: its so tasty! I had 6 glasses.
: Crap! But I have not ordered that!

Shravan notices a card on the table.
"To Mr. & Mrs. Malhotra,
Happy Honeymoon!" - written beautifully.

: Thats from the hotel owner. God! Papa's so damn grateful client. But why the heck they sent 6 whole glasses - he murmurs.
: Silly, they sent 2 glasses. One for me and one for you. But I liked it soo much *hiccc* then I ordered more. I order 4 more - she says proudly.
: So you drunk 5 glasses?
: Oho! Your Math! Silly, I drunk your one too! *Hiccc* 1+1+4 = 6, Got it, Mr. Hottie?
: God! She's drunk already.

She roams around happily. to their room. She is unable to walk properly, so he holds her by waist to support.

: Mmm I am so happy!
: Thats good.
: How rude! Won't you ask why I am happy?
: Yeah of course. Why so?
: Because, I got the most gorgeous man who's mine only.

He chuckles.
She opens her bag and takes a red saree from it. She starts undressing herself. He immediately shuts his eyes & turns back. She wears the sare.

: How rude! I wore this red hot saree and you're not even looking at me! - she pouts & says in a childish tone intoxicated with alcohol.

Shravan turns back & gets mesmerized by her beauty. She comes closer to him, but struggles to reach his height, she looks around for a stool. He is confused. She gets a stool & keeps it in front of him. She stands on the stool. She is about to fall losing balance but his strong grip holds her. She keeps her hands around his neck. He holds her waist. They have an eyelock.

: I am happy because you're so good.

She hugs him. He gets stunned. She breaks the hug.

: And you're always there for me! And you'll get a prize!
: And whats that? - he chuckles.

She kisses on his forehead making him awestruck.

: This one is for helping me to wear the saree that day!
: But I could because Vandy bhabi gave instructions.
: oho! Point to be noted..Bhabi helped actually. Kissie withdrawed.

She places her hand on his forehead & wipes it. He laughs out. She kisses on his nose.

: This one is for the soup, when I fallen sick.
He laughs recalling the taste of the soup.
: But that didn't taste good..
: Yup! But it was full of your love & care. But it was salty, Mmm..kissie withdrawed.
She wipes his nose.

: last but not the least. This one is for making me a part of such wonderful family.

They have an eyelock. She leans on near his lips & pouts. He smiles at her cuteness. But she falls on his chest as she's feeling sleepy.

: How rude! - He pouts with a smile.

He lifts her in bridal style & makes her lay on the bed. He puts duvet over her. He is about to leave but she holds his hand. She gets up & gives a cute smile looking at his face.

: One more "Dreamsicle Moonshine" please..

She tells & falls asleep again. He chuckles.

: I hope you remember this, wifey!

~~~

Next morning, Suman wakes up & feels extreme headache. She squeezes her head in pain. Shravan comes with a cup of coffee & breakfast.

: Good morning!
: Ouch! Headache..
: yeah I know! Hangover! Drink it.
: Ok. Wait..what!!??
: Dreamsicle Moonshine..remember?
: Whats that?
: Forget it and drink the coffee. And hurry up! We are going to visit the place!

Thats it for now!

Edited by Sadia.Ritu - 9 years ago