Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 99

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zoyi yr am speechless..

Ranju 🤗 Ji accha laga yeh jaan ke 😆

kya likha hai koi alfaaz hi nhi hai mere paas yr...👏

Yeyyy

exceptionally brilliant...👏

Thanksie!

each bit is amazing..👏

Shukriya...

every part every shyari is beyond words yr..👏

Sigh😳

kaise praise karu samjh hi nhi aa rha... i will say beyond words, exceptional OS

Aur mai kaise reply karoon woh mere samjh nahi aa raha

love it to the core...😳

I'm glad you did!

fabulous amazing awesome fantastic marvelous brilliant sab kuch...muah🤗

Aww man!

lots of love and hugs

Right back at you!

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Api 🤗

Zenab 🤗

It's so good to see you hon!
So finally today I read this masterpeice

Aww man!
I'm truely speechless

Glad to put you in that predicament!
And I totally agree that Urdu language does justice to feeling

Haina!
Your works are just brilliant

Shukriya!
And You have described love beautifully
Yeyy!

Love is visible by action not by expressions.
It is penned so beautifully that anyone will wish to fall in love ❤️
Arey yaa😳

Claps for this amazing peice 👏
Thanks hon!
Love
Zainab

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Zoyaaa!

Mrinaaa🤗

I absolutely loved all the 4 shots I'd missed. Finally took out the time to sit and check my PMs! 😆

And I'm obliged you did!!!

Fantastic work as usual. 👏

Thanks hon!

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Safire

Just brilliant writing!!

I'm sad I don't have any more words to express my appreciation...

Originally posted by: Nik03

Woh kare baat toh har lafz se khushboo aaye,
Aisi boli wohi bole jise Urdu aaye. -Poet Ahmed Wasi-
😊

Originally posted by: Akriti12

Hey Zoya...Hiii😊

Akriti 🤗

So good to see you buddy!!!

As I have said several times that Mr. & Mrs.Malhotra series is my favourite one..But yaar this one is something else..its very very beautiful..totally mesmerizing..marvellous and flowery..👏

whole write-up seemed so lyrical...

That's what I was going for...

If that's what you felt then mission accomplished 😳

well done dear..👏

Thanks hon!!!

loved the concept and whole presentation of story..😊

I'm glad...

commenting here after ages..😭

I know!!! I'm so happy you are back!

had to read your new ff also..😭

It's not going anywhere... Take your time😃

Thank you Zoya for these beautiful writings..😊

Pleasure is all mine!

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thank you so much Nik!

Love and hugs back at you 😃

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

When I read something romantic, which has

no misery in it, but still I want cry - that is the kind of work I know has

touched my heart.

Aww man!

Now you see why I was awaiting your response on this...

Cause when the very first statement of a comment has you giddy with happiness, you know that reviewer matters a lot!

And yours has, my dear Zoya, stabbed in the middle of my heart

and ripped it open with every single word! ❤️

I will take your ripped heart as a compliment

Such is the beauty.

I'm so glad you liked it!!!

I'm truly satisfied, I must tell you, with your this piece of work especially.

The expression, the details, the feelings... this is what I was asking from you.

And I've got it. 🤗

This level of detailing takes time, and hence I don't do it more often...

But I guess I should...😳

It had flow, it had beauty, it had emotions along with every single action.

And the Urdu poetry after each scene made it exquisite.

(Thanks for the English translation, I got to learn some more words Urdu today)

😳

Urdu poetry was something I truly believed I could never do, but I guess a bit of practice and I should be able to get there...😛

And I'm glad you appreciated the amateur try😳

Shravan was love here. And it was really adorable how

he was everywhere whenever she was in trouble.

He's her biggest champion.

Oh yes he is!

There was not a single place which felt out of the place.

And I need to again praise about the entire layout of the shot.👏

Thank you so very much Lara 🤗

I mean the images you added, how you separated and lined up the scenes along with the dialogues.

It was all synchronized perfectly.

Hats off to you!👏👏

Shukriya!!!

Now, you've left me feeling greedy for more, Zoya.

And I want to read more works from you which are just as Sentinel.

Well, I will see what I can do😉

Keep creating more of such magic.

Absolutely...

Lots of love,

Lara.