Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 97

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

so beautiful and romantic

absolutely loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Faith28

OMG!!! This was BRILLIANT!!👏 Im too falling short of words like sumo now😳Loved the shayari style of sumos pov... Just BEAUTIFUL❤️ You're a STAR⭐️

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Wow Zoya,
Anuradha 🤗
u left me utterly spellbound...I really hv no words to describe what I feel at reading this piece...just like Suman cannot voice d depth of her love...u r a master at ur work...this piece was worth d wait...just fantastic, too good...
Aww man.. Thank you so very much!

You are among the few that I respect a lot and so coming from you this means a lot to me ❤️
I agree with u...always saying "I love u" sometimes seems fantasy...every married couple or 2 ppl in a relationship shud follow ur advice...
Haye! Itni badi baat itni aasani se bol di!😳
I m not a fan of long reviews n commenting on every line of what u hv written...but d feeling that I get on reading ur works is just pure bliss...what else do I say...Thank You
And what else can I say than acknowledge how grateful I am
rgds

Anuradha

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res

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Unres

Zoyi 🤗

Reshu 🤗

I m extremely sorry for being so late. Par ab toh tujhe v aadat ho hi gyi hogi.

Iss baar maine tera record break kia hai...

Itna late life mai kabhi reply nahi kia, sangat ka asar ho ra I think🤔

Coming to ur update.

This is pure bliss.

Haina!!!

A piece that I would consider anyone not reading as their misfortune. It makes me feel good. So happy that I cried.

Haw! Really!!!?? My gosh! I'm happy to have made you cry cause if my writing can evoke that in you, it's something...

U defined love with what it should be defined with. The little things that are generally ignored. It's these moments that define it. Subtle but deep.

I'm not being narcissistic but, much like me😆

I simply have no words to describe how much I loved it. Wish u could have seen me while I was reading this. U would have known.

Well, that would indeed have been a treat...

This was so beautiful that only a person like u can write this.

Haye, le ❤️ le!

This has to come from a beautiful heart like urs. It defines u and ur thoughts. My love and respect for u as a writer and a human being has increased many fold after reading this.

Resh bas kar ja, chest pride se swell ho ra🥳

It can make anyone who don't believe or have been betrayed in love a sense of believe and retrospection that can give a whole new meaning to their being.

It's that impactful? OMG!

And the couplets... I don't even think I deserve to review them.

Of course you do! You know why? Cause Prii happened to casually mention how much be love meant to you and what poetry is to you. I wrote this for you, cause I'm not that into poetry or shayari, but you are! A companion piece you did deserve, I thought.. It took me a month to get this right and I'm beyond happy that you liked it so!

U were so right that when I will read them with the context, it will give much more meaning to them. And it sure did.

I'm glad you agree!

I m so proud to be ur friend.

It's mutual love!

I loved it and I love u.

I love you more!

Thank u for writing this. Really really thank u.

Pleasure is all mine!

Originally posted by: bworm

Beautiful.

Don't have words to describe how I feel.

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece and sharing it.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya

amazing...!!!

Anu🤗
Spellbounding di...*claps*kaise likh lete ho aap itna aacha...now I am developing a girlcrush on you...*shy*

Thank you so much hon! And girl crush surprised to know you are not the first 😆
Shayari...hats off to you...the last para was the bestest...!!!!

Aww yey! Thanks!!!
Sorry zyada lamba nahi likh sakti...typing from a Baba aaadam ke zamane ka phone aur upar se kal meri entrance xam hai...

That's alright, aap aaye, bohit hai😛
Loved this piece and waana have more from you...!!

Hopefully soon!!

Originally posted by: imshveta

Simply beautiful 🤗
Thank you sweets! 🤗
The character of Suman as we know, was one who always craved to belong to someone.
It absolutely did...
This right here is her dream come true. There is someone to whom she belongs and someone who totally and completely belongs to her.

Happy that you liked it so...

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Just one word. Speechless! 👏

Originally posted by: Shahprincess99

Zoya dii

Hey there Shah!!!
I want to thank Allah a infinite times for Creating u dii

Aww man! That's the sweetest thing I've ever been told 😳

I still can't believe dii how do u write these

I honestly don't know...
Beautiful words.dil mein Hamesha yeh khwaish rahegi app
Se mulaakaat ki ranbeer,namik,Armaan
These r my fav most people I want to meet
Someday and even if I may not meet them but I seriously want to
Meet u di.

Alee... Sweet you are ya! It would be really nice to meet you too😃

u not only make a person with just name come into Life but also make me love u even more without Even knowing u in person.

Well it's got to do with how you are as a person too, capable of loving without knowing, it's a very rare trait😛

I don't know why but there is something special in the way you play with words that make me love you even more.i am not able to quote even single words Of it because it way beyond my comprehension . I just can't say which word I like Everything was ... just no words di.thank god ki yesterday night I didn't Read this or else I would have entered shraman world.

Hahaha you're funny! But what's so bad about dreaming of them haan? 😉

i am really sorry di I can't Give u any of my views about it that's just the most precious writing
From the best person I ever met till now .

Oho.. Bas kar de ab... If I blush anymore I'd be mistaken for a cherry!

di app ki explanations I even love Them even more dii both at start and end.u make us go crazy about ur Update but I don't know how do I get the patience to complete it
Before jumping on to the update .please keep showering us with ur best
And ample of words from ur creative dictionary.

I shall try my best!😛

I may delay reply to any story
But not yours Because they are unstoppable feeling after reading it.

Aww man! Thank you, that's a huge compliment!
Love u Zoya di (aka queen of Urdu vocabulary )

Aww... You really do like flattering me!
LOADS Of LOVE
Princess

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

To other couples, silence in the relationship meant that the relationship had lost it's charm or the respective partners didn't get along. With them, silence as well, spoke really they don't have to talk to each other to understand what other person is thinking, they can understand each other even with out talking...

Soulmates indeed!
Shravan's presence of mind help them from accident and Shravan's instant reaction was to check whether sumo is ok or not..
Shravan as always very caring person saving her from heat..

Shravan's heart is a very rare find, People like him are on the verge of extinction...
Sumo starting to understand Shravan more and more, start knowing different layer of Mr Shravan Malhotra..sumo is right that Shravan might not say I love you by his words but by his actions he shows how much he loves her. .

Haina!!!!
Sumo's jaan is "Nakhreeli" according to Shravan 😃 Obviously itne nakhre dikhati hai ke sumo ko taang kar ki rakhi hai sumo ki jaan ne..

Oh jaan ka toh kaam hi hota hai tang karna😉
How beautifully you explained rose and throne part, how Shravan is sumo's throne who will save her from all difficulties, kudos to you for that line 👏

Thank you so very much!
Wonderful Hindi and English poetry 👏

I'm glad you appreciated it!
Zoya, this is another marvellous piece from you 👏
Aww yey Shukriya!
Love
Shrujani