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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Zoya ❤️🤗 Beautiful ..

Thank you so very much Aditya!!!!😛
I just love these pieces depicting true definition of love that continues life long & not on certain occasions where sm1 is performing their vows in each gesture each day .. That's the best I love U ..
I know right! I'm glad so many of you agree with me on this...
The intensity of love is truly seen in things world neglects but the one who's your love & for whom u r life puts them above all,without a word u saying he understands all; he's always there to save u from the world .. Such was the intensity of Shravan's love & indeed its difficult to express gratitude for Sumo in words .. Coz smtimes words don't do justice to ur feelings ..
So very well put! You summed it all!!
but the way u brought out all those beautiful moments complemented with prose;u stole my heart .. there are times when u read smtg & there's a smile on ur face without thinking .. This is one such piece ..
Aww man! And that's all I ever want, to bring a smile to someone's face 😳

@Bold Thank you so very much!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sptrno

Spandana🤗
Awww THIS IS SOOO BEAUTIFULLL WILL BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT (sorry for the caps but I had to) hun...
I'm so used to seeing CAPs from you that if you do miss out on them in a comment I feel you didn't like the piece 😆
So thank you!
Hats off to you love for always coming up with such Unique Lovely Amazing Concepts & Shayari haiyeee itni Khoobsurat ki ab lafz hee nahi hai uski tareef karne ke liye!
Ji nawaszish ke liye aapka Shukriya!!
Btw thanks a lot for translations as well because I do understand Urdu a bit but your translations really helped to understand the depth of your writings hun...
I figured those would be helpful, I'm glad they were...
Thank you so much...Once again hugsss baby!!
Pleasure is all mine hon!
Hugs back!!

Love,
Spandana

@Bold Thanks a ton Spandana!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Arpiii🤗
Zo di!! kya bolun you got me tongue tied which actually never happens, yunhi nahi sab hume chatter box bulate😛
Well then, praise the Lord for I have achieved the unthinkable 😆


Aww man... Thank you!
and you've excelled in that attitude too👏
Blushes...
but then...

Ji Shukriya aapka!
the short quotes/ poems that you wrote 👏...i definitely need some hindi tutions from you 😆
out of all of them my favourite was
Hindi😆 Urdu hon😳
tum poochte ho mujhse,
tumhaari kaunsi baat par mujhe pyaar aata hai
kya kahoon tumse?
ke tumhaari kaunsi baat par mujhe pyaar nahi aata?
I love it too!
does this come naturally to you...excelling in stuff😛
It's a honed talent 😆

god Sumo is sooo lucky...
he loves her soo much😃
She is isn't she!
he doesn't chant that he loves her, every walking moment of the day ...he shows her
after alll...

Word!!! Apt Image you found...
love yaa Zo di🤗
Love ya too🤗
for bringing up such amazing stuff...and promise that you'll continue😛
I will try my very best!
and before i forget sorry i haven't unressed on the mayassar chapter yet, lekin maine padh liya😃...so hoping that i'll do it before i forget 😛...right now i'm really hungry going to get some lunch😆
Hahaha.. just don't keep me waiting too long!
untill next time
Yup!
love
arpita

@Bold Thank you so very much Arpita!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Zoya aap itna beautiful likhte hai ki I don't know what to say.. You are writing with so much maturity that I am absolutely speech less. . You are too good 👏..

Thank you so very much Smita!
You guys always speak so well of my works...😳
Still will try to share my thoughts about the story..
By all means, please do...
How much depth really is in their relationship that even with out saying a single word they can understand each other, can feel each other's pain, happiness, sorrow, everything.. That's probably why they are soulmates. ..
I'd rephrase that, the depth in their relationship makes them soulmates😃
Shravan's first reaction was to see whether sumo is right or not with out caring about himself due to which sumo's love for Shravan increasing day by day. .
Shravan's care for sumo is just ❤️
Dil le liya types, haina!
Sumo's ambassdor is surely very "Nakhreeli" jab dekho kharap ho jati hai 😃
Jaan jo hai... Nakhre dikhayegi...
She always expected a storm after calm. But the calm was only followed by gentle breezes of warmth and mirth
Sumo's fear is justified considering their dreadful past but things have changed for Mrs and Mr Malhotra..
I know right...
Can't really say anything how you beautifully explained Shravan and sumo's relationship by roses and thrones 👏
It just felt right...
Absolutely beautiful poetry 👏
Thanks!
Thanks for pm
Pleasure!
Love
Smita

@Bold Thanks a ton Smita!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Oh Zoya.. im speechless.. will come back later to comment more.. need some time to settle all these emotions.. you are a gifted writer ,dear..

Is two months enough time to get over it😆
I'm kidding..
Thank you so very much Nivrithi!!
You are really sweet!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Joyness

Zoya your poetry awesome loved it

Thank you Jyoti!!!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Surbhi20

Best shayri i have heard of...Never posted a comment but ur writing compelled me...Loved it

Aww man!
Phir toh pehle welcome to the forum!
And I'm glad you came around!
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

zoyi beautiful piece specially all the shyaris 👏 loved it to the core of my heart dear❤️

Thank you so very much Priety!!!
I'm glad you enjoyed it...
you are really very mature as a writer 👏
Thank you so very much...

@Bold Shukriya 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03


😆
Ok ...Agar aap kehte ho to 😉 😆
Achha!!! As if mai na kehti toh tu nahi likhti na😆
P.S Agar maine itna sa likha to meri saans atak jaayegi na 😆

Woh mujhe pata hai!
Waise meri shwaas pranaali mein kuch gadbad nahi hai Zoya?...Kuch na kuch hota hi rehta hai 😆
LMAO! Shwaas pranaali 🤣
Will be back sooonnn...N this time real waala soon. 😆
Tu toh aa gayi time se, maine delay kar diya bohot 😆

@Bold
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Zealous si Zoya... 🤗

Nik 🤗
Take a biggg beary 🤗 for writing Sumo's prospective. Now it feels complete. 😊
Hugs back!!! Haina!😃
Now Isse phle ki main upii par aau, phle ye bataao ke iraada kya hai bhai??
Irada toh nek hi tha😆
Matlab Kuch bhi likhwa lo tumse...Koi to genre chod do yaar 😉
Lol... I'm exploring my potential😆
Emotional ones-Zoya
Light hearted ones-Zoya
Shayari-Zoya
Dialogue delivery-Zoya
Comic ones-Zoya
Deep emotional ones-Zoya...Matlab hadd hai ya!!
Na likhoon? Bol de, nahi likhenge 😆
Koi har genre mein itna mind blowing kaise likh sakta hai????
You'd be surprised to know, not many think like that😆
I don't read around here a lot, but it seems there are much better writers 😛
To be honest honest n honest...I feel honoured to be a reader of yours Zoya.
Aww man... Thanks hon!
Take a bow or hats off are not enough for you...You deserve much more respect. ⭐️
This means a lot to me Nik, really...
Love you buddy n Love your writeups...❤️
I'm honored...

Ok Ok!!...I know I should go to upii now!!😆
So...Finally Coming to upii 😛
Sumo's view...I read at start n jumped in excitement. 😉
Hahaha...
Silence...A mere word...Means no sound.
But I believe , Silence is the most expressive language.It says much more than words can ever say.
Silence and crying are two ways in which our body speaks when our mouth fails to express the hurt and happiness we feel...!!
Well said 👏
N for ShraMan, Silence means contentment, Solace, Comfort.!!
It does!
Beautifully captured the Car scene.
His first instinct was to held her, safeguard her.He was a wall btw her and danger...This is Shravan.That true Shravan.Here when it comes to Sumo, he can go beyond imaginations for her safety.
I know right, the man epitomizes love...
That Free-Verse Poetry you had written Zoya...Oh My My!!
Shukriya...
Loveeed them to the core.
Urdu...Indeed a perfect language to express emotions.N thanks to you, am learning so much.
I;'m glad you are!
Soulmate...The one who knows you inside out, accept you as you are, love you unconditionally , supports you, trust you, be loyal to you n be your wings so that you can fly as much as you want n as long as you want.
N ShraMan are true soulmates of each other in every way.
WORD!!!!!
Sumo admiring Shravan...The inner Shravan.
It's impossible to not fall in love with him...
Oh!The Soul of Shravan.❤️
The most innocent, loving , caring soul.
The soul that only belongs to you Sumo n yours to him.!!
Haye... So true!
Sumo's sun...
Sooo loved how you penned down it ya..❤️
Yey
Shravan covering her petite frame with his cooling shadow...This is tooo good bro ❤️ ❤️
Romantic as hell!😳
Shravan n his excuses...Can anyone be more adorable n loving?
Nah!!
Absolutely never!
I love you Shravan.....
N I love you Zoya... 🤗 ..N you know why!!
Yes, I believe I do😳
Shravan indeed was her shade giving her the comfort in harsh n burning heat of life.He was ,is n will always be there, no matter what!!
Shravan..Wings of Sumo. ❤️
Her wings and anchor! All in one😛
Even though I loved n truly love each n every word of your poetry Zoya but am mentioning ones those had touched me deeply.
Kab socha tha yeh humne,
Taqdeer ye bhi din dikhaayegi ,
Taakte rahenge woh hame,
Or tapish yu hi pighak jaayegi

Ahh!!
I love it too! I can't help but smile imagining them here...
This is damn damn amazing Zoya.
Thankies...
It gives soo many feels...The intensity it had!!
Haye, don't know what to say...
Killed it girl 👏
Partyyy🥳
Shravan's love had soo many layers...Indeed it had.
Infact Shravan himself had soo many layers.
It's a pity we didn't get to see them onscreen...
Clumsiness jaha Sumo Waha...n Sumo jaha Clumsiness waha 😆
Shravan's arms , her sanctuary...❤️❤️
Not just physically, he was , is n will always be there to catch her whenever she falls emotionally too.!!
That was the idea, my writings have layers and you seem to be really good in unearthing them...
Love...Its not necessary to be saif or told every now n then but its a feeling which needs to be shown...!!
He was always there...N thats what matters the most .!!
It sure did!
Nakhreeli... 😆
ShraMan ki wajah se Ambassador bhi famous ho gayi... 😳 😆
Hahaha sacchi!
Chalu ho jaa please...Pata nahi kyu but I remembered that add..."chalu ho jaa meri jaan...Teri jaan to hamesha hi chalu rehti hai"... 😆
I wrote that thinking of that ad🤣
Delhi mein rickshaw or ache ladke kabhi nahi milte ...Haaye
Kya yaad dila diya Zoya...Guggul ji 😆
#GoldenDaysOfEDKV
Frigging platinum days of EDKV!
Her own acha ladka... 🤣
Oh yeh!!!
Aww!!...He is just love ya ❤️
Sensors car mein nahi hai Sumo darling...Aapke dilon meun lage hue hai. 😉
Yeh baat!!!
Her priced possession-Ambassador and
His priced possession-Rubix Cube... 😆
Jinko kabhi itni importance nahi di, unke zikr bina adhura lagta hai ab...Kya kar diya hai EDKV or ShraMan ne!! ❤️
Sach mai, ab dekhte saath yaad aate yeh log!
Are Shravan ki smile par to hum bhi fida hai...To Sumo ka to ye haal hona hi hai. 😉
Greesy kisses n cheating on his wife with her friend...Oh God!! 🤣
Well, it just went with the flow😆
Chaha tha fakat ye ke ruk jaaye woh,
Ye na socha tha ke wo rooh mein sama jaayega,
Dua ki thi ke mil jaaye wo,
Ye na socha tha ke duniya hi woh ban jaayega...
...Killed me Zoya!!
Loved it to the core.Amazing bro ..👏
Haw! Don't die bro!!!
Sumo always expected a storm after a calm... ❤️
Shukr karu main kaise tera mere maula,
Sajdon mein woh quwwat na hui mubtala,
Aata kar woh quwwat ya rehmat bakhsh mujhe,
Ke yakeen ho chale tu Razik hai mera...
... 👏
This is sooo beautiful Zoya❤️
It's how I believe prayers should be made, not in shayari, but with conviction...
Pure Urdu. ❤️
Truly beautifully written n very very apt for ourselves too along with Sumo.
Shukriya!!!
Maybe throns existed to bear the brunt.Maybe all they wanted was to protect the rose ...This is such a beautiful thought n belief. If we all can think like that, life would be much more easier.
It would for sure!
Shravan was her thron n she was his rose ...Oh How much I loved it!!
I cant tell you bro!!
Take a 🤗
This is what explains ShraMan the best!!
Hugs back! Thank you!!!!
Shravan , how can she tell you how much love she had in her heart for you?!!
Truly there are no words enough for it...!!
Words never are enough...
I soo damn loves how to took so little little things from daily life n wrote that much beautifully.This is your soeciality Zoya!!
It is? What can I say? I find love in the most random of things...
Sumo's love that you expressed here is sooo beautifully penned down buddy ❤️
I'm running out of ways to say thanks now😆
Tum kehte ho mujhe ishq jataana nahi aata,
Justajoo yeh hai ki hume bataana nahi aata ,
...OMG!!
This is sooo good!!
Thank you😃
Sumo always had been like this...She couldnt voice out her feeling n love properly.But here we saw n Can hear her saying all this to Shravan.
Haina!!
Puchte raho tum mujhse hamaare pyaar ka sabab,
Jawaab mein hum mukhalifat karenge,
Muhabbat ka elaan karte raho tum,
Hum Khamoshi se ehtram karenge..
...Killed it Zoya...Killed it !!! 👏 👏
And am I glad I did 😎
You my girl are damn damn damn damn talented soul.
Haye thank you!
Even though I had said Enough but still I still wants to say much more...
Aur baaki hai kuch 😆
Mera dil bohot kuch kehna chahta hai Zoya par kambakht dimaag unhe lafzon mein piro nahi paata.!!!
Just know that I Love you writing to no end...❤️
I know... And that makes me so happy!!!
You have given a new definition of love...This is Love, True n unconditional love ❤️
You always gives so soulful n touching definitions of Love...!!
It's just as I perceive it, people have told me I'm cheesy, but its all about perception right? I don't see this as cheesy, this is the love I've seen around me and this is the one I've understood. If it's anything less, it ain't worth it cause it ain't love...
One thing I have to say...
Tumne mere dil ke tukde tukde kar diye hain...Kaise?
Ji kaise?
Wo aise ke mere dil ka ek tukda tumhaare Postcards padh raha hai, ek tukda Be love mein khoya hua hai, ek tukda Alfaaz dhundh raha hai, ek tukda Fire mein jal raha hai, ek tukda Moments of impact ka impact feel kar raha hai, ek tukda yaha reh gaya hai...!!
Oh man! You literally listed out my favorite works by me! Ab mera dil bhi idhar ydhar hai...
Zyaada ho gaya??...Are shukr karo maine saare nahi likhe!!😉
Nahi nahi, mujhe aadat hai😆
Ab bataao kya saza di jaaye aapko?...Maar diya jaaye ya chod diya jaaye???
Aage you want my works or no😆
Bolo Bolo!! 😆

No seriously Zoya I love your writing and I respect your writing n more than writing, I respect you as a writer...!!❤️
..You have something unique about you n your writing style that Touch me deeply every damn time...like I say everytime.!!
Thanks a ton ya Nik! I really don't know what to say, bas samjh le tu...
Thanks for writing n sharing with us dear... 😊
Pleasure!
Dekh lo ek pura OS likh diya maine...Aapko hi Nikka sa Comment pasand nahi tha na...Deal with it now 😆
I cant help it you know...😉😆
Hahahaha.. I had to take time out to reply to this one 😆
Thanks for the pm n do cont soon taaki main jaldi jaldi res kar saku 😆
Always!
Loads n Loads of Love n tightest of 🤗 your way Zealous si Zoya.
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

@Bold Thank you so much Nik!
Love and hugs back at you 😃

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