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adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Zoya ❤️🤗 Beautiful ..

I just love these pieces depicting true definition of love that continues life long & not on certain occasions where sm1 is performing their vows in each gesture each day .. That's the best I love U ..

The intensity of love is truly seen in things world neglects but the one who's your love & for whom u r life puts them above all,without a word u saying he understands all; he's always there to save u from the world .. Such was the intensity of Shravan's love & indeed its difficult to express gratitude for Sumo in words .. Coz smtimes words don't do justice to ur feelings .. but the way u brought out all those beautiful moments complemented with prose;u stole my heart .. there are times when u read smtg & there's a smile on ur face without thinking .. This is one such piece ..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#932

Awww THIS IS SOOO BEAUTIFULLL WILL BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT (sorry for the caps but I had to) hun...Hats off to you love for always coming up with such Unique Lovely Amazing Concepts & Shayari haiyeee itni Khoobsurat ki ab lafz hee nahi hai uski tareef karne ke liye! Btw thanks a lot for translations as well because I do understand Urdu a bit but your translations really helped to understand the depth of your writings hun...Thank you so much...Once again hugsss baby!!

Love,

Spandana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#933

Zo di!! kya bolun you got me tongue tied which actually never happens, yunhi nahi sab hume chatter box bulate😛

and you've excelled in that attitude too👏

but then...

the short quotes/ poems that you wrote 👏...i definitely need some hindi tutions from you 😆

out of all of them my favourite was

tum poochte ho mujhse,

tumhaari kaunsi baat par mujhe pyaar aata hai

kya kahoon tumse?

ke tumhaari kaunsi baat par mujhe pyaar nahi aata?

does this come naturally to you...excelling in stuff😛

god Sumo is sooo lucky...

he loves her soo much😃

he doesn't chant that he loves her, every walking moment of the day ...he shows her

after alll...

love yaa Zo di🤗 for bringing up such amazing stuff...and promise that you'll continue😛

and before i forget sorry i haven't unressed on the mayassar chapter yet, lekin maine padh liya😃...so hoping that i'll do it before i forget 😛...right now i'm really hungry going to get some lunch😆

untill next time

love

arpita

Edited by ArpitaSingh1806 - 8 years ago

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Arpi1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#934

Zoya aap itna beautiful likhte hai ki I don't know what to say.. You are writing with so much maturity that I am absolutely speech less. . You are too good 👏..
Still will try to share my thoughts about the story..

How much depth really is in their relationship that even with out saying a single word they can understand each other, can feel each other's pain, happiness, sorrow, everything.. That's probably why they are soulmates. ..
Shravan's first reaction was to see whether sumo is right or not with out caring about himself due to which sumo's love for Shravan increasing day by day. .
Shravan's care for sumo is just ❤️
Sumo's ambassdor is surely very "Nakhreeli" jab dekho kharap ho jati hai 😃
She always expected a storm after calm. But the calm was only followed by gentle breezes of warmth and mirth
Sumo's fear is justified considering their dreadful past but things have changed for Mrs and Mr Malhotra..
Can't really say anything how you beautifully explained Shravan and sumo's relationship by roses and thrones 👏
Absolutely beautiful poetry 👏
Thanks for pm

Love
Smita

Edited by Arpi1234 - 8 years ago