Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 95

Originally posted by: Nik03

Aaila 😲
Maine res bhi nahi kiya tha 😲 😲 😲

Khair...
I am speechless...!!
Is that enough Zoya?!!
😛

Originally posted by: orion23

Nikka sounds good only with your name, with a comment not so much..

So no, nahi chalega😎

😆
Ok ...Agar aap kehte ho to 😉 😆

P.S Agar maine itna sa likha to meri saans atak jaayegi na 😆
Waise meri shwaas pranaali mein kuch gadbad nahi hai Zoya?...Kuch na kuch hota hi rehta hai 😆

Will be back sooonnn...N this time real waala soon. 😆

Zealous si Zoya... 🤗
Take a biggg beary 🤗 for writing Sumo's prospective. Now it feels complete. 😊

Now Isse phle ki main upii par aau, phle ye bataao ke iraada kya hai bhai??
Matlab Kuch bhi likhwa lo tumse...Koi to genre chod do yaar 😉
Emotional ones-Zoya
Light hearted ones-Zoya
Shayari-Zoya
Dialogue delivery-Zoya
Comic ones-Zoya
Deep emotional ones-Zoya...Matlab hadd hai ya!!
Koi har genre mein itna mind blowing kaise likh sakta hai????


To be honest honest n honest...I feel honoured to be a reader of yours Zoya.
Take a bow or hats off are not enough for you...You deserve much more respect. ⭐️
Love you buddy n Love your writeups...❤️



Ok Ok!!...I know I should go to upii now!!😆
So...Finally Coming to upii 😛
Sumo's view...I read at start n jumped in excitement. 😉

Silence...A mere word...Means no sound.
But I believe , Silence is the most expressive language.It says much more than words can ever say.
Silence and crying are two ways in which our body speaks when our mouth fails to express the hurt and happiness we feel...!!

N for ShraMan, Silence means contentment, Solace, Comfort.!!
Beautifully captured the Car scene.
His first instinct was to held her, safeguard her.He was a wall btw her and danger...This is Shravan.That true Shravan.Here when it comes to Sumo, he can go beyond imaginations for her safety.

That Free-Verse Poetry you had written Zoya...Oh My My!!
Loveeed them to the core.
Urdu...Indeed a perfect language to express emotions.N thanks to you, am learning so much.

Soulmate...The one who knows you inside out, accept you as you are, love you unconditionally , supports you, trust you, be loyal to you n be your wings so that you can fly as much as you want n as long as you want.
N ShraMan are true soulmates of each other in every way.

Sumo admiring Shravan...The inner Shravan.
Oh!The Soul of Shravan.❤️
The most innocent, loving , caring soul.
The soul that only belongs to you Sumo n yours to him.!!

Sumo's sun...
Sooo loved how you penned down it ya..❤️
Shravan covering her petite frame with his cooling shadow...This is tooo good bro ❤️ ❤️

Shravan n his excuses...Can anyone be more adorable n loving?
Nah!!

I love you Shravan.....
N I love you Zoya... 🤗 ..N you know why!!

Shravan indeed was her shade giving her the comfort in harsh n burning heat of life.He was ,is n will always be there, no matter what!!
Shravan..Wings of Sumo. ❤️

Even though I loved n truly love each n every word of your poetry Zoya but am mentioning ones those had touched me deeply.
Kab socha tha yeh humne,
Taqdeer ye bhi din dikhaayegi ,
Taakte rahenge woh hame,
Or tapish yu hi pighak jaayegi
Ahh!!
This is damn damn amazing Zoya.
It gives soo many feels...The intensity it had!!
Killed it girl 👏

Shravan's love had soo many layers...Indeed it had.
Infact Shravan himself had soo many layers.

Clumsiness jaha Sumo Waha...n Sumo jaha Clumsiness waha 😆
Shravan's arms , her sanctuary...❤️❤️
Not just physically, he was , is n will always be there to catch her whenever she falls emotionally too.!!

Love...Its not necessary to be saif or told every now n then but its a feeling which needs to be shown...!!
He was always there...N thats what matters the most .!!

Nakhreeli... 😆
ShraMan ki wajah se Ambassador bhi famous ho gayi... 😳 😆

Chalu ho jaa please...Pata nahi kyu but I remembered that add..."chalu ho jaa meri jaan...Teri jaan to hamesha hi chalu rehti hai"... 😆

Delhi mein rickshaw or ache ladke kabhi nahi milte ...Haaye
Kya yaad dila diya Zoya...Guggul ji 😆
#GoldenDaysOfEDKV

Her own acha ladka... 🤣
Aww!!...He is just love ya ❤️
Sensors car mein nahi hai Sumo darling...Aapke dilon meun lage hue hai. 😉

Her priced possession-Ambassador and
His priced possession-Rubix Cube... 😆
Jinko kabhi itni importance nahi di, unke zikr bina adhura lagta hai ab...Kya kar diya hai EDKV or ShraMan ne!! ❤️

Are Shravan ki smile par to hum bhi fida hai...To Sumo ka to ye haal hona hi hai. 😉
Greesy kisses n cheating on his wife with her friend...Oh God!! 🤣

Chaha tha fakat ye ke ruk jaaye woh,
Ye na socha tha ke wo rooh mein sama jaayega,
Dua ki thi ke mil jaaye wo,
Ye na socha tha ke duniya hi woh ban jaayega......Killed me Zoya!!
Loved it to the core.Amazing bro ..👏

Sumo always expected a storm after a calm... ❤️
Shukr karu main kaise tera mere maula,
Sajdon mein woh quwwat na hui mubtala,
Aata kar woh quwwat ya rehmat bakhsh mujhe,
Ke yakeen ho chale tu Razik hai mera...... 👏
This is sooo beautiful Zoya❤️
Pure Urdu. ❤️
Truly beautifully written n very very apt for ourselves too along with Sumo.

Maybe throns existed to bear the brunt.Maybe all they wanted was to protect the rose ...This is such a beautiful thought n belief. If we all can think like that, life would be much more easier.

Shravan was her thron n she was his rose ...Oh How much I loved it!!
I cant tell you bro!!
Take a 🤗
This is what explains ShraMan the best!!

Shravan , how can she tell you how much love she had in her heart for you?!!
Truly there are no words enough for it...!!

I soo damn loves how to took so little little things from daily life n wrote that much beautifully.This is your soeciality Zoya!!

Sumo's love that you expressed here is sooo beautifully penned down buddy ❤️
Tum kehte ho mujhe ishq jataana nahi aata,
Justajoo yeh hai ki hume bataana nahi aata ,...OMG!!
This is sooo good!!
Sumo always had been like this...She couldnt voice out her feeling n love properly.But here we saw n Can hear her saying all this to Shravan.

Puchte raho tum mujhse hamaare pyaar ka sabab,
Jawaab mein hum mukhalifat karenge,
Muhabbat ka elaan karte raho tum,
Hum Khamoshi se ehtram karenge.....Killed it Zoya...Killed it !!! 👏 👏

You my girl are damn damn damn damn talented soul.
Even though I had said Enough but still I still wants to say much more...
Mera dil bohot kuch kehna chahta hai Zoya par kambakht dimaag unhe lafzon mein piro nahi paata.!!!
Just know that I Love you writing to no end...❤️

You have given a new definition of love...This is Love, True n unconditional love ❤️
You always gives so soulful n touching definitions of Love...!!
One thing I have to say...
Tumne mere dil ke tukde tukde kar diye hain...Kaise?
Wo aise ke mere dil ka ek tukda tumhaare Postcards padh raha hai, ek tukda Be love mein khoya hua hai, ek tukda Alfaaz dhundh raha hai, ek tukda Fire mein jal raha hai, ek tukda Moments of impact ka impact feel kar raha hai, ek tukda yaha reh gaya hai...!!
Zyaada ho gaya??...Are shukr karo maine saare nahi likhe!!😉

Ab bataao kya saza di jaaye aapko?...Maar diya jaaye ya chod diya jaaye???
Bolo Bolo!! 😆

No seriously Zoya I love your writing and I respect your writing n more than writing, I respect you as a writer...!!❤️
..You have something unique about you n your writing style that Touch me deeply every damn time...like I say everytime.!!

Thanks for writing n sharing with us dear... 😊
Dekh lo ek pura OS likh diya maine...Aapko hi Nikka sa Comment pasand nahi tha na...Deal with it now 😆
I cant help it you know...😉😆

Thanks for the pm n do cont soon taaki main jaldi jaldi res kar saku 😆
Loads n Loads of Love n tightest of 🤗 your way Zealous si Zoya.
Nikka sa Nik ❤️

Zoya Api 🤗
So finally today I read this masterpeice
I'm truely speechless
And I totally agree that Urdu language does justice to feeling
Your works are just brilliant
And You have described love beautifully
Love is visible by action not by expressions.
It is penned so beautifully that anyone will wish to fall in love ❤️
Claps for this amazing peice 👏

Love
Zainab

Just brilliant writing!!

Woh kare baat toh har lafz se khushboo aaye,
Aisi boli wohi bole jise Urdu aaye. -Poet Ahmed Wasi-
😊

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Unres
Zo 🤗
Priii🤗

Is baar toh hadd hi ho gyi 😭
Tell me about it!

Maine toh reply karneki sab had paar kar di😆

Only if you return the favor...
Coming to the update

Rick Castle.. Hilarious guy!

This is what I'm right now.

Yeyyy!!!
Like many have said this update shows how mature you are as a person and a writer .

Well, maturity has nothing to do with age does it? 😉
You have made me so so proud 😃
And that's all I've ever wanted!

You are proud, I am done!

Even if I don't write another piece, I'll be a very content person...
One confession , I never believed in love . From what I've seen it only brings heartbreak and pain . But after reading sentinel I wish to fall in love someday maybe 😳
Well, Dev-willing you might just! Someday haan... ❤️
The kind of love shraman have is beautiful ❤️. You don't need words to tell you love someone, they feel it .
I could quote entire update .Every single line is my favorite .

I can't tell you how very happy this statement makes me!

I swear, heart is so overjoyed right now!❤️
But these lines are ❤️
Aftaab ki tapish toh dekhi thi bohot,
Sarparast bante pehli baar dekha hai,
Kehte hai jala dena uska mukaddar hai,
Phir kyun woh lakeeron se baghawat kar baitha hai?
Secret, I blush each time I read this!

And I've written this makes me go woosh!

Kabhi socha nahi tha I could do something of this sort...

And your beautiful tribute painting! My heart
Apko mera shat shat pranam Malik _/\_

Mere charan ka photo toh hai hi, use it😆
Mera dil kidney liver lungs sab le liya !
Haye! The level of apahijness Baitu 🤣
It's getting too difficult for me to decide which one of your works is my favourite .

That was the plan 😎
I love each and every update of this series .
But Postcards , Be love and Sentinel are class apart !!!
Psst.. These three are my most favorite works too!
I really loved free verse poetry ❤️
Why I'm glad I could do justice!

Beyond awesome update !!!!

Shukriya!
Loads of love ❤️
Love back 🤗

Ps.- I'm sorry yar 😔 ..Next time se I'll try to unres on time ..pakka .

LMAO! Look at me! I'm nearly 2 months 2 late!
Sorry haan and I love you ❤️
Sorry rakh jeb mai! I love you too!

P.P.S- I hate my imgur isn't working .
How badly I want to make an edit for this update 😔

I want that edit here!

Send it to Resh, she will do the needful!