Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 93

OMG!!! This was BRILLIANT!!👏 Im too falling short of words like sumo now😳Loved the shayari style of sumos pov... Just BEAUTIFUL❤️ You're a STAR⭐️

Wow Zoya,

u left me utterly spellbound...I really hv no words to describe what I feel at reading this piece...just like Suman cannot voice d depth of her love...u r a master at ur work...this piece was worth d wait...just fantastic, too good...

I agree with u...always saying "I love u" sometimes seems fantasy...every married couple or 2 ppl in a relationship shud follow ur advice...

I m not a fan of long reviews n commenting on every line of what u hv written...but d feeling that I get on reading ur works is just pure bliss...what else do I say...Thank You

rgds

Anuradha

Res

Beautiful.

OMG it's wonderful !!!!

amazing...!!!
Spellbounding di...*claps*kaise likh lete ho aap itna aacha...now I am developing a girlcrush on you...*shy*
Shayari...hats off to you...the last para was the bestest...!!!!
Sorry zyada lamba nahi likh sakti...typing from a Baba aaadam ke zamane ka phone aur upar se kal meri entrance xam hai...
Loved this piece and waana have more from you...!!

Simply beautiful 🤗

The character of Suman as we know, was one who always craved to belong to someone.

This right here is her dream come true. There is someone to whom she belongs and someone who totally and completely belongs to her.

Just one word. Speechless! 👏

To other couples, silence in the relationship meant that the relationship had lost it's charm or the respective partners didn't get along. With them, silence as well, spoke really they don't have to talk to each other to understand what other person is thinking, they can understand each other even with out talking...
Shravan's presence of mind help them from accident and Shravan's instant reaction was to check whether sumo is ok or not..
Shravan as always very caring person saving her from heat..
Sumo starting to understand Shravan more and more, start knowing different layer of Mr Shravan Malhotra..sumo is right that Shravan might not say I love you by his words but by his actions he shows how much he loves her. .
Sumo's jaan is "Nakhreeli" according to Shravan 😃 Obviously itne nakhre dikhati hai ke sumo ko taang kar ki rakhi hai sumo ki jaan ne..
How beautifully you explained rose and throne part, how Shravan is sumo's throne who will save her from all difficulties, kudos to you for that line 👏
Wonderful Hindi and English poetry 👏
Zoya, this is another marvellous piece from you 👏

Love
Shrujani

Zoya dii
I want to thank Allah a infinite times for
Creating u dii I still can't believe dii how do u write these
Beautiful words.dil mein Hamesha yeh khwaish rahegi app
Se mulaakaat ki ranbeer,namik,Armaan
These r my fav most people I want to meet
Someday and even if I may not meet them but I seriously want to
Meet u di.u not only make a person with just name come into
Life but also make me love u even more without
Even knowing u in person. I don't know why but there is something special in the way you play with words that make me love you even more.i am not able to quote even single words
Of it because it way beyond my comprehension . I just can't say which word I like
Everything was ... just no words di.thank god ki yesterday night I didn't
Read this or else I would have entered shraman world.i am really sorry di I can't
Give u any of my views about it that's just the most precious writing
From the best person I ever met till now .di app ki explanations I even love
Them even more dii both at start and end.u make us go crazy about ur
Update but I don't know how do I get the patience to complete it
Before jumping on to the update .please keep showering us with ur best
And ample of words from ur creative dictionary. I may delay reply to any story
But not yours Because they are unstoppable feeling after reading it.
Love u Zoya di (aka queen of Urdu vocabulary )
LOADS Of LOVE
Princess