Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 51

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant.. Shravan's POV about having ur best friend as ur life partner is beautiful... Shraman' s role play is ❤️

Thank you😛
Nd their postcard from future are bliss..Love the fact that shravan has taken care of every minor detail while writing these postcards for Sumo... Beautifully written..
I'm glad😳
Thank u for the new year gift..
You're welcome anytime!!

@Bold Thank you so much Jerry!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

read it ..zoya Mai kya kru Tera man ur just amazing. .. comment krungi later as u know mere comments kitne lambe hote :-p . . will read it again as I loved it.. love u yar for such an amazing OS's :)

Hahaha! Who better than me would know 😆
I shall await your response!
Cheers with the rereading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
hehe yep you would know :-p ..

done with reading again ..was done yesterday ..that's y after rereading I had edited my comment..

no matter how many times I read it, I always love it.. :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sumo is Sumo... Why she is like this... Sometimes she behaves like she has noone in this world imp than Shravan... & next she will hurt him most... 😕

She still getting those nightmares... Yeh Aditya kab in dono ka peecha chodega..!.. 😡

Shravan I don't have words for this guy... When he loves someone he will give 100% to that relationship...

Keep writing

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Undoubtedly the BEST of the bests❤️
No adjective is enough to describe this piece's beauty!
I'll just say that it worked as a pain reliever for me
Please keep on bringing more

Love,
Swarnima 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!! 👏👏👏
The postcards are brilliant, zoya. I loved all of them.
They made me crack up with howling laughter and then aww at the adorableness. Shravan is a true romantic here I must say. 😃
I especially loved the titanic and the Pyramid ones. 😆
Suman as Nefertiti is a killer 🤣

The last postcard - baccho samet... well, 😳
I'm greedy now to read about ShraMan's parenthood written by you. 🤗



The way he healed her,
that too despite that hurtful jab she delivered after waking up...
it really deserves all the praises in world.
The man can get hell determined if his mind is set after something, something that involves his Suman.

The best dialogue -to me- here is
when Shravan described the best and worst thing about
having your best friend as your life partner.
That's really thoughtful, that's really deep. 👍🏼


Now, come back with such awesome works soon.

Oh, Happy new year and Merry Christmas!

❤️❤️❤️
Lots of love,
Lara.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pisces17

Hi Zoya,

Man...are you for real?😵 How can one write such a masterpiece?
Oh my😳 Thanks ya!
Running out of words to express what I feel...amazing, wonderful, excellent etc etc...
Yeyy! I like that😉
Thank you for keeping our wonderful jodi alive...🤗
Pleasure hon!
Dil nahi bara...please write more...
Surely will😃
👏👏👏

@bold Thank you so very much🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Dear Zoya,

I've read all of your work and u r a wonderful writer👍🏼 but dude this was something else👏 emotions, thoughts,love,care,everything was ❤️..and your efforts with the plot and the brilliant ideas at postcards was 👏 .. u made me 😉.. but most imp u made me send u a reply that I couldn't resist ..
Well thank you! I'm happy this got you out of the silent hibernation zone!
I've 2 requests-1) join wattpad and write there regularly .. I'm greedy to read u more .. and I can follow u conveniently..
Nope sorry.. A lot many have asked earlier and I've declined simply cause I write for fun not as a thing I do. Wattpad is for those that are serious about writing, Me? Not so much. Besides, forum is family, I'm more comfortable here...
2) just as Sumo , Shravan has his demons buried too.. Since u imagine and write so beautifully,I'm greedy to know how would Sumo reach out to Shravan,dissect his issues and heal his wounds and build a better future .. If u could,plz try writing out and I'll be happiest reader ..
Hmm... I had that in mind, but I don't have a good plot yet.. Once inspiration strikes, why not...
3) do pm me in your all works henceforth plz ..
Sure!
Cheers..😊

@Bold Thanks so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Malika

OMG Zoya what have you done!!

You tell me😉
All those postcards got me like ❤️😳
I actly skipped reading n was just staring at the caps...
Aww man! That's cute😳
Will read and comment later...But just for the glimpses of ShraMan from future big hug to you!! Such a cute creative way to make the expected future come to life
Shukriya! I'll be waiting on the comment😃

@Bold Thank you so very much Malika!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Zoya Di a big hug to you for coming back with a bang.🤗

A hug right back at ya Arpita!!! 🤗
I was in my flight when I read this one and that grin which had plastered on my face when I saw this update made many passengers suspect me being mad.,but acne jobs kya farak pasta hai-apne Ko to bus update padhna hai😎
Hahahaha yeh sahi tha😆
This piece was soon damn cute, adorable, beautiful, astounding,, now meri vocabulary khatamn.
Nah I'm sure you could dish out a few more words😉
"Tareef Yeh bhi to Sach hai kuch bhi nahin. "😳
But pata hai kai baar I feel ki aapke post pe comment karna is useless. ...Gussa Mat Ho aage bhi hai.
Because these words do nothing to define your work.
Your writeups are not subjected to comments they're just amazing.
Oh my! Iske liye one more 🤗 for you!
Love
Arpita😆

@Bold Bada wala thank you for such kind words!
Take care hon!!!!

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