Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 49

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Zoya,
I've read all of your work and u r a wonderful writer👍🏼 but dude this was something else👏 emotions, thoughts,love,care,everything was ❤️..and your efforts with the plot and the brilliant ideas at postcards was 👏 .. u made me 😉.. but most imp u made me send u a reply that I couldn't resist ..
I've 2 requests-1) join wattpad and write there regularly .. I'm greedy to read u more .. and I can follow u conveniently..
2) just as Sumo , Shravan has his demons buried too.. Since u imagine and write so beautifully,I'm greedy to know how would Sumo reach out to Shravan,dissect his issues and heal his wounds and build a better future .. If u could,plz try writing out and I'll be happiest reader ..
3) do pm me in your all works henceforth plz ..
Cheers..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG Zoya what have you done!!
All those postcards got me like ❤️😳
I actly skipped reading n was just staring at the caps...Will read and comment later...But just for the glimpses of ShraMan from future big hug to you!! Such a cute creative way to make the expected future come to life
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Di a big hug to you for coming back with a bang.🤗
I was in my flight when I read this one and that grin which had plastered on my face when I saw this update made many passengers suspect me being mad.,but acne jobs kya farak pasta hai-apne Ko to bus update padhna hai😎
This piece was soon damn cute, adorable, beautiful, astounding,, now meri vocabulary khatamn.
"Tareef Yeh bhi to Sach hai kuch bhi nahin. "😳
But pata hai kai baar I feel ki aapke post pe comment karna is useless. ...Gussa Mat Ho aage bhi hai.
Because these words do nothing to define your work.
Your writeups are not subjected to comments they're just amazing.

Love
Arpita😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya,
This was so real and yet so light. the postcards were amazing and as always so were Shraman😃 Gentle giant shrink I loved.. 😳 And your lines of the best and worst part of having your spouse as your best friend is so so true - home run for that one😊

Thanks for the wonderful update and happy new year to you.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Re-read it with a huge grin which makes me look more stupid than I already am
I didn't notice you mentioned Dr. Sigmund Freud. Impressed haan 😃
Now I wanna see you as a pyschologist .
It would be so cool 😎
Hopeless? No.. no.. that's too negative. My feelings for you are anything but that. I'm madly in love with you, yes, but with way too much hope in me."
Your dialogues are life man! ❤️ ..You are the boss bas!


Such a dreamy update it is
Worth all the wait!
Apki tareef ke liye alfaaz kam padte 😳
Sachi god promise!
Proof is your quoted lines. Khud ke alfaaz ni bachte na, tere use karti 🤣 🤣
Jokes apart you have improved a lot since your first update , you're almost close to perfection. I'm so so proud of you .
Not chadaoing you on chane ka jhaad 😆
Why to trouble poor plants? 😆
100% Shuddha Sach ( pure than patanjali's products😆)
Zo🤗



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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya,
Meri jaan.. How are you?
Again a fantastic update.. And I'm here to read it.. U know you are fab, right.. Of course you do!!
But honestly.. I felt so happy reading this chapter.. U always make me smile.
Sumo again hit below the belt.. The vindictive Sumo, I hated. But she has this beautiful side too..
Shravan.. What is he?! He defines perfection with all his imperfections.. Shravan was love n you poryrayed him in such a way that I wish every man is like that.. Atleast my man! 😉
Freud, the postcards, the message through the story.. Take a bow girl.. U nailed it again..
U know that I love you, right..
Have a very Happy New Year.. Stay happy n stay blessed..

P. S.

Priyam,
Why does your comment have so many hot men?!?!
Neal Caffrey n Fawad were making me drool, as always..
😳😳

Love,
Roshni

Edited by Roshni2015 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Rosh Samaj Seva Rosh 😆
A regular dose of Eye tonic keeps your eyes healthy 😉
Toh aap bhi aayiye aur NSP( nain sukh prapti) kijiye🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

@Rosh Samaj Seva Rosh 😆
A regular dose of Eye tonic keeps your eyes healthy 😉
Toh aap bhi aayiye aur NSP( nain sukh prapti) kijiye🤣

Prii Your comments are life!
You say my works have improved, your comments have gone beyond improvement!
Perfect!
NSP🤣

P. S. Detailed comments to everyone later. Thank you.
Res people, yaad se unres please :D
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


Prii Your comments are life!
Yay!!!
You say my works have improved, your comments have gone beyond improvement!
Perfect!
I would like to thank Google and haseen faces of all these mahapurush for getting me here 🤣 🤣
And ofcourse you. You gave me permission to use these gifs. So thank you😆
NSP🤣

P. S. Detailed comments to everyone later. Thank you.
Res people, yaad se unres please :D


@bold speech over . Jago mamu subah ho gyi 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hellooo!!! Bole to one of my favorite writers on the forum is b-a-c-k! And how! Muah...
Fabulous thought Zoya... and very well executed... the stigma around mental health in societies the world over simply appalls me, and I sure am glad to see you incorporate that so deftly in our ShraMan's lives...
Hope things at home are better... Lots of hugs!
- Anu
Edited by an_chau - 8 years ago

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