Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 52

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Zoya,

This was so real and yet so light. the postcards were amazing and as always so were Shraman😃

Dude thanks so much!

Gentle giant shrink I loved.. 😳 And your lines of the best and worst part of having your spouse as your best friend is so so true - home run for that one😊

Awesome! Home run and all😃 Happiness...

Thanks for the wonderful update and happy new year to you.

Oh pleasure! Thanks! To you too!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Re-read it with a huge grin which makes me look more stupid than I already am

Hey its a world of stupids, don't feel left out😆
I didn't notice you mentioned Dr. Sigmund Freud. Impressed haan 😃
Now I wanna see you as a pyschologist .

Hahaha! Some day Prii.. Some day...
It would be so cool 😎
Oh it damn well would be cool

Hopeless? No.. no.. that's too negative. My feelings for you are anything but that. I'm madly in love with you, yes, but with way too much hope in me."
Your dialogues are life man! ❤️ ..You are the boss bas!

I guess I am a very hopeful romantic and that's the problem. Cause love is overrated and romance has become highly materialised. The kind of fluff I write is passe I believe... Toh yeh sab bas sapno mai hi hai, cause reality is eons away...


Rudra Pratap Singh! He the man ☺️

Such a dreamy update it is
Worth all the wait!

Am I happy to hear that!!
Apki tareef ke liye alfaaz kam padte 😳
Sachi god promise!

Tere comments ki length dekh ke aaisa bilkul nahi lagta 🤣
Not that I'm complaining, I love it 😛

Proof is your quoted lines. Khud ke alfaaz ni bachte na, tere use karti 🤣 🤣
Hahaha😆

Jokes apart you have improved a lot since your first update , you're almost close to perfection. I'm so so proud of you .

Dude! Loot li mehfil! Jeet liya dil... You being the one that pushed me into this, you being with me on this since the very start, this is huge! Love you ya!!!
Not chadaoing you on chane ka jhaad 😆
Why to trouble poor plants? 😆
100% Shuddha Sach ( pure than patanjali's products😆)
Oh please! Keep that human mixer or his references away from me 🤣 😆

Zo🤗

Iqbal Khan wala I love you! Uff...

Mai toh gayi

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Meri jaan.. How are you?

Rosh🤗

I'm good! How are you?

Again a fantastic update.. And I'm here to read it.. U know you are fab, right.. Of course you do!!

I think I'm okay, but you guys keep saying this and I feel I'm average 😆

But honestly.. I felt so happy reading this chapter.. U always make me smile.

I love it when you guys say I could put a smile on your faces.. All the effort feels worth it😛

Sumo again hit below the belt.. The vindictive Sumo, I hated. But she has this beautiful side too..

She does right... Next update I promise she won't be so bad😃

Shravan.. What is he?! He defines perfection with all his imperfections.. Shravan was love n you poryrayed him in such a way that I wish every man is like that.. Atleast my man! 😉

Me too ya! This is my dream right here... Anything Shravan does is

Freud, the postcards, the message through the story.. Take a bow girl.. U nailed it again..

U know that I love you, right..

Yes I do! Thanks so much!!!

Have a very Happy New Year.. Stay happy n stay blessed..

You too hon 🤗

P. S.

Priyam,

Why does your comment have so many hot men?!?!

Neal Caffrey n Fawad were making me drool, as always..

😳😳

Cause I don't allow her to comment without them... This is like firauti for writing 😆

Love,

Roshni

Originally posted by: sapphire3

@Rosh Samaj Seva Rosh 😆
A regular dose of Eye tonic keeps your eyes healthy 😉
Toh aap bhi aayiye aur NSP( nain sukh prapti) kijiye🤣

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Prii Your comments are life!
Yay!!!

You say my works have improved, your comments have gone beyond improvement!

Perfect!
I would like to thank Google and haseen faces of all these mahapurush for getting me here 🤣 🤣
Hahahahah! Mahapurush and their haseen faces are life!

And ofcourse you. You gave me permission to use these gifs. So thank you😆

Permission? You ain't allowed to comment without GIFS!

NSP🤣

P. S. Detailed comments to everyone later. Thank you.

Res people, yaad se unres please :D

Originally posted by: an_chau

Hellooo!!! Bole to one of my favorite writers on the forum is b-a-c-k! And how! Muah...

You Anu have a rare talent to make me smile reading the very first line of your comment always! 🤗
Fabulous thought Zoya... and very well executed... the stigma around mental health in societies the world over simply appalls me, and I sure am glad to see you incorporate that so deftly in our ShraMan's lives...

I'm so glad you appreciated it...
Hope things at home are better... Lots of hugs!

Yes they are... Thanks hon.. Hugs back :D
- Anu

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Hey...loved it completely yaa...you and your innovative outstanding ideas👏👏👏 i really love them...i was waiting for you to write something beautiful and you did not dissapoint. .

Happy to have been lived up to your expectation! Thank you so much!!!

😊😊...please come up with something as beautiful real soon ...thanks for p.m...love ya,

Sure thing, soon...

Dolly😊

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this was so adorable beautiful & I was laughing like a fool seeing all SHRAMAN Postcards from Future but you last paragraph about fighting demons & making peace with painful past for a blissful peaceful beautiful future made me smile through tears...I mean you have explained such indepth matters with such simplicity & beauty...THANK YOU SO MUCH hun..Love u lots...

Aww man! Spandana thank you so much... That's really sweet of you to say.. Love back!

Actually I was missing your stories so thought of PMing u but then thought may be u r bit busy but I'm so glad you are back with a bang with such a wonderful story!!

Oh you can PM whenever.. but yeh this time things were pretty busy...

Please this time don't disappear for so long dear..we miss you & your lovely writings...Isse aap request samjiye ya phir dhamki it's upto u yaar..u know I love u lots so dhamki dena ka bhi haq hai...

Why of course! Full haq... I won't be away for so long this time😛

remember SHRAMAN said dsoti haq aur zimmendari dono deti hai..Haha too much EK DUJE KE VAASTE SHRAMAN EFFECT par hum kya kare DIL HAI KI MAANTHA NAHI DIL TOH PAAGAL HAI DIL TOH BACHA HAI JI!!!...You might be thinking I have gone crazy & I can't deny that afterall EDKV charm & beauty is such that it can cast a spell on anyone!!

Absolutely bro!!!

Lots of love hugs,

Spandana

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

zoya pehle to thanks for the pm😊..

You're welcome!

yar kya karu tumhara.. whenever I think , this os is the best one😃, again you come up with such an os ki you put me in dilemma🥱..

n I always conclude ki yar sare OS's to best hai akhir bandi "os queen" Jo hai😃.. I just love you man😆..ur really amazing👏..

Hahaha.. Why sorry to put you on the crossroads... Thank you so much for the admiration...

I really think how you come up with such mind blowing n different ideas always😳.. I had read it tomorrow n bs like krk I left.. I was speechless for a moment ki kya comment karu😲 ..

I knew you'd be back...

read it twice, and don't know how many times I'm gonna read it again😊..now enough of my bak-bak😛..

coming to the os, beginning me I was like hayy ye kahan se aa gya? sumo ko nightmares us incident k? ? story m to sbkch thk chalra tha Oxford visit n all then I thought give it a read first , then come to any conclusion😃..

These are stand alone OS-es... They don't follow a set timeframe... This could be placed before the honeymoon.. I didn't want to get stuck with the issues of writing an FF and curbing of creativity.. So these are randomly placed as far as time frame is considered...

when sumo screamed n shravu consoled her, ah that's love yar .. sometimes I really think, God ne shravu jaisa banda q ni bnaya or :-p n then sumo ka anger, her outburst, I was feeling like ki the way their convo was going, had to happen😭..

n the pain in shravu's eye, felt heartbreaking..😭 n then sumo's realization, really it's so natural , you sit anything in anger, n then suddenly you feel the weight of ur words that it might hurt someone..

the way shravu ne sumo ko samjhaya like "the best and worst thing about being best friends is that you can put them down , n when needed, you can bring them up".. loved this explanation..

Glad ... :)

n then the tree example was amazing , reminded me of how srk was giving examples to alia in movie "dear zindagi"😊

I am yet to watch that movie 😆

n sumo caught it true that, none can be better therapist for her than shravu😳

the roles they were playing were all awesome.. n "diary of a wimpy kid", have kept this book from a long while but haven't read yet, ab lagta hai pdhna pdega😛

n the postcards man i was really speechless after reading them..🥱

chahe vo titanic pose ho, ya guitar, gym, ddlj, beach scene, sumo with cat, god loved each n every postcard..

the most beautiful thing about all postcards were that shravu took care of even every minor thing about sumo.. god yar this man is love😳..

Agreed! That he absolutely is...

n then sumo got emotional..obvio hona hi tha coz i had got emotional..like really how could a man love a girl to this extent..😊 their marriage was really a bliss..😊

loved every single thing about it zoya.. n sorry ki koi zrurt ni hai i love long updates..😊 infact i was like why it ended 😕

n m sorry for my long se v long comment😉 ..you know na , i dont feel peace until i speak my heart out.. 😳

Oh I'm very accustomed to it by now😆

loved ur new year gift dear.. Wishing You A Happy New Year..love u so much dear 😊 .. waiting for next pm 😃

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Zoya,
You are an amazing writer. You left me speechless. All the synonyms for the best goes to you, as I am literally speechless right now. You give the right combination of friendship, love, care, playfulness in your stories. It is always an emotional ride with you. But this one surpasses everything else. Your imagination seems to take a ride of the future and came right back.

Thank you so very much!

And the postcards, how did you get them? Let me know.

It was a Christmas gift from Santa😆

JK I made them...

You are very intriguing to me. Would love to learn more about you.
Thanks for your writing.

Lubna.