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Ooo Emm Gee! Look at the response!
Seriously I didn't expect SO many of you'll to read this!
Anyways, thanks a lot my sweethearts! I love you all!
Part 2
Ramnath approached Suman. He wanted to thank her to give in to his selfish, mean demands, that too without accepting anything in return. He was overjoyed right now, also because of the fact that Shravan had been getting elite proposals from rich bureaucrats. And she did deserve a pat on the back for it.
But he wasn't aware of the doom he was instilling on himself
(Its rightly said that Vinaashkaali Vipreet Buddhi)
"Ermm... Suman!", he called out. She turned around rather dazily to see him. "Aditya, could I borrow her for a moment, please?"
"All yours, Sir", he replied with his usual grinn.
He took her to a side and patted her back.
"Well done, my girl! You've given me so much joy by accepting Aditya's proposal. I'm so happy and proud of you!"
A sudden urge overcame her senses. Her body felt hot and she began losing control of her conscious mind as the subconscious part gained an upper hand.
She fumbled back from him and shouted :
"Ram Uncle is PROUD of me! Yayy! Shravan, didn't I tell you someday, someone will be proud of me? And you said I could never keep anyone happy... You're wrong!!"
Aditya's mouth fell wide open and he saw his bride-to-be swooning and uttering something which seemed rubbish.
"But that's nice way to handle things Ram Uncle! You deserve a clap!"
And she clapped as loudly as she could.
"Sumo! Mind your words! Come, I think you need a sleep", Shravan tried to cover up his plot which had backfired heavily.
"Eeh! Sssh! Shravan, aaj kuch mat bolna!"
"Haan so where was I? Yes! Ram uncle is such a cheat, a crafty manipulator and a fox in human form!"
The only person who would agree with her was Kamini. She couldn't help but feel her right now.
"Yeh accha hai Uncle, pehle promise lo, dil todo and then feel proud. Wah!", she swaggered, out of her mind.
"You remember that blank cheque?"
She moved to Pushkar and asked for a blank paper.
"Here, come naa uncle!", she pulled him to the center of the gathering.
"Now hand this to me! Common! You've done it once!"
Ramnath was totally flabbergasted. His eyes couldn't come up to meet anyone of the pair fixed onto him.
He silently handed her the cheque aka blank paper.
"Ah! Deja vu! Deja vu!", she shouted.
"You know what uncle, you failed as a father, as a family man and a human itself. You think I'll be happily married and gone with Aditya but what about, what about... Him?"
She unsteadily walked up to Shravan and held his arm.
"You cannot even imagine how much I've hurted him and how much I've hurted myself. Every time I said a 'no', I killed a part of myself... Did you ever think for your Son? This man loves me with all his heart and you were hell bent on destroying his feelings, just because you failed as a husband? Why?"
"No one here, no one here cared for him! And I wasn't allowed to care for him! Irony!!"
"But not today! Not.. Today!"
She went down on both her knees and wept. Shravan too , kneeled down, just beside her.
"I love you Shravan, I love..." , and she passed off.
She slipped into his arms. Aditya went ahead to take hold of her but one fiery gaze from Shravan and he froze.
He picked her up, tenderly. The Malhotras could see bloodshot eyes brimming with tears. And he left, with her, as his prized possession, leaving behind a mixed crowd of baffled, victorious and ashamed people.
Love,
Mahi
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Again, I'll finish this off, as fast as I can! But it won't be soon *grinning*😆
Ganesh Kartikeya
Shiv Shakti
