Tum Dena Saath Mera - A Shraman SS | Part 6 Pg 12

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Geeks!

There's so so much going on in my poor mind, I'm hardly able to say it. And to top it all is the lack of time and space to write. I'm currently very baffled and annoyed. Some people are just not allowing me to write and with so much difficulty I'm penning down this OS in tits and bits. So please, my dear readers, I expect you'll to comply with me and be patient!

DISCLAIMER:

This OS is totally crazy and out of mind. According to the present scenario, I want all of this to happen at the same time, rather desperately. Hence this stupid yet feels waala OS from my sulking mind! Hope you'll enjoy it, nonetheless.

TUM DENA SAATH MERA

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"See! Ram Uncle is proud of me! Finally!", smirked an intoxicated Suman.

"Shravan, see you were wrong. Someone, finally is PROUD of me... And you said a girl like me could never keep anyone happy!"

She took a step forward but faltered.

Ramnath gulped down water. His throat had become parched. What was this lady up to?

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This much for now. But I promise I'll be back soon, with more.

Love,

Mahi

Note : I don't know if its an OS or TS or SS but I'll write till satisfaction. And no PMs!

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Part 1 - Below

Part 2 - Pg 4

Part 3 - Pg 6

Part 4 - Pg 7

Part 5 - Pg 9

Part 6 - Pg 12

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Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 9 years ago

An intoxicated Sumo ? That's interesting !

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Shivangee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Plz Mahi come back Soon. ..
Waiting for Ramu to Sink😆

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is interesting. Too excited to read further.

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you guys! Next part

Part 1

Shravan had organised a party, to apparently celebrate Suman Aditya's new found relation.

He needed to teach that Egoistic, Self centered women a lesson. Also, Aditya had the right to know that his Ring Master was what type of a person. He didn't care about anything now. All he cared for, was revenge.

She'd hurted him enough and he wouldn't allow her to get away, without some pain inflicted on her. No one cared in the world for him, then why should he keep minding other's respect on his shoulders? He was just waiting for that perfect moment, until all the guests left and only the Malhotra Family was present. He'd been careful not to invite the Tiwaris coz he didn't want to humiliate her in front of them.(Shravan is a sweet gentleman, haina?)😉😆

The only obstacle in his path was Aditya. He stuck to her like a magnet and wouldn't leave her. But he had a plan too, to clear that pesky rat off his way. After all, Shravan was a Pro in planning and insulting. This wasn't new to him, it ran in his veins now.

He placed a 1000 rupee note in the Waiter's pocket and asked him to give a special orange juice to Aditya. He had mixed a Dizziness powder in that juice and soon he would be snoring off to bed and Shravan could unhindered insult Suman. But then, there's always a twist!😉

The waiter served it to Aditya. But Shravan didn't know how big a gentleman Adi was. So he politely offered his drink to Suman, standing right beside her.

Shravan, standing in a far corner, was completely bewildered as Suman drank down the drink. He ran to stop her but the damage was done.

And the drink started showing its effects just after Ramnath had a small talk with her. Needless to say, what followed was calamity! (For Ramnath, in case someone is wondering)😆

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I'll be back soon!

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 9 years ago

Intoxicated Suman n Ramu kaka toh gayo kaam se🤣

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is so interesting. An intoxicated Suman is the only way she'll ever reveal something. Bring it on!

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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Posted: 9 years ago

this is just AWESOME

continue plz

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing start Mahi
Waiting for next part 🤗

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 9 years ago

#10

loved it... and very excited for the next part... haayee kaash esa ho jaye show mein... mazaa aa jaye... kab bajegi ramu ki band... i am desperately waiting for it..

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