EDKV Collective OS: ongoing part3, plz join in guys.. - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Updated!

Hope its fine! The next one is free to continue in whichever way and story... But please try to reach such a situation that Shravan and Verma have to fight a legal case against each other😉


It's really great Mahiii... The more we write more interesting itvis becoming 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res after mizzundaztud to update
Edited by ravzs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Anyone's writing if not shall I continue
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ravzs

Anyone's writing if not shall I continue


Please continue Ravzs, I was supposed to write but last night was so tired, that I went to sleep right after watching EDKV, so u write please, I will after you... And we have to turn this till Shravan has to fight in court with Verma, and let's call Verma's lawyer as devinder Khosla 🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next part hope u guys enjoy
Suman enters the tiwari qilla with dabu
Her mind was afloot to the surroundings
The only words playing in her mind was of the creep Verma
Didn't hear dabu blabbering about his schoolday
All she did was asked him to go to his room and chage
Visibly upset dabu understood somethings wrong and did what he was told

Meanwhile ...
"arey Pushkar hum ja kaha rahe hai Hume mall janna tha na fir Mujhe
Yu kaha lejarahe Ho bathavo "
" bhaiya gadbad hogayi hai Bahuth badi"
" Kya Hua "
" bhaiya vo sumo..." Didn't allow him to complete
" Kya Hua Suman ko bolna Kya Hua jaldhi Bol"
" bhaiya jab ussne cal kiya Tabh ...narrates the whole incident "
" uski itni himath "
" Jahan talk Mujhe samjh mein aya vo Suman ko damkaraha tha
Aur usse engagement karne ko Bol raha tha "
" kya ... Lag tha hai ye Verma kal ki Sabkh bhul Gaya 😡
Is ki tho mein "
" bhaiya Hume sari bath sirf sumo batha Sakthi hain so Pehli usse
Hum bath kar the hain "
" teekh hain "

They race towards Tiwari qilla


Suman's room ...
" kyu yaar mein hi kyu bachpanse jo Dard milla vo meine
Saha aur kithni barh "
" Mujhe laga uss din jo bhi Hua vo ..."
" Kya Hua uss din " Pushkar asked and entered the room followed by Shravan
Suman resolve of beining strong broke seeing her best friend
She ran towards him and hugged him crying

( don't bash me for this people only to spice up the issue for later she didn't know
Shravan well na )

" sumo Kya Hua hain Teekse bathavo esse royegi Kya "
"Mujhe nahi patha tha ki meri fighting friend Suman ka crying side ho Sakta hain " he chuckled but no
Use she didn't respond to this and looked very distraught
Shravan was watching this silently knew the matter is something huge and That is
Why she is crying Seeing her like this was getting him very impatient and wanted
Her to smile like he has seen her always so he stepped in
" Suman Hume bathavo ki Kya Hua hain thaki hum kuch kar sake "
" agar aiseyi tum royegi hum Kya kar sakthe hain Bolona "
He places hand on her shoulder
After sometime of consoling Pushkar makes her to sit and Shravan gives her water
She finally looked composed to an extent
" sumo poori Bhath Teekse bolo aur kuch bhi chupana math hum tume kuch bhi hone
Nahin denge "
" ha Pushkar teekh Bol raha hain bolo Kya Hua hain "
After the compulsion from both side and looking at there faces she knew only they can get her
Out of this mess
" tum janthe Ho na uss Verma ne mujse Kaise pesh atha tha aur mein usse ignore karthi thi "
He nodded and then asked her to continue
" ye Karibh do hafthe ki bath hain tabh tum Singapore ke liye Gaye the tab ki "
" uss din Karibh dopaher ko client se milne ke badh mein Bhaar Aarahi thi Tabh ussne Mujhe cal kiya
Meine nahi uthaya chauthi bhar jab cal aya mein gusa hoke phone uthaya tha "

She recites the whole proceedings to them
While listening to her both grew angry on what has happened
The most annoyed was SM and was burning with rage
Pushkar was looking at his brother then Suman whose head was down didn't notice it
As he saw him raged up he placed a hand on his arm and asked him to calm down through his eyes
Once she was down she was in verge of break down

Hope it isn't bad guys continue from here
Welcome to all comments and critics

Let me know how s t
Edited by ravzs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice part Ravz, really bringing the flow together...
Res for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey gals... Yaar please kill me... I wanted to update but aaj mere ghar mein toofaan aaya hai ...my AT friends know that I have got a new job.. So mere ghar pe mere office wale friends me kabzaa kar liya hai... I don't think I will be able to update today... Plz... Kisi aur ko karna hobto continue kar lo, I will update kal pakkaaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I wil post by one to two hours max as mizzundaztud can't I hope it's fine
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ravzs

I wil post by one to two hours max as mizzundaztud can't I hope it's fine



I have already reserved a post... now u can update after me!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Amreen I guess I dint see ur post sry fr d trouble
Res after Ameen

Take t over make t spicy😃



Edited by ravzs - 9 years ago

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