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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Shagu ⭐️

viffy too bade maze le raha hai iss khel ka 😛
dance practice 😃 discussion

Itna meetha bol raha hai viffy ...diabetes ho jayegi 😆
Ye viffy too kal raat wali baat use kar raha apni baat manvane ke liye 😛

viffy. ...dance teacher 😃

Haayee. ... kya hai viffy ka dard-e-raaz 😕

tiffin sharing ❤️

Hahaha. .. karela tasty 😃

dono ke dil mein dard hai ... umeed hai dono ek dusre ke dard ka illaj bane. .. jald 😊

Chhavi ne too khana khila kar lut liye viffy ko 😉 👏

Kya fees mangi hai viffy ne ... tiffin 😛 ... baas khana khila kar dil bhi le loo viffy ka chhavi 😉


Humari bhi favorite place baan gayi hai. . ⭐️ 😃

Thodi der kya hui aane mein chhat par viffy pareshan 😛 😆

Viffy- Vasu friendship 👏

Akhir raha naa gaya viffy se. .. dewaar par kar hi 😆

viffy ko chupne ki permanent place mil gayi hai 😉

chhat. ... par milna
ladki multi talented hai 👏


Jald hi chhavi. .. viffy ko padhegi 😃

Mazedaar update 😃 👏 👏 👏
masti ... mazak ... pehchan ... 👏 👏

Kaunsa song select hoga ... kaise dil se hogi 😉

update ka intezar 😃
🤗

Thanks Archu...
I m happy... U liked it...
Itne bade replies... Sab ki kasar tum hi poori karti ho... Apne ek reply... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam ...ek update zaruri hai shagu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

Zinda rehne ke liye teri kasam ...ek update zaruri hai shagu

Hahahahhaha Archu...

Nahi Nahi abhi nahi...
Abhi karo inteeezaaarrr... 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Hahahahhaha Archu...

Nahi Nahi abhi nahi...
Abhi karo inteeezaaarrr... 😆 😆 😆

Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki...
Aayi naa kuch khabar fic ke update ki...
Par mujhe hai yakeen
Bewafa shagu nahi,
phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki
😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow nice story.
U described viraf chhavi is fabulous.
Most interesting thing abt ur writing is " shayari ".
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21


Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki...
Aayi naa kuch khabar fic ke update ki...
Par mujhe hai yakeen
Bewafa shagu nahi,
phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki
😭

Hahahhaha
Ohhh god puraane din yaad aa gaye... 😭

Gaanon mein baatein...woh haseen mulaaqatein
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 10

~Iss naye shor se khamoshi hat rahi hai...
Kuch nayi dhunon mein dil doob gaya hai...~


Yeh sab kitna naya hai humare liye...
Pehle toh college...phir yeh sab...yeh saari naye log...sab kuch naya sa hai humare liye...aur iss nayepann ka ...asli imtehaan...3 din baad hai...

Ab bass 3 din baaki hai...aur humara song tak select na hua...humein toh samjh hi nahi aa raha hai...kaise sab hoga...

Performance se ek din pehle humein council waalon ke saamne perform karna hoga...

Yahi sochte sochte hum rehearsal hall pohonch gaye...aaj Adi ji aaye nahi the...
Hum pehle pohonch gaye the...

Humne phir bhi practice shuru kar di...

Kal se lekar aaj mein kitna bada diffrence tha...kal tak jiss dance ka hum naam tak na jaante the aaj woh sahi se kar paa rahe hai...

Adi ji aa chuke the...jab humne dance khatam kiya tab unpar nazar padi...jaane woh har baar kab aate hai...

Humein pata hi nahi chal pata...

Hum unhe dekh ruk gaye...rukte hi unhone kaha...

" Hiii Raat Raani...kya baat hai...tum toh kamaal nikli...kal raat toh maine tumhari practice dekhi na thi...
Par ab dekh hairaan hun...kya baat hai...tum itna jaldi seekh gayi waah..."

"Jab guru shaandar ho toh shishya ki thodi mehnat toh banti hai na...bas isiliye..."


"Hmmm ...yeh baat toh hai..."

Main usse dekh itna hairaan hua...she is so perfect...every moves...haaye
Kya mast nazaara tha...raat ko miss kar gaya toh subah dekh liya...

Maine pucha
"kya tumne song socha"

"humne bohot socha ...par humein samjh na aaya ki iss dance form ke saath kaunsa song perfect match hoga..."

" Koi nahi Raat Rani...maine soch liya hai...ab shuru karein..."

"Ji zaroor..."

Humne practice shuru kar di...kyunki sirf aaj aur kal hi tha humare paas isse seekhne ke liye...parso counsil waalon ke saamne..ufff ...humne bhi na yeh kaisi musibat mol li hai...waqt kam...aur sab kuch ab bhi baaki hai...

Hum 1 baje tak practice karte rahe...ab tak ek para complete ho hi chuka tha...

Jo humein nahi aata woh Adi ji humein bade aasani se sikhaate ...thoda ajeeb toh zaroor tha...thoda nahi...bohot zyaada ajeeb...

Ek toh pehli baar kisi ladke se dosti upar se itne nazdeek...humare liye bohot ajeeb tha...kitne baar toh hum hichkicha jaate ...karte karte...

Par Adi ji...shayad woh kuch alag hi hai...
Humari har hichkichahat par unhone humein samjhaya...

"Dekho Chhavi ...i knw ...yeh sab tumhare liye naya hai...par i appreciate all ur efforts...so comfortable reh kar saare steps karo...thn u wil rock the stage..."

Unnki har baat humein aur himmat deti...kuch naya karne ki iss chaah ko badhawa deti...

Kayi baar aise lamhe aaye...jab humein thanks kehna hota tha ...par hum keh na paaye...par nazron se keh dete...unki har baat par hum palkein ek baar jhapkaate aur phir woh...

Yaar its so difficult to teach her...ek toh pure steps naye...upar se Raat Rani ki awkwardness...shayad thodi meri bhi...pehli baar aise hua hai...kisi ko itna qareeb paakar main hichkichaya hun...
Warna kisi ki aankhon mein aankhen daaltein... Meri nazrein kabhi na jhuki...

Par iss ke saath dance karte karte...jab jab humari nazrein zara der ke liye milti hum dono nazrein jhuka lete...

Kuch bhi kaho...yeh Raat Rani mein baat toh hai...

1 bajte hi...humne kaha...kuch khaa le...
Aur humne dabba nikala...ek humare liye...aur ek unke liye...promise jo kiya tha...
Dabba nikalte hi unhone pucha...

"Arre aaj do dabbe..."

" Ji haan...ek aapka aur ek mera..."

Hum dono khaane lage...kuch baatein woh kehte kuch hum jawaab dete...isi tarah dabba share kar rahe the...yeh kya...unka khatam kar woh humare mein se khana shuru ho gaye...

"Dekho...jab tak main tumhare dabbe se nahi khata ...tumhara dabba khtam kaise hoga...aur maine toh tumhari help karne ka zimma liya hai...toh issmein kaise peeche hatu..."

Dabba khaate hue meri nazar usske pair par padi...ohhh god sach mein kal raat usska pair par chatka laga tha...jall gaya tha...meri wajah se...yeh dekh mujhe bura laga...

Isska matlab kal raat woh bua ko sach hi keh rahi thi...jhooot nahi bol rahi thi...itni critical situations mein jo ladki jhoot na bol paaye ...Ufff...agar usse kabhi mere jhoot ka pata laga toh woh kya karegi...yeh kya cheez hai yaar...

Main yeh soch pata nahi...thoda ghabra gaya jaane kyun...

Phir mera khaane se dil uth gaya...Usske dabbe se thoda khaane ke baad maine haath dho liya...woh ab bhi khaa rahi thi...


Main laptop mein se list nikaal...saare songs ki list ke hisaab se CD's arrange karne laga...waise yeh kaam Vasu ka hai...par mujhe achcha lagega agar main usske liye yeh kar dun...aur woh thoda hairaan bhi ho jaayegi...ki CD arrange karne jaisa chota kaam uska Viru bhai bhi kar sakta hai ...

Utne mein woh aayi...haath mein phir se dabba...

"dabba kyun pakda hua hai...aaj ghar nahi jaana tumhe...der nahi ho rahi..."

"Jaa rahe hai...socha aapko yeh dete jaaye ..."


"Kya hai issmein????"

"Halwa..aapke liye...aap yahan der shaam tak rehte hai na...isiliye humne socha..."

"Wow ...halwa...toh taste karao..."

"Hum????"

" Haan tum...dekho mere haathon mein kitni dhool hai...aur tumhare siwa yahan aur koi nahi...pura baad mein khaaunga...par abhi toh taste karna banta hi hai..."

"thik hai..."

Ofooo...inn janab ka toh woh haal hai...Aa bail mujhe maar...halwa lao...toh inke munh mein daalo...

Humne chamach se ek baar toh khilaya ...phir kya unke munh se taarif baras padi...

"Yummmy...u r an amzing cook Chhavi"

Unke table par dabba rakh hum ghar chale aaye...

Woh toh chali gayi...par mere dil mein ajeeb sa darr paida kar gayi...
Jaane uss jhoot ko lekar main ab itna sensitive kyun ho raha hun...

Aaj raat jaane ka koi matlab na tha...koi baat bhi na thi...phir bhi main gaya...

Kyun pata nahi ...kyunki aage ke steps toh kal rehearsal hall mein sikhana tha...phir pata nahi main kyun gaya...

Poonam ki raat mein dekha tha...chand ghatte ghate ab bilkul nazar na aata hai...
Aasman mein andhera chaya hua hai...aur main Yug ki chatt par leta tha...

Achanak utha aur usski chatt par chala aaya...aaj toh woh chatt par thi hi na...

15 se 20 min tak deewaar se teka laga baitha raha...kal ki baat yaad aa gayi...laltain girna...uske pair par chot lagna...kuch aaj ki...mere liye dabba lana...sochta raha par woh aayi nahi...

Phir maine socha...chatt par aage ki taraf lagi jaali se neeche dekhun...koi nazar aata hai kya...

Main aage badhkar dekhne laga...pehle toh koi nazar na aaya...par phir dekha toh Raat Rani apne kamre mein aayi...jaise hi woh aayi main usske naam se chillaya...

"Chhavi...Chhavi..." Par ussne suna nahi...

Maine phir chillaya "Raat Rani"

Ussne pehle toh idhar udhar dekh usski nazar finally mujhpar padi ...

Mujhe jaali se chillata dekh...usske chehre par phirse pehle jaisi hawaiyya udd gayi...
Yeh dekh mujhe kitna mazaa ayaa...

Hum jaise hi kamre mein aaye...Raat Rani awaaz sunai di...pehle laga waham hai...phir se awaaz aane par upar dekha toh phirse Adi Ji...yeh na hum ko phanswaa kar rahenge ek din...hum dekh itna hairaan hue...daud kar seedhi par bhaage taaki chaat par jaa sake...

Itna tez bhaag kar upar pohonche...toh waha khade the . ...aur phir dewaar se teka laga baith gaye...

Hum itna tez daud kar aaye saans phoolne lagi...ishaaron mei pucha aap kyun aaye ...

"Yeh batane ke...ke Halwa bohot tasty tha..."

Humne kaha " Bas...yeh batane aap aaye hai ..."

"Haan ...yahi kehne aaya hun...zaroori hai koi badi baat ho tabhi main aaun..."

Humne kaha..." Nahi Nahi...par ab aap yaha se jaaye...yunh roz roz aana thik nahi...agar pakde gaye...toh humari bohot mushkil ho jaayegi...yeh dance ...yeh practice ...sab yahi dafan..."

Aisa kehte hue hum unhe bhagaane lage...tab unhone kaha
"thik hai...thik hai...aaj jaata hun...par kal main phir aaunga...yaad rakhna..."

"Ji zaroor kal ki kal dekha jaayega"

Aur phir woh chale gaye...aur hum neeche aa apna kaam pura karne lage...

Yeh keh kar main chala gaya...
Par asal mein main aaya toh tha iss wajah se...

Kyunki woh ladki jo mere andar uss jhoot ke liye darr paida kar gayi thi...dekhna chahta usske paas aakar bhi wahi lagta hai ya nahi...

Par jab usse mila toh woh darr...sab gayab...usske milne par woh darr waali Feeling gayab...jab ki jhoot bhi ussi se bola hai...khel bhi ussi ke saath khel raha hun...

Par jab saath ho toh uss baat ka ehsaas nahi hota ...usske jaate hi woh baat mujhe ajeeb sa sochne par majboor kar deti hai...

~Pehli dafa kisi naazuki se raabta hua hai... Jab saath ho toh resham dooriyon mein ek khayaal.~
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Part 11

~Kuch waqt abhi bhi baaki hai...
Jee lun inko main jee bhar ke...~

Kal saari raat main sochta raha ...ki agar sach mein usse pata chala ki main kaun hun toh uska reaction kya hoga...
Lekin agar pata chale toh chale...mujhe usse kya...
Chota sa khel khela hai...pata lag bhi gaya toh kaun si aafat aani hai...uss ladki ne mera kya bigaad lena hai...

Nahi Yaar...main aisa nahi kar sakta...main usse khud bataunga...aisa nahi kar sakta...

Jaane kya ajeeb musibat mein phasa liya hun...achcha khaasa ab tak enjoy kar raha tha...pata nahi yeh darr aur guilt waali feeling kabse aa gayi...as if main usse cheat toh kar raha hun par karna nahi chahta...

Usse nahi chupana chahta main kaun hun...usse batana chahta hun...main asal mein kaun ho...

Seedhi si baat ab yahi hai ki...baar baar yahi khayaal aata hai...usse main pareshan toh kar raha hun mere liye hi...par ab iss khel mein mere jazbaat mein yeh tabdeeli kaise aayi main nahi jaanta...

Bass ab itna hi chaah raha hun...ki usse chupakar kya maine bohot badi galti ki...usska kya reaction hoga jab usse pata chalega...aur main usse cheat nahi karna chahta ...yeh sab ek mazak hai...usske dil ko thes pohonchane ka mera koi iraada nahi...

Par main shayad isiliye itna soch raha hun...kyunki usske naazuk si har adaa mujhe yeh sochne par majboor kar rahi hai...

Subah hote hote...mujhe samjh aaya mujhe kya karna hai...iss event ke baad ...khud main usse ...ussi chhat par bataunga...shayad woh thodi naraz ho ...par main bataunga toh woh maan jaayegi...

Par main kyun pareshaan hun...agar woh naa bhi maani toh kya ho jaayega...usske aane ya jaane se kya faraq...

Phir bhi main usse bataunga...anjaam ab jo bhi ho...mujhe parwaah nahi...

Main usse bataunga...main Aditya nahi...Viraf hun...

Aaj practice ka last day hai...aur day aftr tmrrw event...der raat tak soch mein dooba rehne se aaj main rehearsal par der se pohoncha...

Chhavi pehle se waha thi...practice karte hue...

Mere pohonchte hi ussne poocha...

"Aap bohot pareshan ho kya????"

Ohhh god...mere aane par usska sawaal hona chaiye main late kyun hun ...par yeh toh kuch aur hi pooch rahi hai...

"Bolo...Aap bohot pareshaan nazar aa rahe ho...kya koi baat hai...jo aapko pareshan kar rahi hai..."

Yeh ladki mujhe pagal deewana bana ke hi dam legi...jo kisi ko dikhayi nahi deta...yeh woh dekhti hai...

Maine kaha...
"Nahi toh...bass aise hi...kal raat der se soya tha...shayad issiliye aisa lag raha hai...

Hum practice shuru kare"

"Ji zaroor"

Ab humne baaki ka para poora kiya ...aur phir poore song ko 2-3 baar practice ki...
Thn final practice...

Issi mein aaj 1.30 baj gaye the...humein thoda der bhi ho gayi thi...

Humne dabba nikala ...unka aur apna...

Aaj shayad yeh aakhiri dafa hota...isiliye humne unki fav kathal(jack fruit) ki sabzi banayi thi...

Yeh dekh woh bohot khush hue...Khana abhi khatam na hua tha...par aaj unki fav sabzi hone ke bawajood bhi...khaamoshi thi...

kal ki tarah zyaada baatein nahi...par jab hum khane lage toh humein thoda pareshan dekh unhone pareshani ki wajah poochi...humne bataya ki humein der ho rahi hai...unhone kaha...jao...der na karo...par bohot dheeme andaaz mein...
Pehle kabhi unhone aise andaaz mein humse baat na ki thi...hum unhe bye keh chal diye...

Jaate jaate...unke haath mein dabba thama gaye...jissmein...kheer thi...

Unhone ne ek choti si muskurahat di aur humein ishaare mein jaane ke liye kaha ...hum waha se jald se jald nikal gaye...

Kitna ajeeb hai...akhiri din tha rehearsal ka...aaj saath khana bhi nahi khaa paye...adhoore par hi chod ke usse jaana pada...

Adhoora...haan shayad yeh lafz sahi hai...humari adhoori mulaaqatein...aadhoori baatein aur adhoora sach...

Woh mujhe jaanti toh hai par mera naam nahi...

Har baat abtak adhoori hai...usska saath bhi adhoora hai...woh kab aati hai kab jaati hai...mujhe pata hi nahi chalta ...

Aaj chahta tha woh jaldi nahi jaaye...par yeh mumkin nahi...aaj mere saath khaaye ...par woh bhi adhoora reh gaya...

Aur dekho jaate jaate bhi woh mujhe kya de gayi...kheer...

Kyun...usski harkatein aisi hai...usski adaayein aisi hai...

Jo mujhe majboor karti hai...usse apni soch ki hissa banane ke liye...kyun... nahi jaanta...

Achcha hi hua...woh ab chali gayi...woh ladki ...kyun meri unn harkaton ko dekhti hai...jo koi nahi dekh sakta...mere bina kahe ...usse pata hai...ki main pareshaan hun...aakhir kaise...usse pata hai...

Isse pehle hazaar dafa main pareshaan hua hun..hazaar baar roya hun...par aajtak palat kar kabhi mujhse na poocha...phir yeh kyun...

Usska woh ek sawaal mujhe mutassir kar gaya...jaise mere dimaag aur dil ke sabhi taar hila gaya...

Aakhir kyun...

Dinbhar kaam mein busy raha...par aaj raat usse milne zaroor jaaunga...shayad main apne iss kyun ka jawaab dhoond saku...

Raat ho chuki thi...phir wahi andhera usski aur meri zindagi ki tarah...

Jab waqt hua toh main chhat par jaa pohoncha...

Socha woh abtak nahi aayi hogi...jaali se aaj bhi awaaz dun...par deewaar par jaise hi aage badha...peeche se awaaz aayi...

"Main yaha hun...jaanti thi aap aayenge...aur aaj koi risk nahi lena chahti thi...issilliye main pehle hi aa gayi..."

Main peeche qadam lete hue...usske paas thode faasle par jaa baitha...

Hum dono chup the...

Phir khaamoshi ko todte hue ussne kaha...

"Aaj aap kuch kahenge nahi...waise toh aap har dafa kuch na kuch shosha ched hi dete hai..."

" Nahi...shayad aaj nahi"

"Jaanti hun...koi baat hai jo aapko pareshaan kar rahi hai...aap na bataye...par kam se kam apne chehre par phiali iss udaasi ko toh bhagaa de...aap par suit nahi karti..."

Yeh ladki na...kya karun main isska...yeh baat sunte hi main muskura diya...

"Yeh hui na baat"

Uss dheeme se andhere mein...hum dono Chhat par baithe hai...aaj toh ussne bua ke darr se lamp bhi saath na laaya tha...aur aasman mein chaand bhi na tha...jo hum par roshni pad sake...phir bhi kitna sukun tha uss lamhe mein...iss andhere mein bhi woh meri shakal padh sakti hai...mujhe hairaani hai...

Woh uth kar jaane lagi...toh maine kaha...kaha jaa rahi ho...ussne kaha...

"hum aate hai...aap jaayiega nahi"

Main aaj phir usse milne kyun aaya hun...bewajah...

Meri iss harkat se usske sar par kitna khatra hai...phir bhi...main aaya hun...

Aur woh aaj muskuraate hue mera istaqbaal bhi kar rahi hai...yeh sab kya chal raha hai samajh nahi aata...issi soch mein dooba hun...

Itne mein woh aayi...aur phirse utne hi faasle par baith gayi...

Main usse dekhne laga ki ab yeh kya kehne waali hai...aur kya karne waali hai...

Humne Adi Ji ki taraf haath badhaya aur unke haath mein ek gift rakha...

Unnke itne saare support ki badle yeh bohot choti cheez hai...par shayad unhe pasand aaye...

"Yeh kya hai Chhavi..."

"Yeh meri taraf se aapke liye...Thank you ka nazraana ...aapke itne saare support aur help ke liye...event se pehle ek chota sa tohfa...khol ke dekhenge nahi"

" haan Zaroor"

Maine gift khola...woh ek safed kapda...chota sa roomal tha...usse pura khola toh dekha...uss roomal ke ek traf kone mein ek parinda bana tha...

Yeh dekhte hi uss parinde par haath pherte hue main bola...
"Yeh!!!!!!"

"Ji haan...yeh humne bana hai...aap puchnege nahi ...yeh parinda kyun..."

"Kyun??????"

Woh uth kar khade ho gayi...meri taraf peeth kar ke khade aasman mein dekhte hue mujhe jawaab dene lagi...

"Dekhiye hum aapse 10-12 din pehle mile hai...aapke baare mein zyaada jaante nahi...

Par haan jitna jaan paaye hai...aap humein ek parinde se nazar aate hai...

Woh Parinda jisse hawaon se baatein karna pasand hai...aasmaanon mein udna pasand hai...

Woh Parinda jo azaaad hai...ghoomta hai phirta hai...phir bhi inn aankhon mein talash nazar aati hai...

Woh talash kisi aashiyaane ke liye...jissmein woh basnaa chahta hai...

Woh aashiya ko dhoondta hai...usski talash mein aasmanon ki sair karta hai ...shayad kahi usse koi aashiyan mil jaaye ...jissmein woh apna guzaara kar sake...

Woh parinda jo kahin toofanon mein bhatak sa gaya hai...aur phirse apne aashiyan ko talaash karna chahta hai...

Jab bhi hum aapki aankhon mein dekhte hai...humein ek parinde si kashish nazar aati hai...jo door aasmanon mein udte hue bhi zameen ki khabar rakhte hai...

Jinke parr aasmanon mein udte hue bhi woh apne pairon ko zameen se juda nahi hone dete...

Yeh sab khaasiyat aap mein maujood hai bass isiliye..."

Main kya kahun...isske iss andaaz par...aur isski inn baton par...

Issne woh kaha...jo main khud bhi kabhi khud se na keh paya...

Issne meri woh khwaahish poori ki...jo main hamesha se chahta tha...isse milne ke baad maine yunhi ek din khud ke dil se kaha tha...

Kaash koi mujhe bhi padh sake...koi meri iss band kitaab ke panno ko palta sake...

Pata na tha...woh khwaahish itna jaldi puri hogi...woh bhi iss Raat Rani ke haathon...

Main ro pada...aankhon se aansun behne lage...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha...usse kya reply dun...

Khaamosh tha aur aankhon mein aansun...woh ladki jo waha khadi hai...
Sirf meri aankhon mein dekh ussne mere dill ka haal bata diya...kaise...

Usse bass dekh raha hun...aur ro raha hun...woh shyad iss andhere mein mere aansun nahi dekh sakti ...issiliye main inhe chupa nahi raha...isse pehle ke apne aansun pochta...woh paas aayi...

Khud ussne mere aansun poche... aur kehne lagi...

"Aansun????? Kya humne kuch galat keh diya...humein maaf karde...humara iraada aapko thes pohonchane ka nahi tha..."

Iss ladki ko mere aansun bhi nazar aate hai...

Itne faaslon par khade hokar bhi woh samajh gayi ki main ro raha hun...aur ab mere pass baithi hai...

Usske paas aate hi...main keh pada...

"Jaanti ho...

Jab main 7 saal ka tha...tab Mom aur dad ka accident hua tha...Dad bach gaye...par doctors Mom ko na bacha sake...woh mujhe chod kar chali gayi...akela...

Dad apne business aur kaam mein busy aur main akela...woh mujhe waqt nahi de paate the...na hi woh kabhi mujhe samajh paaye...ki main kitna akela hun...mujhe unki zaroorat hai...

Kuch saal baad unhone dusri shaadi kar li...mere aur Do bhai hai...

Par main aaj bhi akela...waise toh main apne dad ke naam se hi mashhoor hun...

Jab ki asliyat toh yeh hai...unka aur mera koi waasta hi nahi...

Hum ek dusre se zyaada baat bhi nahi karte...sirf haan ya naa tak hi humari baat simit rehti hai...

Mujhe toh yeh bhi yaad nahi...kab maine unke saath khulke kabhi baat ki...

Ghar par main jitna shaant hun...College life aur bahar utna hi out spoken...shayad isse hi componsation kehte hai...

Meri asal haqeeqat se koi bhi aashna nahi...

Tum woh pehli insaan ho meri zindagi mein...jissne mujhe mera aaina dikhaya hai...bina mere kuch kahe...


Mujhe nahi pata main tumse yeh sab kyun keh raha hun...phir bhi...

Thank you..."

Main chup ho gaya...hum dono khamosh baithe the...

Woh meri baatein sunte hue aasmano ko dekh rahi hai...Usse dekh yahi soch raha hun...

Tumne sahi kaha...Chhavi...

Main woh udta parinda hun...jo azaad hai...par main udte udte thak gaya hun...
Main ab kisi ki qaid mein apna ghar dhoondna chahta hun...kisi ki giraft mein rehna chahta hun...jo mujhe baandh ke rakhe...par kaun...kya tum...par yeh kaise mumkin hai...

Aur phir maine tumse nazrein pher li...

Tab tumne kaha...

"Shayad yahi zindagi hai...jisse hum kuch jaante aur bohot kuch jaanne ki koshish mein hamesha lage rehte hai...aur kuch se sabak haasil karte hai..."

Hum yeh keh chup ho gaye...kyunki unki aur humari takleef ek si maaloom hoti thi...humara bhi dard yahi tha...

Jab unki aankhon mein aansun dekhe toh humein apna dard dikhayi dene laga...humein laga hi tha...kuch toh aisi baat thi jo unhe pareshaan kar rahi thi...par hum poochte usse pehle hi unhone apna saara dard keh diya...

Par hum kya kehte...humari zabaan bhi khaamosh ho gayi thi...

Bas phir kuch der baad humne kaha...

"Aap ko der nahi ho rahi kya...waqt bohot guzar gaya hai...
Ab humein bhi chalna chahiye...

Kal rehearsal hall mein milenge...council waalon ke saamne performance se pehle...ek baar practice kar le toh achcha hoga..."

Unhone zyaada kuch na kaha...bas...

"Hmmm..."

Main jab tak Yug ki chhat par pohonchta...woh wahi khadi mujhe dekh rahi hai...aur main usse ...

Hum unhe dekhne lage...ki aaj kisi ka dard zubaan par aaya hai...aur woh shakhs mere saamne khada hai...

Unke jaate hi phir hum neeche aa gaye...

Main yaha wapas aa toh gaya...par aana nahi chahta tha...usse aur baatein karna chahta tha...

Aaj gaya tha kuch sawaal karne...mere darr ki wajah talaash karne...aur lauta hun...kayi saare sawaalon...kayi khushiyon ke saath...
Aur iss pyaar se diye gaye roomal ke saath ...jo ab mera hai...aur meri ek nayi pehchaan ke saath...Parinda...


Humare gift ne aisa kya kar diya...jo woh ro pade...aur apna haal-e-dil mujhse keh diya...jo aajtak kisi se na kaha...shayad...

Humne woh kaha...jo woh sunna chahte the...issiliye Aditya Ji ki aankhen chalak padi...

~Qarb ki gehraaiyon ko choo ke aayi hai...
Yeh kaunsa rukh hai jo meri aor badha hai...~
Edited by ShagufElina - 10 years ago
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Part 12

~Darwaaze pe dastak de aaya hai yaha koi...
Chahu usse bulana par meri pohonch nahi woh...~


Aakhir woh mere khayalaat ko kaise padh gayi...main khud nahi jaanta...

Usski iss baat se itna hairaan hun...ki iss personality contest se mera dhyaan hi nahi lag raha ...ek din mein contest hai...aur main usski baatoh mein dooba hun...
Kyun pata nahi...shayad usski baatein mujhe itna mutassir kar gayi...ki mera dhyaan hi nahi hatt raha usse...

Aaj council ke saamne uske saath performance hai...jo ki maine cancel karwaya hai...kyunki already mere zehan mein itne saare sawaal aur mann mein itni saari feelings ek saath hai...

Main iss Viraf-Adi jhoot ko jitna avoid kar saku better hai...council ke saamne agar aayi toh shayad sach ka pata chal jaaye...

Issiliye maine rehearsal ke time hi...Vasu ko bulaya taaki ...Raat Rani ko lage...formality poori ho gayi...

Aaj ki yeh raat bohot lambi hai...par main bohot khush hun...chahta nahi...iss raat ki subah ho...kyunki aaj meri khwaahish poori hui hai...iss pal ko khulke jeena chahta hun...

Subah hote hi hum jaldi jaldi nikal gaye...kyunki aaj sirf ek performance tha bass...aur saare contestent se bhi aaj shayad mulaaqaat ho...

Kyunki jab hum hote hai...tab unnmein se koi nahi...issiliye kabhi kisi se mili nahi...

Aaj humein yeh bhi batayenge ke ...humein entry kaise karni hai...kaise khud ko represent karna hai...

Hum 7 baje pohonch gaye...

Thodi der intezaar kiya...toh dekha...Vasu ander aayi...aur hum se gale milkar hiii kaha...

Waise bhi woh itni cute hai...humein toh ussi din se pasand hai...jab humne usse pehli baar baat ki thi...

"So aapke partner kaha hai..."

"Ji woh aate hi honge...ab tak toh unhe aa jana chaiye tha...pata nahi kaha reh gaye..."

"Jab tak woh nahi aata ...i mean to say...tumhara partner...main tumhe baaki cheezon ke baare mein batati hun..auditorium mein chale..."

"Ji ...thik hai..."

Mike kaise pakadna hai...kaise aana hai...kaise jaana hai...hum kab entry karenge...kitne der stage par rehna hai...
Judges se kis tarah baat karni hai...jab hum aayenge toh kaunsa background music hoga...kis style mein aana hai...aur bhi jaane kya kya...

Yeh sab karte karte jaane 3 ghanta kaise beet gaya...itne waqt mein Vasu se humari achchi khaasi dosti ho gayi thi...woh humein aur pyaari lagne lagi thi...

Vasu aur hum...kisi baat par zor zor se hass rahe the...aur thoda hassi mazak kar rahe the...humari nazar auditorium ki seats par padi...

"Aditya Ji..."
Unhe dekhte hi humare munh se nikla...woh waha baithe hue the ...woh kab aaye humein pata nahi...humesha aisa hi hota hai...unnke aane ki khabar humein kabhi nahi lagti...aisa lagta hai...woh pehle se har jagah maujood hai...
Kya unhone suna hoga...jab hum Vasu se unki shaan mein qaseeda padh rahe the...nahi nahi...humne unhe abhi dekha hai...woh baatein toh humne bohot der pehle kahi thi...

Vasu ne bhi kaha...
"Ohhh Adi...finally tum aa gaye...ab pls jaldi se apna performance do...i m getting late..."

Main wahan se uth stage par aaya...Raat Rani khadi thi...Vasu neeche utar ka jaane lagi...aur jaate jaate kaha...

"Stage par aag lagne waali hai...i m so excited to see u with her...for the first time..."

Maine usse ek muskurata hua look diya aur aage badh gaya...

Raat Rani ke saath kal raat ke baad aaj meri awkwardness ab bohot badh gayi thi...mujhe toh aisa lag raha tha...
Jab pehli baar ussne mere saath dance kiya tha...utni hichkichahat usse bhi na hui hogi...jitni aaj mujhe hai...pata nahi kyun...

Par inn sab ehsaasat ko pare rakh...maine usske saath performance diya...ek dam picture perfect types...Vasu ka reaction dekhne laayak tha...

Ussne kitna zor zor se clap ki...woh stage par daudte hue aayi...sabse pehle Chhavi ko hug kiya...aur kaha...

"Omg...u r so so so awsome..."

Phir meri baari aayi...mere paas aate hi...ussne kaha...

"Viru aaga lag gayi..Haaye...koi mere sar par thanda paani daalo...is tht really u?????? I cant believe this...i have seen u dancing many times...but this ...this was beyond my imaginations and my words...u rocked Babua..."

Main kya kehta...usski baat sunn hass diya...Vasu bhi wahan se hasste hue chali gayi...
Aur phir Raat Rani ko dekha...woh shayad jaane ki tayyari kar rahi thi...

Maine usse kaha...
"Thik hai main aata hun...shayad tum bhi nikal rahi ho kya..."

"Ji nahi...abhi hum kuch der rukenge... jaane mein waqt hai...kal ke liye kuch lines likh le...humein kya kis tarah kehna hai..."

"lines likh le...pls dont tell me ...tum kavi(poet ) bhi ho...and poems likhti ho..."

Hum zor se hass diye unki baat sunn...
"Ji aapne sahi andaaza lagaya...Heheheh...haan zyaada nahi...
Par khud ka dil behlaane ke liye kuch likh lete hai..."

Ohhh God yeh ladki sach mein...maine ussdin sahi kaha tha...yeh treasure hunt types girl hai...har mod pe naya avtaar...

"Batao kya likhti ho..."

"Woh abhi toh humare paas kuch nahi...book ghar par hai..."

"Koi nahi...shayera ji...aaj hum waise bhi aane waale hai...tab dekh lenge...intezaar kijiyega humara..."

Yeh keh kar main chala gaya...aur woh bhi mere baad nikal gayi...

Arre yaar speech toh mujhe bhi chahiye kal ke liye...

Vasu ne mere liye sab arrangements toh kiya hoga...because...kal hum counsil waalon ka bhi introduction hai sabse pehle...event ussi se start hoga...

And As a General secretery...this will be my first official speech...aise toh main hamesha bolta hun...aur har koi suntaa hai...

But this one has to be special...
Dekhta hun ussne kya kiya hai mere liye...nahi toh Adi ka gala pakdu...kaamchor kisi kaam ka nahi...aur yeh Nandu...usse sirf complain karna aata hai...

Main pehli fursat mein Adi ke paas gaya...aur kal ke schedule ka poora pata kiya...kisse kya bolna hai...
Council ka first introduction and jab usse meri speech ka papar maanga toh kya dekhta hun...

Iss Nandu ki bachchi ne Vasu ko budhdhu banaya hai...aur itni bakwaas aur sadi si...ghise pite words ke saath likh diya hai...

Maine peripheral members ko bhi contact kiya...team mein likhne waale kitne saare hote hai...mere nikamme dosto ke alawa aur bhi kayi kaam ke log hai...jo sab manage karte hai...

Par koi baat na bani...Vasu ne kaha...

"Chillax bro...main hun na kuch na kuch intezaam karti hun...par abhi...meri hawaiyaan udi hai...Chhavi ka performance dekh"

"Yes...Chhavi...Ohhh Vasu...u r too cute..."

Usska gaal khechte hue main chalta bana...Raat Rani abhi college ke bahar nikli na hogi...
Bhaag kar gaya...aur usse dhoondne laga...rehearsal hall...auditorium...sab jagah dekh liya...

Class toh woh pichle ek hafte se gayi nahi...kahin nikal toh nahi gayi...

Gate ke paas tak aaya...shayad woh chali gayi ...ab raat ko hi milegi...

Peeche mudkar college wapas jaane laga toh dekha...

College ke garden mein...ghaas par baithi...ek book mein kuch likh rahi hai...

Main khush ho gaya...aur daud ke usske paas gaya...

"Ohhh tum yaha hun...kaha kaha dhoonda tumhe.."

"Aap...kuch kaam tha kya aapko..."

"Haan...actually mujhe speech chahiye thi...kal ke liye"

"Aapko...kyun chahiye"

Viffy yeh kya kar raha hai...control kar beta...

"Arre mera matlab hai...mujhe speech chahiye...Viraf ke liye..."

"Toh hum kya madad kar sakte hai...aapki..."

"Arre tumne toh abhi upar kaha tha...tum lekhika...shayera ho...toh pls kuch likh do na...meri khaatir...warna meri shaamat nahi..."

"Arre par hum kya likhen...hum kuch nahi jaante ...woh bhi unn janab ke liye...hum kyun likhe..."

"Arre Yaar usske liye nahi...meri khaatir...mera kaam hai...usse yeh speech likh kar dena...par jo maine di thi...woh reject ho gayi...pls pls...kar dona...i wil help u na...speech mein kya kya zaroori hona chahiye...pls haan keh do..."

"Ji kyun nahi...hum aapke liye zaroor likhenge...bass aap humein bataye likhna kya kya hai..."

"Actually meri reject ho gayi ghise pite words ki wajah se...shayad tumhara andaaz usse pasand aaye...aur woh tumse mutassir ho jaaye...kyun kya kehti ho..."

"Ji shukriya...aisi meherbaani ka ...humein apne andaaz se kisi ko mutassir nahi karna...woh bhi...unn janab ko ...kabhi nahi...par haan...aap befikar rahiye hum...aapka kaam kar denge...

"Toh phir thik hai...main aaj raat le lunga...aakar..."

Woh jaate jaate piche mude...aur zor se kaha...

"Thank You Raat Rani..."

Ofooo iss tarah public mein...kya kahe inhe hum...

Ghar aakar saare kaam jaldi khatam kiye...kyunki humare dress ka bhi thoda sa kaam baaki tha...woh complete karte humein shaam ho gayi...

Raat tak speech complete karni thi...humne usspar sochna shuru kar diya...8 baje tak humara saara kaam khatam kar...hum apne kamre mein baith kar likhne lage...

Sochte phir kuch likhte kuch 2 ghante guzar gaye...hum bohot thak gaye the...likhte likhte jaane kab table par hi aankh lag gayi...

Humein awaaz aayi Chhavi...par humein laga shayad khwaab hai...humne awaaz ko ansuni kar di...

Phir kisi ne humare kandhon par haath rakh kar kaha...Chhavi...


Humne thodi si aankh kholte hue dekha...

"Aap????"

Unhone humare munh par haath rakha...aur upar aane ka ishara kiya...aur dheeme qadam badhate hue chale gaye...

Humare hosh udd gaye...woh humare kamre mein aa gaye the...yeh sach mein dekhna humein phaswaa ke rahenge...

Waise humein thoda yeh soch hassi bhi aayi...Adi ji kis tarah dheema dheema qadam badha kar upar gaye...taaki unke aane jaane ka kisiko pata nahi lage...Hahahaahh

Humne bhi thoda idhar udhar dekha...neeche check kiya...bua soyi ki nahi...waise bhi raat ke 12.30 baj gaye the..aadhe logon ki aadhi neendein ho gayi iss waqt...phir hum upar chal diye...uss paper ke saath...

Kitna ajeeb hai...raat ke iss waqt bhi humein unse milne mein koi hichkichahat nahi...jaane kyun...par chup kar chup kar milna bhi kya ajeeb hai...woh bhi Adi Ji se...kabhi socha na tha...aise risk bhi utha sakti hai Guddo Raani...bachpan se mile hai...chhat par...lekin sirf humari Meethi ke liye...
Par Adi Ji...ab toh woh bhi apne se hi lagte hai ...

Upar pohonch gayi...aaj Amawasya ki raat thi...ek dam Andhera chaya hua tha...Aasman mein...aur thand hawaayein chal rahi thi...

Jab hum pohonche toh Adi Ji baithe the...hum bhi unse kuch faasle par jaa baithe...aur unhe woh speech ka paper de diya...Andhera tha...toh woh padh toh na sake...par kehne lage...

"Balike...mujhe tum par...shat pratishat vishwaas hai...issilye isse padhne ki koi aavashyakta nahi...Sukhi Raho...Jug Jug Jiyo"

Unke aise lafz sunn...hum zor se hass diya...
Hum hass hi rahe the...unhone humare haath par kuch rakha...aur kaha...

"Chhavi...tum isse dekh yeh na samjhna...maine tumhe copy kiya hai...haan thoda sa...par jo bhi hai... bass hai"

"Par yeh hai kya????"

" Tumhare liye Tohfa..."

"Humare liye...par hum yeh nahi rakh sakte..."

"Arre...tohfa dene waale ko saamne se inqaar kar rahi ho...sara sar insult...kal jab tumne diya tha...toh maine chupchap rakha tha...now u keep this..."

"Arre par hum yeh kaise le sakte hai...Bua se kya kahenge..."

"Ohhh toh aisa kaho na...lena chahti ho par Bua se darr lagta hai...isiliye upar upar se nakhra dikha rahi ho..."

"Nahi Nahi aisi baat nahi...hum sach keh rahe hai...Hum nahi le sakte yeh..."

"Ofooo...toh tum keh dena mere dost ne di hai..."

"Par humara toh koi dost aisa nahi..."

"Kya baat karti ho...woh hai na...tumhari Saheli...kya naam hai usska...jo aajkal gaayeb hai..."

"Meethi...aur woh gaayeb nahi...kisi kaam se bahar gayi hai...kal aa jaayegi..."

"Haan ...jo bhi hai...ab toh rakh lo...ya ab bhi na kahogi...Pls ab rakh bhi lo...kya tumhare saamne haath jodu...minnate karun...agar kahogi toh woh bhi kar lunga..."

"Ji Thik hai...Thank You...par issmein kya hai..."

"Aaa aaa aaan...abhi nahi...mere jaane ke baad kholna..."

"Ji thik hai...waise tum na bohot nakhre dikhati ho...aur haan...Raat Rani ji...tumhe nahi lagta...tum mujhse ab kuch zyaada argue karti ho...Bolo...bolo"

"Hum...nahi toh..."

"Achcha chodo yeh sab...raat bohot ho gayi hai...aur waise bhi tumhare Sar par hamesha Bua naam ki talwaar latki hoti hai...tum jao...main bhi chalta hun..."

Woh uthkar jaane lage...

Jab deewar paar kar li toh unhone humein kaha...
"Thanks ..."

Humne poocha
"Kis liye...Ohhh yeh speech.."

"Ji nahi...mera tohfa qubool karne ke liye..."

Hum yeh sunkar dang reh gaye...

Phir woh apni aor aur main apni...

Fauran se daud kar neeche aaye...dekhe toh hai kya...

Ek box tha...itne pyaari packing...jab usse khola toh ander ek chota sa kagaz aur ek chota box tha...

Pehle humne uss kagaz ko khola...

Usspar likha tha...

Raat Rani ...

"Tumhare inn pairon ko uss raat chot pohchayi thi...
Aaj yeh unhi pair ki khoobsurti mein izaafa karenge...

Tumhare thirakte pairon ke saath inhe bhi kuch harkat milegi...
Innki chhan-chhanahat se saara samaa gunj uthega..."

Jab box khola toh ...ussmein chandi ki payal thi...itni khoobsurat payal humne aaj tak na dekhi thi...uss payal mein...kayi saare ghungroo the...

Dil chaha inhe pehen lun...par jaane kiss khayal se inhe sambhal ke phirse rakh diya...unka yeh tohfa...waqai bohot haseen hai...

Aur woh kagaz...unhe humari itni chote se dard ka bhi khyaal hai...humne kabhi socha na tha...woh hum par itna hi dhyaan dete hai...

Hum unse bohot zyaada mutassir ho gaye...yahi sochte sochte...jaane kab aankh lag gayi...

~ek khwaahish ek adaa ne dono ko joda hai...
Ab kaunsa woh pehlu jissne dono ko moda hai...~
Edited by ShagufElina - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arse baad update mila 🥳🥳🥳🥳

Thanks u 😃 😃😃 😃😃


Aye haay...kya baat...dono se taraf se pehele ho rahi hai 😃👏


waah Viraf👏 Khana khatam karne mein bhi saath dena hai 👍🏼

Arre waah Halwa ⭐️ Thoda hume bhi chahiye 😳😉

Bechari ko chain se saas bhi nahi lene deta 😆 😆

Viraf ka darna natural hai
Soch bhi nahi sakta ki Chhavi kaise react karegi sach jaan kar



Lovely update👏

Mujhe Halwa part sabse achha laga


Edited by Archi21 - 10 years ago

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