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ShagufElina thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Wow...what an update...fantastic.

thanks Samima...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: glanjs1965

Awesome Shegu.😃👏👏

thanks dear...
glad u like it...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Teri ulfat mein jila hun iss tarh...
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Teri aankhon mein basaa hun iss tarah
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Teri khusbu se mehka hun iss tarah...
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Tere khwaabon mein dooba hun iss tarah...
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Teri yaadon mein thehra hun iss tarah...
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Teri baaton mein uljha hun iss tarah...
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Teri lehron mein behtaa hun iss tarah...
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Teri awaaz mein gunjaa hun iss tarah...
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Teri har waqt mein bastaa hun iss tarah...
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Teri naazuk adaa ka qaayel hun iss tarah...



Viraf as our Viru Bhai...
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Pehchaan raeeson waali...
shakal kabeeron waali...
Harketein mawaali waali...
Dil chichoron waala...
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Viraf ...
Ameer baap ki aulaad...doston ke saath ghoomna...phirna ...hai shuak...
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Baaton mein ...Dil phek aashique...
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Masti...mazak...bindaas...bhai...
zindagi ka maza...yahi hai uske jeene ka tareeka...
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Zindagi ki na koi bisaat hai...na hi koi maqsad...
jeena bas yunhi chal raha haste khelte hue...



Chhavi as our gudiya...
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Sunehri awaaz...
meetha andaaz...
Chehra purkashish...
Nazron se kare baat...
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Chhavi...
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Ghar ki gudiya...sabki dulaari...baba ki pyaari...
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masum ...saada...lehje mein nami...sharm jiska gehna...
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Zindagi ki ahmiyat...waqt ka istemaal...
Logon se pyaar ...aur har waqt madad ko tayyar...


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I hope u guys like it...
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If u like...pls hit like button...
Toh phir main aage continue karu...
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Shagufta...

Index...
Intro...page 1
Part 1...page 3
Part 2...page 5
Part 3... page 8
Part 4 ...page 9
Part 5 page 10


The way u describe your imagination for Ek Boond Ishq through this poem...its mind blowing 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Shagu I have no words to describe!! Awesome!! Xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: MastaT

Shagu I have no words to describe!! Awesome!! Xxx

Thanks Mohi...thank u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: faizari



<font size="3">The way u describe your imagination for Ek Boond Ishq through this poem...</font><font size="3">its mind blowing</font>👏

Thanks Faiza...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Archi21

Shagu⭐️
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Kya bakhubi rishto ki pechan karayi hai tum ne👏

Chhavi ka apne papa ke pyar ke liye intezar⭐️😭

uss intezar ke bahut khub baya kiya hai tum ne👏

Chhavi ka uss anjan ladke ke liye bhagna😉😃

intezar hai aage kya hoga😉

kya mil payege Viraf-Chhavi😉


thanks Archu...

Mujhe bht khushi hui...tumhe achcha laga...

Jald hi milenge ViCha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Sorry for the super late reply!

I had intended to comment earlier but I forgot!

Sorry!

Coming to the update.. It was amazing!

Loved it!

And thanks for the pm! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

<font color="#ff33cc">Sorry for the super late reply!</font>


<font color="#ff33cc">I hadintendedto comment earlier but I forgot!</font>

<font color="#ff33cc">Sorry!</font>

<font color="#ff33cc">Coming to the update.. It was amazing!</font>

<font color="#ff33cc">Loved it!</font>

<font color="#ff33cc">And thanks for the pm!😃</font>

thanks dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Part 6:

Viraf...ab iss shakhs ki talaash hai...humein...

Aaj dekha humne college mein...par woh jaa chuke the...

Ab hum kya kare...

Kaise humaara naam nikalwaaye iss PC se...

Ab kal list bhi lagne waali hai...humein kiss ke saath perrform karna hai...

Laakh poochne par bhi...koi councel member na mila...

Lagtaa hai...baat ab kal hi banegi...

Hum aur Meethi ghar aa gaye...

Do din se dhoond rahe hai...na koi councel member help kar raha hai...na hi unn janab ka pata chal raha hai...

Kaise iss musibat se baahar nikle hum...

Agar haan keh bhi de toh...toh hum waqt kaise de paayenge...hum extra waqt nahi de sakte...ghar ka maahol aisa nahi...

Ab sirf 10 din bache hai...PC ke liye hum kya karein...

Agle din college gaye...phirse list lagi...

Kiss junior ke saath kaunsa seniour perform karega and they wil be their supporter for whole event...

Jaise.hi pata chala...hum aur meethi dekhne gaye...ab aur kaunsi musibat ne dastak di hai...

List mein humaara naam toh tha hi...jab upar se neeche jab dekhne lage...humaari ungli humaare naam par aa kar thehar gayi...

Yeh kya...humein shock laga...

Yahi baaki tha...

Chhavi Panadey----Viraf Patel...

Humaara supporter GS hai...ab hum kya karein...

Meethi : "achcha hua na...ab toh usse tumse milna hi hoga...

Tumhaare saath perform karna hai...toh tumse milna toh hoga hi guddo..."

Humne uss din bhi usse dhundaa...

Phir ek councel member mili...Nandni...usse sab Nandu Nandu keh rahe the...

Ussne kaha...

Nandni: Viffy toh baahar gaya hai...do chaar din...woh kal tak waapas aayega...

Par tumhe tumhaara naam waaps kyun lena hai...ussdin do bade usse gaana gaaya tha...ab kya hua darr gayi kya..."

Maine kaha...

Aap humein aisa nahi keh sakti...hum darein nahi hai...humaare paas waqt nahi hai...inn sab ke liye...

Nandu: "Waqt nahi hai...kya yeh sab mazaak lag raha hai...yeh toh sirf bahaana hai...loosers maidaan chod kar bhaagte hai...why m i telling u all this...wasting my time on u"

Yeh keh kar...humein gandaa sa look dekar chali gayi...

Pura din isi khyaal mein guzra ki kab kal aaye aur kab hum...humara naam waapas le...usse mil kar...

Par hum looser nahi hai...hum maidaan chod kar nahi bhaag rahe...

In sab ke liye...waqt chahiye...mehnat toh hum din raat kar le...par waqt kaise de...clg mein...der tak rukna hoga...

Raat hote hi meethi se chhat par mile...

Meethi:"Toh aaj ka gaana kya hai Guddo"

"hum nahi jaante...kuch samjh nahi aa raha...uljhan mein phase hai..."

Meethi: agar tum humein gaana nahi sunaogi...toh humein neend kaise aayegi...

"Achcha thik hai...meri miththu...par sirf do line..."

Meethi:"Chalega"

~Uljhan suljhe na...Rastaa sujhe na~
~jaaon kahan main...jaaun kahan~
~hai dil ko samjhaya...na yeh dil seh paaya~
~jaaun kahan main...jaaun kaha~

Meethi: Yeh kya ... .haaye meri guddo udaas mat ho...tumhaari mushkil ka koi na koi hall niklega...

Aur yeh keh keh kar mujhe gale se lagaa liya...

Hum phir apne apne bistar mein...raat ki chaadar odh kar so gaye...pareshaaniyon ko bhulaa kar...jaane kal subah kya hall nikle...

Sunehri subah phirse hui...

Shayad aaj iss uljhan se door ho jaaun...

Hum aur Meethi college ke liye nikal gaye...

Cycle rockshaw par sawaar baatein karne lage...

"Meethi tumhe kya lagta hai...aaj baat banegi kya??????"

Meethi: guddo hum kya kahe...waise bhi kya kya sun rakha hai...uss Viru bhai ke baare mein...

"Kya???? Humein nahi pata...batao toh humein bhi"

Meethi: "woh GS toh ab bana hai...par usska dabdabaa pehle se hai...pure clg par raaj chalaata hai apna...

Suna hai...usse sab Viru bhai kehte hai...koi bhi kaam ho sab usse hi madad maangte hai...

Zyaada kuch toh pata nahi...woh hazrat ganj ke jo politician hai na bade waale ...unka beta hai...

Issiliye...talented hai...par bhai bhi toh hai..."

"Offfooo ...chup kar jao...tum humaari dost ho ya uski taraf daar...

Abtak yahan waqt ka maslaa tha...ab toh bhaigiri aa gayi hai...ohhh...hum kahan phas gaye..."

Meethi: Sorry guddo...tension na lo...aaj kuch toh baat ban jaayegi...

Hum college pohonch gaye...class attend ki...


Phir talaash bhi toh karni hai...unn The Bhai ki...

Kya karun...

Phirse hum dhundne lage...ek ladki se poocha toh ussne kaha...Viru bhai ka pa nahi...

Par maine Aditya ko dekha hai...aap usse poocho...

Main poocha "Aditya kaun????"

Woh ladki ne humein itne bure andaaz mein kaha...

Do mahine ho gaye clg mein aa kar Aadi ke baare mein pata nahi...kaisi ladkiyan hai...

Woh dekho wahan khada hai...black mein...

Door ek group khada tha...woh log masti kar rahe the...

4 se 5 log khade the...

Hum unki taraf badh kar jaane lage...

Wahan pohonchte isse pehle...woh sab wahan se jaane ke kagaar par the...

Isse pehle ke woh sab wahan se chale jaate...

Hum jaldi se bhaag kar gaye...uss black shirt waale ko peeche se jaldi se kaha

" suniye...rukiye zara..."

Woh ruk gaya...gaya nahi...

Humne kaha "Aditya"

Woh jaise hi mudhe...

Humaari aankhen hairaani se phati ki phati reh gai...hum saath mein itne khush ho gaye...

"Huhhh"
Yeh mujhe Adi kyun keh rahi hai...isse pehle kuch sochu samjhu...woh shuru ho gayi...aur aisa shuru ki ...kya kahun...

Woh humein dekh raha tha...

"Aap...Aap...Aditya...matlab Adi ho..."

"Aap humaare clg mein padhte ho..."

I m so sorrry ... Sorrry...sorry...

Huushhh ab humein sukun mila...

ussdin ke liye...humnne aap ka chehraa nahi dekha tha...aap ne humaari madad ki...par galti humaari bhi nahi hai...waise hai bhi...aur nahi bhi...

Aur jab aapne humein nukkad par smile di toh humein laga koi lafangaa hai...ooopppsss sorry...

Humein kya pata aap ho...baad mein humein pata chala...and Thank u ...Thanku

Aap ne bura toh nahi maana na..."

Main kya kahun...jab tak usski bak bak chal rahi thi mujhe saamne se Adi jaata hua nazar aaya...ussne bhi black pehnaa hua tha...toh maamla yeh hai...yeh Raat Raani toh nonstop bol rahi hai...kya kehta...naa mein sar hilaa diya...main ek hairaan aur pareshaan sa expression ...apne aap aisa ho gaya...

Ussne na mein sar hilaaya...woh sirf sunn raha tha...aur pata nahi...ajeeb se hairaani waale expression de raha tha...

Meethi ne mera haath pakad kar ehsaas dilaya...

Meethi: guddo...control...

Ohhh yeh main kya keh rahi thi...Non stop...

Maine phir kaha ...

"Sorry...asal baat yeh hai...ki mujhe Viru bhai se milna hai...kya tum unke dost ho...

Woh toh yahan ke Bhai hai na...sab par unka raaj chalta hai...maarna peetna...dhamkaana...ragging lena...sabko apne control mein rakhna...

Bht kuch sunaa hai...unke baare mein...aap toh jaante hai...humein inn gundon se door rehna pasand hai..."

"Gunday????"
mere saamne mujhe hi gundaa...bhai keh rahi hai...meri hi burai kar rahi hai...iss chudail ko toh main bataunga...

Ussne kaha..."Gunday?????"

Log toh yahi keh rahe hai...woh Bhai hai na...

Humein apna naam PC se waapas lena hai...4 din se unhe dhoond rahi hun...

Par abtak na mile...

Woh kya hai na...waqt ka maslaa hai...

"Waqt????"
Yeh kya bakwaas kar rahi hai...waqt kaise nahi ha isske paas...ohhh samjha...sharafat ki moorti hai na...college se ghar late kaise jaa sakti hai...chudail kahin ki...

Ussne phir poocha..."Waqt?????"

Haan hum extra waqt nahi de sakte...humein ghar par waqt par jo pohonchna hai...

Kya aap humaare liye...unse baat karenge...upar se...

Humaara naam bhi unke saath hai...

"Matlab?????"
Arre haan...
Ohhh toh Nandu ne isska naam mere saath daal diya...Ufff ab mujhe isske saath perform karna hoga...waise accha hi hai...ab aur pareshaan karunga...


Ussne phir pucha ..."Matlab????"

Matlab ...seniour aur juniour ki jo list lagi hai...

Ussmein humaara performance unke saath hai...

Ab batao aap hi...hum kya karein...kaise inn sab ke liye waqt nikaala...

Meethi ne phir kaha ...

Meethi: bad kar guddo...bht hua...kuch zyaada nahi bol diya...

Ohhh...haan lagtaa toh hai...

Maine kaha...pls...aap Viraf se baat kar loge...pls...

Haan...karungaa na...Raat Raani...ab apni itni taarif suni hai...aapke munh se...baat toh karni hogi...main bhi toh dekhu...ab aage kya hoga...Chhavi Urf guddo raani...ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega...
Maine haan kaha...aur chalte bana...


Ussne kaha...

"Haan...main karta hun..."

Yeh kehkar wahan se chala gaya...jaate jaate ek baar mudh kar dekha...

Iss baar maine usse ek pyaari si cute smile di...

Jitni hairaani pareshaani...meri baatein sunte waqt uske chehre par thi...woh sab door kar ussne bhi ek muskurahat di...aur chalaa gaya...

Usske jaate hi...hum khush ho gaye...ki baat ban gayi...hum itne khush...

Yahan Meethi ke sawaalon ki bauchaar shuru...

Meethi: haaye re humaari sayaani guddo...toh yeh hai woh saiyaan...

Aur tum...humari shaant shaant guddo...aaj rajdhaani expresss se bole jaa rahi thi...woh bhi ek ladke ke saamne...waah...

Bichaare ki shakal dekhne laayak thi...

Ek ek lafz mein baatein kar raha tha...tumne usse bolne na diya..."

Humne kaha...

"Arre...tum hum par ilzaam de rahi ho...galat baat hai..."

Meethi: toh janaab ka naam Aditya hai...waah waah...maza aa gaya milkar...

Humne kaha..."chup kar pagli..."

Ab aaj hum khush khush ghar aaye...humein yakeen tha...woh itna achcha hai...

Woh humaari madad zaroor karega...uss Viraf naam ki bala ko humse door rakhne mein...bas humein kal ka intezaar hai...

Usske jawaab ka...

Hum jab raat ko sone gaye...toh achcanak humein yeh sab sochte sochte...yeh khayaal aaya...

Kitni ajeeb baat hui aaj hum dono ke beech...

Main kehti rahi ...

Woh suntaa raha...

Main lafzon ko piroti rahi...

Woh unhe aankhon se samet'ta raha...

Sahi kaha ...Meethi ne...

Maine kuch zyaada hi keh diya...par mujhe yeh sab toh kehnaa tha hi...

Hum usse maafi kaise na maangte...ussdin humein kitna bura lagaa tha...

Yeh sochte hue hum so gaye...

Phir ek nayi subah...phirse ek jawaab ka intezaar ...

Hum aur Meethi...jaldi jaldi...College...pohonche...

Lo aa gayi...ab lagega jhatka...here we go...badi aayi...mujhe gundaa kehne waali...ab sharaft ko sharif tariqe se hi batana hoga na...ki main kitna sharif hun...bike par hi baitha tha...

Woh aaj humein gate par hi mil gaye...Aditya...apni bike par baithe the...

Hum kuch poochte jaakar usse pehle ussne kaha...

"Nahi...Baat nahi bani...ussne kaha...tumhe pehle sochna chahiye tha...agr aisa tha toh tumne 1st round mein perform kyun kiya...aur select hui...extremly sorry... "

Hum udaas ho gaye...aur kaha...

"aap kyun sorry keh rahe ho...pata nahi...kiss mitti ka bana hai...hum ne apni pareshaani batayi na...phir bhi...nahi maana...bewakoof kahin ka..."

Yeh ladki...iski himmat...mujhe bewakoof keh rahi hai...sach mein...abhi batata isse...par abhi nahi...Viffy...sahi waqt par...koi meri burai kar raha hai...main sun raha hun...wait...

Meethi: Guddo zaban sambhaal ke...

Hum ek dam gusse mein aa gaye the...
"kyun na kahe hum...itne din dhundhaa...ab request bheji...itne pareshaan hue...phir bhi koi result na niklaa...ab bhi wahi hai..."

Maine Aditya se poocha...aap jaante ho woh abhi kahan milenge...humein unnse baat karni hai...

Arre yaar kya kahun...main toh yahin khada hun...kisi aur se poochegi toh woh toh meri taraf hi ishaara karega...phass jaaunga...jaldi...soch beta...hmmm...maine bhi baatein gol ghumaaa di...

Adi ne kaha...

"Arre nahi...tum usse kaise mil sakti ho..."

Humne poocha "Kyun nahi mil sakte..."

"Woh abhi busy hai na..."

Maine bhi uske saamne jaal phenk diya...aur machli phass gayi...

Phir Aditya ne kaha...

"waise hum aapse ek baat pooche..."

Humne kaha..."Haan"

Ab tak tumne clg mein kitni chuttiyan ki hai...

Humne kaha..."Ab tak ek bhi nahi..."

"Toh phir tum 4-5 din...lec skip karke practice kar sakti ho..."

Meethi: haan Guddo...ab toh sirf 8 din hi bache hai...aur thodi chutti ho jaaye toh bhi kya...tum baad mein cover kar lena...

Phirse Aditya ne kaha...

"Haan...aur rehearsal hall uss waqt khaali bhi hota hai...tum subah se dopahar practice karna...aur phir ghar chale jaana...ho gayi problem solve... Kyun...kaisi rahi..."

Meethi: Waah maan gaye aap ko...Idea zabardast hai...kyun guddo kya kehti ho...

"Hmmm"

Meethi..."Hmmm mat karo...ab tayyari karo..."

Humne usse Thank u kaha...

"ek aap ho...jo humaari madad kar rahe ho...aur ek woh hai...jo ilteja sunne ko bhi nahi tayyar...Thank u..."

Phir hum aur Meethi wahan se class ke liye chale gaye...



Lo beta...machli jaal mein phass kar...machwaare ka hi shukriyaa adaa kar rahi...

Naadaan ladki...



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