El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Eris-

haay they can go on the field trip on tha haay .. already dreaming 😆

Oh yeh..its gonna come not field trip exactly😆 not out of the blue romance too..If I had to warn😉 but yeh Taara's realizations😳

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Lovely update Sia...
Thanks for PM...

Thanks for the appreciation,,,will PM u the next time.

Originally posted by: Sonal_MriAra

Lovely Write up for FF...Sia👏

thanks d PM...read a nice story..⭐️

keep up good work further here in this FF⭐️⭐️

Hey thanks Sona..glad u liked it

Originally posted by: fraser

Luved it:)
thankx for pm

Hey thanks for liking the ff..means a lot to me...will surely PM u😃

_{Chapter 4}

I know I am terrible at this..plz bear wid my writing n late updates😆

_{A few weeks pass by.. its Yash's birth day.. Yash asks Tara a few days ahead of it that he'd want to go for an outing on his birthday with only her -just father and daughter. She then cancels all her meetings and the plans she had for her dad's birthday.}

_{The day has come and everyone wish Yash on his b'day- Jay comes and wishes him-but in turn gets invited to the outing at their farm house.}

_{Yash, Jay and Tara proceed to the destination in their car. It was a pleasant day- cloudy though.}

_{Jay sits in the front and the father-daughter in the back seats. He sees her from the corner of his eyes.. her locks play with her soft skin... flirting with them shamelessly..ah gilded the lily' that was something she never believed incidentally he did too. She looked mesmeric even when she sleeps -beautiful in her natural self. Jay realized himself staring at Tara..and missed what Yash asked him about all the time. The shine in his eyes showed his deepest emotion today.}

_{They reach the farm house, Jay helps Tara with the luggage they brought. Yash shows the whole estate to Jay, Tara makes something to eat. The weather, the surprise drizzle embellishing the nature's paradise warm their hearts- Yash asks Tara n Jay to check out with the new extension he made and he decides to rest for a while.}

_{Jay follows Tara to the meadows ... the she in blue angel was more enrapturing than the green he saw around.}

_{Tara didn't like the idea of a companion on the first place- when she was in her farm house she wished to be left alone..her time to contemplate on things in life- things that mattered her the most. Her priorities, her beliefs.. this time she has Jay with her and that was a problem for her, as it disturbed her me time'; but all she could do is to bear him, be kind just for her dad and politeness sakes. They walk for a while, she loved the feel of walking on the grass bear foot..it wet grass she puts her foot forth unlaxed her months long stress-that tingling sensation was quite something for her. Jay finds all this amusing. tiny droplets of water shower on these two..the droplets were so lite that they made themselves comfortable on their skin and hair.}

_{Jay and Tara reached to the edge of the upland..Thunders threatened to strike...wind gushed wild..Jay suggests that they should probably go. Tara retorts saying it was after a very long time she came here and the climate is magical..he stays shut. After Tara stays there till her heart's content, they move down the hill...}

_{Tara gets a call from Neil, Jay moves ahead and enjoys playing his hands in the downstream of the river water...she sees him near the river and moves towards him while she was on the call.. the weather was turning into its rampant self.. Jay gets a very bad feeling abt things..he with uncertainty moves towards Tara..gently.(imagine this in slow motion ;P).and all of a sudden, he slaps her hand and drags her by her waist ..pasting his body to her..twirling themselves towards the river, she clings to his shirt...his spiky stubble pricks the soft skin of her face..he then pushes her into the river. A loud bang is heard.}

_{Little did he knew that Ms Ahuja is a terrible swimmer..realizing what he just did, he jumps into the water and holds her..to his horror she passes out and was drowning ...he holds her motionless body and gathers her fragile structure tight into his arms and comes out of the water.}

_{He puts her facing the rock near the bank and presses her body to it.. seeing that non of his efforts have brought her back to consciousness, he turns her around. Her face shines with those droplets gracing it...he tries to press her stomach in order to make her conscious..after those failed attempts.. he had one last option left to give her mouth to mouth resuscitation..he measurably bends to her face and touches her lips closing her nose... breathes life into her.. in a while she pukes that extra water off her lungs and her lays down there grasping for breath..}

_{Jay observes her wet locks embellish her already beautiful face. He for a few moments stood their adoring her..seeing every features of hers..She on gaining conscious recalls the moment he pushed her in the water...she scorns at this act if his..he tries to explain her but she was in no mood to listen..so he holds her arms hard and shakes her...he explains her what exactly happened.}

_{FB😆: He observes her talking on the ph and has the bad feeling of some terrible happening.. the moment he slaps her hand n drops the phone down and pushing her into the river was a life defining moment for her...for them. Had Jay been a second late in doing that, she would have been stricken by a lightening due to the low charge of her cell which greatly attracted the thunder towards HER. She realizes that she spoke too soon..Tara both thanks and apologizes to him for doing that..she also asks him not to utter a word of this fiasco to her father..or he'd freak out and definitely would restrict her from going uphill ever.}

_{Tara n Jay has their moment of agreement n disagreement.. leg pulling and for appreciation each other. They come back.}

_{Jay brings the B'day cake for Yash, the first piece was reserved for his dear princess..Tara. It was a gladdening moment for Jay to be a part of someone's celebration..Yash feeds him a piece of cake too..Tara observes Jay, smiling- sharing and spreading some goodness around}

_{She finds it sort of uncanny her father has a bit more fondness for Jay than Neil who happens too spend more time with her father.. that thought makes her single out things between these two men. Jay is resolved, Neil is determined too..One is striving hard from the scratch- tryin to make a mark and the other maintains what is his rightful position. Both are young, gentlemen. Neil is urbane demeanor and sweet Jay is ..more like the earth element -humble -grave.. umm.. Virile..and... WAIT!! where did that come from..😕? what did she just think? Who thinks a guy with such akad and cold- as virile?}

_{hah, what was I thinking..Tara is caught staring at Jay, with these thoughts playing at the back of her mind..Jay feels conscious at this. This girl is a real mystery for the man to read.}

_{As time passes by...Yash sees Jay grow in his business.. the boy has the potential of building up a much bigger empire as he himself has built over the years.}

_{He takes Tara and Jay to a site, where he wishes to build a hospital for the poor with all the latest equipments.. and wishes Tara and Jay to be the part of its board. Thus to make things legal he one day invites Jay and makes his daughter and Jay along with Neil and Fahim chacha to sign the deal.. may be he knows that RP would not leave his empire to his daughter alone.. so he rushes things.. All the formalities of Tara and Jay being the main board of directors and Neil and he himself a part sign the deal and to make it legal and he leaves no stone unturned.. he even clicks their pics at the site so that RP shouldn't get a chance to squash at least this dream of his.}

_{Every now and then, Jay would stop by the Ahuja mansion to meet his mentor.. Yash would discuss a few legal things and other business stuff with the boy, as he thinks Jay has a better insight of things..}

_Precap:

_{holds his hand and when she loosens her grip, instead of it holding back, she finds his hand slip off hers.}

Sorry for the late update😳.

Thanks for reading the Update. Please drop in ur comments.

Have a nice weekend,

Regards

Sia

Nice update...

lovely, interesting, awesome.. wonderful Sia 👏

Amazing update Sia, even more interesting is the precap. 😉

res 😃 will catch up soon.

Sia⭐️

I am too too late for comment on this FF

I missed this FF but now I have done reading update till now😊

So Part wise comments 😉

Introduction and chapter1

Sia ⭐️ character sketch is awesome👏

Loved Jay's Attitude to make his own identity👏

Wow...u have explained Tara's beauty very well👏👏👏 I can imagine the scene how Jay is watching beauty of Tara...😳

Lovely😃

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Chapter2

Wow... 😃

Hero rescues heroine👏

Loved description of Jay's physic and his adoring on Tara😳

Loved Tara's description on first bike ride😃

Mr.Singh have important role to play I guess😊

RP is trying to take business using Neil

Lets wait and see what is stored in future.😉