El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Liji_01
lovely, interesting, awesome.. wonderful Sia 👏
loved the story ❤️ u are amazing .. wen r u posting the next update?? am already curious 😉

Hey Thanks rey..ur always so kind
Next Update is on its way...Monday spl u see😉

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Archi21
Sia⭐️

I am too too late for comment on this FF

I missed this FF but now I have done reading update till now😊

So Part wise comments 😉

Introduction and chapter1
Sia ⭐️ character sketch is awesome👏

Loved Jay's Attitude to make his own identity👏

Wow...u have explained Tara's beauty very well👏👏👏 I can imagine the scene how Jay is watching beauty of Tara...😳
Lovely😃
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Chapter2
Wow... 😃

Hero rescues heroine👏

Loved description of Jay's physic and his adoring on Tara😳

Loved Tara's description on first bike ride😃

Mr.Singh have important role to play I guess😊

RP is trying to take business using Neil

Lets wait and see what is stored in future.😉

Hye my Lovely...thanks rey for lking it...bike ride humesha say I visualized MriAra..
Tujhey sab pata hai na...kaun imp hai kaun nai😆 my gundi!

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@BlueJasmine

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Waiting fr update sia...promo looks promising...some twists r on the way may be!

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Archi21

chapter 3
Ouch...Mr.Ahuja got heart attack...

I knew it this RP is playing something to take over business😡

Loved the way Jay pacifies Tara😃

Loving Jay more with each update😳

This Doctor is hiding from whom??😕

haha see sach main show main bhi Jayraj aka Yash Ahja ko heart attack ayaa😆
U know jahan aur jo catch karna hai han..ladki!!!😉
Keep reading

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Liji_01
Sia thanks for the PM. The edited version is fab.. loved JAY & TARA time alone & the way he saves her from drowng 😉
Nice comparison view of Jay & Neil by Tara 👍🏼
Overall awesome story & has increased my curiosity for next update ❤️ 😉 😆

Thanks for taking time out checking n commenting to this pal..means a lot to me😊 Glad u liked the comparison...
drawing was just added at the last moment😆 for next update iss kind of serious.. keep reading..u'll get many shockers n surprises

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi
Awesome

Hey thanks for liking it..😃

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine
Sia , interesting progress in the story 👏 ... and u always have a surprise element in your writing ...tht is the best part ⭐️

aww that's kind of u to say that😃..

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
Lovely update and interesting precap!

Waiting for the next part!

Thanks for the pm :)

thanks for the appreciation dear...update is on its way

Originally posted by: faizari
😆 interesting precap...

beautiful story...the way u tell 👍🏼

eagerly waiting for ur update 😉

thanks for ur PM Sia 🤗

Heya..thank u so much for liking my humble writes.🤗🤗..keep readin😃

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@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Archi21
Wow...lovely update😊

Loved the way Jay was watching Tara through mirror's corner
Description of Tara's beauty each time is worth reading 😃
Rescue scene pused me in dream land 😳
Loved Tara's point of view about Jay n Neil
Mr.Ahuja is planning to secure her daughter's future
Its great that Mr.Ahuja sees potential in Jay
Precap is interesting
waiting for update
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Thanks re...it was for u😉 I know it wont do if I didn't add that😛