El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi all

I am Sia.. writing an FF after a long pause, had this idea for an FF for quite a while. Couldn't find fitting faces for it or must I say fitting persona for my characters..here is my first FF on ViCha.


Note: I am no writer...I just have a concept- a story abt two people who are played by fate and I am sharing it with you all.. Dnt expect it to be in any league of the great or even good.




The story of true love.. who falls for whom, why is it at stake, who needs to understand what,
who scarifies, who saves it and the one he loves.
There is only one way to know ...read on.😆



El salvador mean 'the savior' in Spanish.








Character sketch:




Tara Ahuja/
She the smart and beautiful one, the daddy's princess.. never did she ask for more nor wished for,.. content in whatever she was given.





Jay

He, the one a personification of perfection- resolved in making his own identity, giving away the throne of his dad's empire
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Neil Singh

A simple guy who has his own dreams.. but loved his family more than anything. The son of a shrewd businessman- Rudrpratap. Had a break up lately with someone he thought he was gonna share his life with. He is his father's pet .




Rudrpratap singh:

He is a businessman and means business every moment.. very ambitious and sometimes ruthless towards his enemies.




Yash Ahuja

The doting father..his day starts n ends with Tara, his only daughter.
Rudr and Yash are business partners, with Yash holding the most of the shares in his hand.. makes him the one on the top businessman in the country.



Fahim Ahmed Khan

One more character that you might want to remember is Mr. Ahmed
The lawyer- well wisher of the Ahuja family. He is loyal and holds many secrets...





Thanks for reading.

PS: This Won't have a Prologue ..I like keeping things a little mystic😆

If you like the concept please drop in ur comments n likes.

Regards,
Sia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~ Index ~


Introduction/ Character sketch: PAGE 1

Chapter 1:
The Swing

Chapter 2: The meeting

Chapter 3: I care for you

Chapter 4:
The Trip

Chapter 5: Gone Forever

Chapter 6: The Proposal

Chapter 7 (Parts- a & b) : The Backwashes

Chapter 8 (Part a & b) : ICU

Chapter 9 (Part a & b): New Beginnings

Chapter 10 (a & b):
Hello Doctor







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Regards
Sia


Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai, Its a new concept and very nice character sketch. Want to read it. I have a doubt Neil is only Viraf and is he the son of RP. Pls post Neil's pic. I mean is he have long hair and breads .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Nice start👏 & interesting concept
looking forward to read it
pls pm me next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good and very interesting Sia 👍🏼
waiting for chapter 1 ...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: capriya

Hai, Its a new concept and very nice character sketch. Want to read it. I have a doubt Neil is only Viraf and is he the son of RP. Pls post Neil's pic. I mean is he have long hair and breads .



Hi Priya.. thanks for the comment.

Neil is not Vify... Jay (Viraf) he is not the son of RP.

Neil is different person in the FF.. narrowing down my choices for the character.. can't find a right face... will put the pic soon..and keep u posted.

Jay is young here..so visualize a young Vify 😆eventually he'll change his look dnt worry😉


Regards
Sia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting CS Sia...
reading ur work after a looong time...feels gud...
update soon and do pm me
love
Rads😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvmriyara

Hey Nice start👏 & interesting concept

looking forward to read it
pls pm me next part.



Hey thanks for the comment.😃
Will Pm u the future updates.

Regards
Sia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

Very good and very interesting Sia 👍🏼

waiting for chapter 1 ...




Thanks for the comment😃
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