El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22 - Page 7

chapter 3

Ouch...Mr.Ahuja got heart attack...

I knew it this RP is playing something to take over business😡

Loved the way Jay pacifies Tara😃

Loving Jay more with each update😳

This Doctor is hiding from whom??😕

Sia thanks for the PM. The edited version is fab.. loved JAY & TARA time alone & the way he saves her from drowng 😉

Sia , interesting progress in the story 👏 ... and u always have a surprise element in your writing ...tht is the best part ⭐️

Wow...lovely update😊

Loved the way Jay was watching Tara through mirror's corner
Description of Tara's beauty each time is worth reading 😃
Rescue scene pused me in dream land 😳
Loved Tara's point of view about Jay n Neil
Mr.Ahuja is planning to secure her daughter's future
Its great that Mr.Ahuja sees potential in Jay
Precap is interesting
waiting for update
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Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">holds his hand and when she loosens her grip, instead of it holding
back, she finds his hand slip off hers.</font>

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Nice promo. Now I will have strat reading this.

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Nice update...

This story is moving really interestingly.

Loved it...

Thanks pal

Originally posted by: Bamonforever

Amazing update Sia, even more interesting is the precap. 😉

hha Precap is not what it looks like my lovely😆keep reading..and thanks for liking my work😃