El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22 - Page 12

Originally posted by: faizari

Sia

Wow ...i really enjoy it

every twist and turn of this story 🤗

Originally posted by: Dilsha

I must say u r a very talented writer. I am hooked to the story. I read it in a go.
This new twist is something I didn't expect. Did yash make jay and Tara sign the papers in pretense of signing the deal?did he know rp wud try to use Tara once he is gone will Neil turn negative now?
Btw one strange thing happened while I was reading about the part wherejay pushed Tara into the lake and it was due to the thunder i noticed it was thundering outside my place. And I couldn't help but smile trying to imagine the scene.
Can't wait for the rest.

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Part(a)

_{The door opens.. what they see is a bride who just lost all hope... her mascara spread ...her hair ruffled.. her wedding dress which she wore with so much of excitement was now crumpled..}

_{Jay felt a sharp pinch in his gut... what did I do..she .. she just wanted to be happy..and I.. I snatched the one happiness from her.. she craved for' he thought to himself. He couldn't look straight into those eyes- those swollen pained eyes.}

_{"Look I never intend to do all this,..it was.." as Jay utters this Tara continues to walk in her room and advances towards the mirror..}

_{The reflection of this new bride was emitting nothing but gloom..her silence said a lot of her pain, her anguish..the fragrance of the partially dried out Mogra flowers didn't seem to arise any feeling of freshness or enlivenment in them. Dayiji leaves the newly wed alone.}

_{Neil was desperately practicing golf- those scenes flash in his mind... those words echoes in his ears and the pain just gets strong.. ever attempt was a lose.. and he thought.. he was unlucky in love..}

_{RP tried to console him.. please be strong son, I know you have been through a lot first that lady and now Tara...its too much to expect, but I can't bear to see you like this..I will make sure you get your love back'}

_{What hurt Neil the most was this time he almost was to get his one wish.. "the love he has been craving for in his life.. and he lost the battle yet again.. She left me.. and now Tara.. she is robbed away from me.." Neil's pain was beyond any explanation. RP hugs his son and swears to bring jay to justice.}

_{'I know you are disgusted by me, and you should feel so..but please dnt punish yourself for my fault..I'll wait till you yourself decide to speak to me' Jay tries to justify his act but gets a cold shoulder from his bride. But then he didn't give up on her.}

_{Tara's silent treatment reinforces Jay's guilt. He sees his new wife carry on with her work..being one among the board members of Ahuja & co Jay needed to be at the meetings...he saw her wear her professionalism veil and conduct her meetings and presentations with utter seriousness - it was as if she had become immune to pain.}

_{Neil saw her try to make things straight, gather herself and be normal while she was at work. Her eyes could only show their helplessness to Neil, she couldn't face him..why was she all guilt stricken for no fault of hers, they both knew that they needed some space and time to sink in and think calmly on the issue or even talk it out with each other...}

_{Tara to find solace goes to a temple, which she always used to with her mom as a child...she put forth her pain or happiness before the god..}

_{Tara then sits at her favorite spot, she recalls those old memories of her and her parents when they used to visit the temple..it was very quite then. An old lady- umm a middle aged one shares the bench with her...seeing her not yet faded mehendi the woman questions How many days it had been for your marriage?'}

_{Tara is shook out of her meditative thoughts on the events..the woman asks her again ..this time Tara hears the question, but is too hurt to answer on what she should answer- the unwanted relationship she has been forcibly tied into..or the equation of her with both her friends got twisted or her father's secrets on the big decision of her life ?}

_{Thanks for reading and Liking the write}

_Regards

_Sia

Part (b)

_{The woman realizes that something was wrong and asks Tara to let it be..she understands.. Then the woman changes the topic... 'you know I have been a regular to this place, it always gave me so much of courage..I find my peace here.'}

_{Tara could only give a half smile to her, acknowledging her say.}

_{The woman continues When I got married, I came here often, with my husband; Sometimes with a few close friends of ours.. I have many fond memories of this place..then there were times when I'd just come here running to escape or sort the mess I'd endure at my in-laws' house..'}

_{Tara looked at the woman carefully hearing her say.. how did you manage this MARRAGE MESS' you where in..'}

_{The woman replies The best thing a woman gets herself into is marriage, it's the biggest responsibility one would take up. Your just not yourself..there is someone there to care for u as well..and you do the same- u share your moments - your life with the person. And that's what makes it special. And you'll forget all these petty fights and egos when you completely, deeply and unconditionally fall in love with your man..'}

_{Fall in LOVE? with the same man..again? how is that possible...and if he someone whom you don't know so well..' Tara inquires}

_{The wise woman answers emphasizing on importance of sustaining a marriage as she thought Tara was troubled due to the new changes she must be going through. she says "its after marriage the real love starts- the true journey starts..you discover your partner, his/her good and bad traits, their temperaments, their egos, their friendship, their frustrations, their care, their love"yet be patient and thoughtful about each other. That's the magic of this bond.'}

_{She continues seeing Tara pay all her attention on her say 'Be it love or arranged marriage you are accountable to and for each other. You belong to him- those vows have a deep and divine meaning n vibe in them- and can never be reversed or ruined..its all about understanding the person- his/her goodness, insecurities, wishes, frustrations.'}

_{Tara gets some marriage gyaan from the stranger lady..feels lite..she recalls those moments-r reason each situation and act of her dad and Jay and Neil..}

_{'Tara I only got to know abt it after sir's death, a few months later when sir's will was up..' he blurted}

_{"what? Will? Did that include you too? And RP and Fahim uncle? why doesn't anyone tell anything to me!" Tara was shocked n confused.}

_{'I am sure your RP uncle never wanted you to know about it all... Fahim uncle never said a word cause of me.. It was too much for me to digest.,. marrying a stranger was never my plan..didn't know how u would react.. ' Jay explains}

_{Oh it is neither mine, Jay.. I planned for a happy life.. a life with my husband who'd love me.. accept me as I am.. and Neil was everything so and I am not gonna lose it on that relationship cause of this drama'}

_{Fair enough, Tara the first thing we'll do is we'll call up Fahim chacha and seek some legal help..to straight this legal mess. '}

_{Though Tara never gave any heed to the gossip mongers .. but the stuff was upsetting for her n so for Jay.}

_{'Your dad too was a pain n the neck like u... Yash never understood this... all they wished was some stupid true friendship..hah who thinks of such things these days..and you have messed with the wrong person..I'll make you suffer for what you have done to my son..you could have let things be..what would have happened if Tara married Neil, she didn't have to know abt your secret marriage. ' RP taunts Jay}

_{Jay was shocked to hear this..'give me a break from your nastiness Mr RudrPratap..!'}

_{RP still continues to trouble Jay saying 'its your fault and now Tara hates you for ruining her life, what did you get out of this marriage..is it Yash's property you seek or .. special interest in Tara'}

_{'Just shutup..shut it..its better for your health and mine too' Jay warns.}

_{But RP had his plans to male Jay disgust himself so that he'd leave Tara for Neil with all that guilt in him. he utters 'I tthink the latter is the reason- you found my sons's would be bride more attractive and couldn't get rid of her..eh..so you blurted our the truth..if you wanted a woman desperately in your life, you could have gone to ...'}

_{Before he could finish Jay held his collar in rage...giving him angry stairs ..then Jay composed himself and straightened Rp's and warned ' you can stoop to any extent you want...but just stay out of my way..I'll make sure you lose.'}

_{On dayima's plea Jay stayed back at Ahuja mansion.. Tara took some time to gather herself.. but never accepted him as her husband.. the sweet friendship they shared.. was hugely effected.. she couldn't share the same bond with Jay anymore, as before..}

_{Jay sees Neil and Tara hang out.. see him leave her late in the evenings; but never says a word to her, he couldn't..he didn't have the right to do so- he thought he didnt.}

_{PS: Pardon me for the drag (marriage gyaan😳)..u see Tara pay daya (piety) agaya thaa that there was no one their for her to know things..so had to enlighten her of marriage gyan from a stranger😆}

_{Thanks for reading n liking the write}

_Regards

_Sia