El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

i loved the start! He has entered their home, now let's see if that angelic face remains as angelic when he gets to know her, or will we get to see a much more subdued tara than in the serial?

Do continue soon dear! =)

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I have doubt did u changed mrityunjay name to jay or just wrote I introduction as his nickname

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

interesting title, like in show MJ name has d meaning which implies something which we audience r still unaware of ur title says lot itself..

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luvmriyara

@luvmriyara

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey sorry for late😳

chap 1 was very interesting 👏

looking forward for next part😊

thanks for pm update soon

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

aah i love the title yaar 😳

now am waiting to see who saves who 😳

so our Jay is a self made man..

i love the contarst t the entries..

in the show tara looked like a rowdy🤣

and here she is so serene...😃

ab bahut hua update kao!!!!!

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vanitha3d
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: pvejani
ch.1

Thanks for liking the write up..

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks
Thanks for the PM Sia .
Interesting update .
Jay wants to make it on his own , good , I like him already 😉

Jay is self made... u'll love him even more.. read on
Thanks for liking the update..

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

great update Sia

jay character is very nice

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: precious-pie
would love to read.. so intresting..
if you are snding out the pms love to get them

Thank you .. will PM you.😊

Originally posted by: -WingsOfHeart-
nice...

thanks for the comment 😃 keep reading

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sia

@Sia889

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: capriya
Awesome! I loved the entry of Jay. Beautifully written. I loved the nature content in it. Continue soon... Thanks for the PM.

Thanks for those lovely comments Priyanka.. well Jay's meeting with Tara would be even more dhansu.. glad u liked the write.😃
Update is on its way.