El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22

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@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Archi21
Part-b
⭐️ Sia ⭐️
Beautiful update 😃 👏

Homage to mentor👏
RP 😡

Tara ne correct decision liya 😃 Jay ko trust karne ka 😃

haay... 😳 hubby ko dekh wife ko kuch kuch hota hai 😳

(Hume bhi read kar kuch kuch hota hai) 😳

pregnant ? 😲 kaun ?? 😕

Plz update soon 😃

aww thanks rey..update is somewhere around🤗

@thanks for liking the promo😃keep readin

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

_{Chapter 10}_{Chapter 7(a & b) << Chapter 8(a&b)<<}_{Chapter 9

Promo:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-boond-ishq/3769302/el-salvador-vicha-ff-character-sketch-and-update-pg-22

A quick update..

Jay thinks of ways to get to Neil's past..though he has made friends with Neil, there was something he still couldn't comprehend, on why was Neil's engagement broke at the first place and why did he ever accept to make Tara as his bride. And then his mind goes to the event when Neil ran after someone's car at the temple. This mystery got on Jay's nerves.who was he running after and that too without counting the worth of his own life- what place did that person really hold in Neil's life. Was she some other woman..or was it in his mind..all these quests were making Jay confused..

In the process of piecing the puzzles together he get reminded of the hospital fiasco when Yash was admitted first and Jay bumped into a doc.. she was hiding from Neil and RP..?}

_{Why..what would be the connection.. does that mean she knew Neil.. Jay inquired for her for the next few weeks.if his doubt- his reason was of teh right kind.. . and all he could get was only her name from the records.. a Doc Chandra (}_(OB/GYNs).

_{Whose next on the appointment list..
Nurse: A Mr. Jay.}

_{Jayis called in...
She shouts a you! Again.. I need your help.. its personal..he begs her actually.}

_{Doc: ok.fine... is your wife pregnant...?

Jay : is shocked to hear that.. oh..no no no no.. there is hell lots of time for that..but yes if she becomes she'll be most adorable one a..a.. golu polu version of herself...Jay adores her envisioning tara with a baby bump.}

_{Doc: then she wants to become one?
Jay: well..a little blushing...utters.. only if I could ask..
Doc: Does she has any pb becoming one?}

_{Jay: no !
Doc: do u have a prb?
Jay: slowly lifts his head and shows his helplessness. at last you got it.}

_{Doc: oh.. umm how long is this pb troubling u..? she inquires.
Jay: quite long..and its become serious issue.

Doc: then let me put u across wid doc kumar..
Jay.: why ?
Doc: look Mr. umm.. Jay, If u have any pb with fertility thing he is the best doc to help u..
Jay's jaw drop hearing this.. why are u talking abt all this..? Doc what do u expect a gynec to talk..

Jay: Oh no u think I have a problem with.. ugh.. no abso no.. neither do I have such a problem and nor will my wife..

Doc :then why are you wasting my time..?
Jay: I need your help in my personal life..

Doc: I am a Doc not a lawyer..
Jay: Well I tried a lawyer but turns out he was not of much help..Jay gets straight to the quest.. Do you know a Neil Pratap Singh?
The doc's face turn pale..
Jay: I am guessing that as a yes.. plz help me.
Doc: No!}
_{Jay acted weird..ignoring Tara..even showing his temper on her and dayji.
she coukdnt understand the sudden raw attitude he had towards her.

Tara tries to bridge the gap..but J couldn't get rid of his khadoosness.}
_regards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

Thanks for the comment sweety.😃.I so need to do the OUAP..I suck na!

aww...🤗

jab time mile tab comment karna dear😊

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Good that Jay dug into Neil's past and found Dr. Chandra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Jay and Dr. Chandra's convo was hilarious!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It was sooo cute to see Jay imagine Tara with a baby bump!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So he does want a baby with her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope the day comes when Jay would have to take Tara to a gynecologist!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why any gynecologist, I suppose this Chandra will do!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Yeh Jay itna kyun sharma raha hai pehle Tara se pooch if she would give you Golu or not!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

I liked Jay's line that he tried a lawyer but he was not much help!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Now why is Jay acting khadoos??😕 😕 😕 😕

Waise accha hi hai isse hopefully Tara will realize his value!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Sia⭐️

Wow!!!😛 Kya Update hai 👏

Oh...Too mera Doc related doubt Jay ko bhi hai😛

Doc-Jay convo 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Specially :

_{Jay : is shocked to hear that.. oh..no no no no.. there is hell lots of time for that..but yes if she becomes she'll be most adorable one a..a.. golu polu version of herself...Jay adores her envisioning tara with a baby bump.} _{Doc: then she wants to become one?
Jay: well..a little blushing...utters.. only if I could ask..}
😆😆
😉

Pura update read karke mujhe bahut hasi aa rahi hai😆

_{Jald hi wo din bhi aayega jab Jay Tara ko lekar Gyn ke pass jayega😃

Ab khulegi Neli ki poll😃
Neli tu too gaya 😛

Why Jay acting as Khadus😕...Bhav kyu kha raha hai??
Tara bechari pareshan
Sounds interesting 😊

Plz Update soon...😊}

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Introducing...

Chandra Sharma.

A no nonsense gal, bold, and beautiful doctor- Gynac.
Whatever she is, is cause of her hard work and parent's blessings..she is rumored to have an affair with Neil Singh, her childhood friend.
What happens that Neil and Chandra separated...will they ever meet again?

Read on for some romantic, twisted and passionate writes on Neil-CHandra and Jay and Tara.

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Updated the Character sketch of Chandr ..do have a look

Regards
Sia

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sia

@Sia889

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Chapter 10
Part b

< Chapter 8(a&b)<<_{Chapter 9}>> Chapter 10(a)

_{"Please help me" Jay requests}

_{Chandra shouts "NO!"}

_{"Why are you doing this, just one help of yours would give new lease of life to the 4 of us"Jay begs.}

_{Chandra retorts "see I dnt know anyone by that name nor am I willing to; please dnt waste my time"}

_{Even after Jay's constant request Chandra denies knowing Neil or RP.}

_{Then Jay goes back..}

_{He turns up the next day as well..and tries to convince Chandra on telling the truth.}

_{"why are u wasting ur time, I am not gonna help you..cause I cant."she says.}

_{"fine Chandra, I can twist my finger to get to the truth.."Jay informs.}

_{Chandra is confused on what Jay was up to...
Then Chandra's dean call her, and orders her to meet Jay and see to it what he is looking for.
Chandra is surprised n disgusted that Jay has such high connections and he can go to any extent to get to her past.

She goes to her cabin...sees Jay waiting for her.
"So you have used your influences to get to know the truth..which I never wish to let out, very evil" Chandra taunts.
"actually desparate not evil, I am sorry for doing this to you..but I couldn't have done anything else..I just want to know the truth." he says.
"why? what would you get digging my painful past" she inquires.
As I have said many lives are at stake and only the truth can do justice to them all..he again begs Chandra.
Chandra seeing his earnest effort agrees.}
_{Chandra narrates - Flash Back:
Neil and Chandra studied in the same class. Both were toppers and had neck to neck competition.
One day Chandra excels than Neil, RP is furious and pushes Neil a bit too far. Which makes Neil take a unfair means to make Chandra lag behind. though he was proud of his hard work n accomplishments, the just in him pinched him all the time..}

_{Neil on realizing whtat to meant for her to get the high score- her scholarship was dependent on it. realizing his fault, he telsl the truth to the principal and gets punished..but cause of RP's influences Neil stays back in the school.
As time passes the friendship between Neila and Chandra grew...

Neil never realzies his fondness for the girl was so deep and pure that he'd go to any extent...

Chandra decides to become a doctor and ENil takes up his family business..even thought they chose different paths..their love never parted.
Neil one day proposes to her for marriage..she agrees.

RP gets to know about all this and agrees to NEil's zid..Chandra and Neil get engaged secretively. NEila dn Chandra were the happiest ppl on the earth - as their love gets accepted by their parents.
But RP had other plans for these two..he plays an unfair game by threatening CHandra that he'd harm her dear ones if she doesnt back off from the wedding.
The worst thing she had ever experienced was to put a brave face and call off the engagement...the man she loved was away from her...
From that day forth Chandra decided to disappear from Neil's eye.}
Chandra cries recalling those moments "it was all a play Jay, my love ..my life got ruined cause of RP. and Neil has no clue abt all this"
Jay asked of she tried resenting RP...she informs that she did, but only to see her dear ones get harmed by RP.

Hearing Chandra's plight, Jay swears to help her and Neil reunite. Chandra refuses ..but Jay instills faith in her that all is going to be well and that RP is a jerk, he'd take care of RP/ she need not worry.

_{J gets backache cause of sleeping on the couch.. "ahhh, this blessed pain I say..I'd better take care of it" saying so he calls Joseph to give him a back massage. Joseph ..Joseph, can just give me a back massage, the damn thing is aching like hell." But it seems that Joseph had other things to look after, so he doesn't turn up..but Jay still shouts out loudly.}

_{Tara watches this, his shouts reached the gardens now..she couldn't see him in pain..anyone for that matter..so she takes the ointment and gently rubs it on his bare back...she soft n gently massages pressing her hands on his back and directing them measurably all over his back till his neck..J feels relaxed.."aaah...that's it..yeh that's the way u go" she kneads his back with her fist giving J's back a healing effect..Jay realizes that something is pricking him while the massage..he holds the hand and finds that its Tara and not Joseph..he holds it and sees her..Tara realizes what she just did..she runs away from there.}

_{Neil calls J at the annual golf games a his club, as they rehearse..he gives the Golf bat to J to see how well he can play..to Neil's surprise, J was way good iin the game..being a rookie at the first place.J says he learnt it from his old pal..Neil feels a familiar air now.. J now wants to let it out forth Neil who he was and most importantly he wanted to reunite Nril and Chandr for both loved each other..so Jay utters " you know right...short game ka maza he kuch aur hota hai...Shot swing does the magic in every game" Neil is puzzled hearing this..."how come you know abt this?" he inquires. Jay says "the same way u did Neilu"}

_{The next day Tara goes to the temple and finds the old lady waiting for her..she shares the incidence a little hesitantly..with the old lady at the temple. Tara is in a self deprecating mode..she bashes her self for getting attracted to her husband when she liked her friend..teh lady laughs at her innocence..and tries to assure her that its natural to get attracted. and she'd feel te other way round had Tara not got attracted to him..Tara blushes ..the wise lady says that she should try think of the relationship...giving it a chance.}

_{Neil now knows who Jay was..he goes near Jay, there was an air of silence and awkwardness btw them now..before Neil could utter a word J says "I know u know what I mean..the important thing is, would u put ur faith in me this time?" Neil is overwhelemed hearing his childhood pal "Saaley Mintu..kahan chalagaya thaa..! Agar main naraz tha tujhey he toh mana chahiye than a!"}

_{These two chuddy buddies share their memories and have a good time.}

_{Jay calls Neil to the restaurant where he plans to reunite Neil and Chandra}

Thanks for reading, and commenting on the WU
regards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Jay ne akhir apna influence use kar ke Chandra ko sach batane ke liye mana hi liya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good to see that Jay can do anything to get what he wants!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Perfect choice for Chandra!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

RP is horrible and he separated Neil and Chandra who loved each other so much!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Jay is out to sort out all the relations and in this process his and Tara's relationship will also get sorted out!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

With Neil out of the way, Tara will have to come to him!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉

Jay ko backache toh hona hi tha na couch pe roz sone ki wajah se!!! Poor Jay!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It was good to see Tara giving Jay a back massage since she is the reason for that pain!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waise Jay ko itne der se pata chala that it was Tara??😛 😛 😛 😛

It reminded me of the scene in the show where Tara dries Mrityunjay's hair with a towel!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara is getting attracted to Jay and rightly too!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The old lady advised her very well and Tara is indeed being silly!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Jay and Neil are childhood friends and finally Jay revealed it to Neil!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago

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Dilsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Neil and jay are frnds wow I like it
Tara is getting attracted to jay but who can blame her
I want all the four to be reunited and then give rp what he deserves but will Neil go against his dad
I like Chandra and I think she and jay will make good frnds
Jay is fixing all relations and his relation with Tara will also be fixed by god.

Nice update sia
I am gonna miss u
R u leaving IF I hope not

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