El salvador- ViCha FF: Character sketch & Update Pg 22 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago



Chapter 8(b)


Neil saw her.. its her..he couldn't believe his eyes that she was standing there..his first and only love Chandra.. walking away from him...again..she merges into the temple crowd... he tries to reach her, but she leaves in the car..

Jay was guilty of his doing, he couldn't even focus on his work. Every time he does something, his wife's face flashes in front of him. And then Rudr's taunt the other day..how he separated friends..spilled poison in people's life.

Neil back here runs after the car in which Chandra sits.. and almost got hit by a car..

Seeing Tara continue with her routine being out late night.. she decides to talk it through with her...Dayiji being loyal to Yash unwanted yet shares a word on the whole mess with Tara..

"Tara look you are married.. I know you dont acknowledge as one.. but what you both did, what Jay did was like a son to Yash.. your father wanted you both to be together.. I know you want to share ur life with Neil ..but now you are a married woman.. this is a divine bond Tara.. even if u refuses to accept it..u are Jay's wife..and he is your husband.. u cant change the fact"

A confused Tara inquires Dayima what do u want to tell me exactly?'

Dayima explains her little gal Tara this bond- marriage is pure- and you can't waltz around with some other man than your own husband.. I know u dnt care what the people say, I never objected when you never went to Jay's place.. but what I believe is when one in such sacred bond.. they ought to respect it.. honour its existence..'

Tara realizes what she just did..she shared the same thought as dayima abt marriage being sacred.. it was either divorce or accept the bond she had with Jay. Its high time that she acts abt the mess she is in...

She meets Jay for the same and they decide to meet a lawyer and take an appointment...

Jay meets Neil on the hospital issue, as there arose a legal issue..They both leave for the place in their respective cars..

Tara too drives that way in her own car...she gazes out of the window in the empty space, Dayiji's word echo in her..then she recalls all those moments she had with Neil- from their childhood till now and then there was her dad whom she loved to no end and so did he...

Back her Neil's car breaks down in the middle of no where..as the site was deserted he couldnt find any one to help and there was no service station near by..Jay passes by the place and gives Neil a lift till their place..

Jay finds Neil amusing and so does Neil abt Jay...they soon warm up o each other..

Jay wanted to make sure Neil is the guy for her.. as he promised Yash that he'd look after his Tara after him...


Precap:


The punch of their life was in stored for them..


Meethi pulls Jay's leg.. seeing this Tara wears a confused expression.


As she leaves something catches her eye


PS: i know its a drag..but this banal phase will shed..the story would move forward from the next update..I swear it will be more interesting.

Thanks for sticking to the FF

Regards

Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update ...thanks alot
waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago

Promo added..On Jay-Tara- plight.


Song: Meri Duniya main


https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x20k2w8_meri-duniyan-main-el-salvador-vicha-ff_shortfilms

REgards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️ Sia ⭐️

lovely update 👏 😃

Neil ka pehla pyaar wapas aaya hai 😛
interesting...dekhte hai kya hota iss ka

Daijaan ne at last Tara se baat ki 😊

Neil -Jay ki friendship 😃 👏
acha start hai 😃

precap:
Meethi kaun hai 😊 ?
Plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi21

⭐️Sia⭐️

Lovely..beautiful...update❤️👏

Cooking😃

Poor Tara bechari kya kare
Loved description of soothing environment of fram👏😃
🤗

Ouch...accident...
Jay bechara...😭
Divorce😲...
Nahi...

waiting for next update😃



Thanks dear for liking the story

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Posted: 11 years ago


to pursue my further studies😃
Btw plz unres ur comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha.N

Wonderful update ...thanks alot

waiting for the next



Thanks a ton for liking the write...will be ding back to back updates henceforth😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


thank u Nandzy for liking the write
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Teena_

Wow!!!!!

Update soon...



thanks pal..update(s) is on its way

keep reading😃

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