UPDATED My first OS - jealousy-FINAL part page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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meri to saanse bandh ho rahithi as i was reading ur ss...superb mindblowing ...tomato ban gayi main ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG...somebody stop.my heartbeat...it was so dam romantic..cant wait fr d nxt!!!cntinue sooon n plz do pm me ppplllzzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just love the second part
plz continue soon
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i was blushing all the way through..omg that was soo cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You will kill us with this romance, kya?
Haila! I'm still blushing! ☺️☺️☺️

Continue more!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG im a big fan of urs now i think abt this os day and night pls continue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

OMG im a big fan of urs now i think abt this os day and night pls continue it soon


Lol that is so sweet. I'll try to do a part 3 :)
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wowww what to say .., nice
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Originally posted by: mjhtgeetfan


that is so sweet of you to say :)

I want to confess that I have read this OS 8 times in the last 3 days... Please update sooon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3- Hey guys I was writing this in a rush so there is one more part after this. hope you like.



Antara stepped out of the steamy shower. The warm water had relaxed her tense muscles. She was having the weirdest day of her life today. She had been kissed by Raghu twice and since then she couldn't feel the ground beneath her feet. She felt like she was a spectator in her own body, she couldn't control any feeling or emotion. Everything was spinning nothing made sense to her. Noor's mehendi function was tonight and everyone in the house was busy getting dressed before heading to the Naik house where the function would be held. Antara's whole body had crazy butterflies racing through it at the thought of seeing Raghu again tonight. She never got an answer from him in the kitchen, when they were both on the floor, covered in flour, him on top of her, him kissing her. Yeh sab Raghu kyun kar raha hai she thought'. Is he just having fun or has he fallen for me?' On the other hand she realised she never answered his question about why she is feeling so jealous. Is she just being possessive or had she fallen for him too? Antara knew one thing for sure she couldn't let Raghu kiss her again until he told her what he was doing. Proud of her decision she went to her wardrobe to pick out a saree when suddenly she thought. but I need to be kissed by him one more time to know what I feel'. The first two times were a daze as she had never been kissed before. She didn't know what she was feeling. She had never been so close to a man so she couldn't distinguish any feeling from the nervousness and excitement that was surging through her body at the time of both the kisses. Oh god ab kya karoon?'

Mami: Antara yeh tu kya kar rahi hai? Jaldi kar hum sab nikal rahe hai

Antara: haan mami aap log chaliye main dus minute main aati hoon.

Antara entered the Naik house draped in a beautiful peacock blue saree. Raghu had always loved blue on her. He felt himself frozen in time as he watched her greeting everyone with her beautiful smile before joining the ladies for mehendi. Antara glanced around the room looking for the man who had driven her crazy all day. The mehendi lady began working on Antara when her eyes finally fell on him. He was leaning against a pillar on the far corner of the house with a gorgeous grin on his face. He was wearing a red sherwani and looking unbelievably handsome. Antara felt her heart skip 10 beats. " he is not making this easy for me' she thought.

After a long eye lock Antara was pulled out of her trance by the mehendi lady.

ML: Kaunsa akshar likho

Antara: uh.. vo .. mm

Antara's mum: are isko abhi aisa koi nahi hai jiski naam ka akshar yeh lihk paye

Mami: haan kyun na tu apne naam ka akshar lihko. A

Aaji: are nahi. Jiska koi nahi hota uska humesha bhagwan hota hai. Kyun na tum bhagwan ke naam ka akshar lihko.

Antara's mum: haan yeh theek hoga. Antara tu bhagwan Ram ki naam ka akshar likho. Vo ek adharsh pati the. Behenji inki haat main aap R lihk do

Mach mach who was standing near Raghu watching the festivities said

MM: A re wah Ram ji usko to log Raghunath bhi bolathe the hain na?

Everyone stared at Mach Mach. Antara's eyes wide open and her heart felt like it would jump out of her chest. Raghu who was standing next to MM was dumbfounded at what he had just said. Aaji grinned to herself relishing at the amazing coincidence. Raghu and Antara both stared at eachother as the mehendi lady wrote R in Antara's mehendi.


Precap: the moment that answers both their questions

Edited by mjhtgeetfan - 11 years ago

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