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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtgeetfan



Lol thanks i was blushing when writing that cause raghu is always wiping his face with his bandana so it seems like a very raghu thing to do :)


tahnk u for ur reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww such a beautiful n romantic os. i was blushing reading ur OS. keep writing dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls continue it soon cuz its too good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
oh wowww! that was beautifully written. totally loved it, short and sweet! are you planning to write another part ?? love how Raghu was making her feel jealous but being so close to her like he had every right to do so.
once again, great work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am still blushing like an idiot ☺️ Please please please continue ! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


Antara ran downstairs as fast as she could. Her footsteps matched the beating of her racing heart. What had just happened between them? A few weeks ago they were at each other's throats and now there just at each other? She couldn't understand what was happening to her. Lost in her thoughts she managed to reach aji and sat down next to her silently.

Aji: Antara beta designs lahi ho?

Antara didn't respond. Her lips were still a little swollen and her face still sore from Raghu's stubble brushing up against her soft skin. Though it wasn't to visible she could feel each and every stubble of his still on her face.

Aji: Antara? Kya hua tuhje?

After a little nudge she finally snapped out of her train of thought

Antara: A A Aji aap?

Aji: Aji aap? Kya matlab? Kya hua tuhje teri tabiyat to theek hai?

Aji could see a little bit of redness on her cheeks and started assuming what had happened. A cheeky smile spread across her face.

Antara: n n nahi aji main theek hoon. Vo main aap ki lunch banaa dehti hoon vaise bhi aap ki medicine ka time ho gaya hai.

Aji: Haan vo saab to theek hai lekin designs ka kya?

Antara had found had temporary relief thinking about aji's lunch and yet her mind went straight back to the storeroom. The closeness, the look in his eyes, his questions and his kiss. She never expected it to feel that amazing. After all she had been through romance and love wasn't really anything she ever thought about. But Raghu had made her realise how important it all really was.

Antara: nahi aji muhje vo nahi mili. Aap yahi baithiye main aati hoon.

In the kitchen Antara quickly busied herself cooking. She poured all her concentration on the food trying her best not to let her mind wander to Raghu. She began kneading the flour when she heard footsteps behind her. Assuming it was aji she spoke without turning around.

Antara: Aji aap yahi aane ki taklif kyun ki bas ab tori dehr aur. Aap kamre mein jahiye main wahi khana le ke aati hoon.

Raghu: Aaji kabse chappal ki jagha boots pehne lagayi ki mere footsteps tuhje aji lagi?

Antara froze, her hands still emerged in the flour. She couldn't make out what she was feeling, nervous yet excited? Terrified yet happy? Nothing made sense to her.

Raghu: To tu wapas kyun nahi ayi? Meri sawaal khatam nahi hui thi.

Raghu had a smirk on his face as he began slowly walking towards her. Antara could feel him approaching. Raghu saw that she was helpless as her hands were immersed in flour so he decided to have a little fun. He came right behind her and caged his arms around her pinning her to the table. Antara began breathing heavily again the proximity making her crazy. Raghu whispered into her ears.

Raghu: tune meri aakhri sawaal ka koi jawaab nahi dhi thi. Phir se pocho kya?

Antara closed her eyes as his warm breath washed over her neck

Raghu: bolna miss kaul

Antara finally managed to choke out a few words in a tiny whisper.

Antara: M Muhje choro Raghu koi dehk le ga.

Raghu: Koi nahi dehke ga. Mach mach ne aji ko bhaar le ke gaya aur sari naukar bhi bazaar gaya hai Nikah ke samaan laane. Ghar pe koi bhi nahi hai. Ab kya karo gi tum

Raghu took his hands off the table and held her by the shoulders. He slowly slid them down her arms gently caressing her as he went. Her hair was already pushed to on side and her placed a soft kiss on the seam if her kameez, his lips touching her skin. Antara thought she was going to collapse.

Antara: R Raghu tum ye sab kyun kar rahe ho

Raghu: Tum pehle mereko yeh bataa ki tum jali kyun thi mehendi wali se

He continued to kiss her

Antara had steadied herself by now and was beginning to feel comfortable with Raghu so close to her. It felt right to her, like it was his right to do what he was doing and hers to enjoy it.

Antara: Nahi bataoongi kya kar lo ge

Raghu smiled at her question

Raghu: tu jaana chahti hai apun kya kare ga?

He left her shoulder and began kissing her neck. Antara couldn't handle that it was driving her to the limits of craziness. She held on to the flour bowl for support.

Antara: R raghu yeh tum kya kar rahe ho choro muhje warna

Raghu: warna kya? Iss waqt tum kuch nahi kar sakti tere haath aate main hai.

Antara smiled at the fact that he thought she was helpless.

Antara: acha?

And with that she grabbed a handful of flour, turned around and threw it all over Raghu. Raghu was shocked at her sudden movement and anger began to rise until he saw her laughing uncontrollably. His heart melted and he thought to himself. "if you want a fight your gonna get one'. He grabbed some flour and threw it back at her stopping her laughter. The fight was on. After five minutes the whole kitchen gleamed white and Raghu and Antara resemble snow men. Raghu went for one final hit to which Antara decided to escape. Raghu grabbed her hands in the nick of time and both slipped on the floury floor. Raghu feel straight on top of the flour covered Antara. Their childish moment had once again switched to an intense and passionate moment. Raghu staring into her eyes as she held on to his collar. Antara asked again 'yeh sab tum kyun kar rahe ho" to which raghu replied ' tumne mehndi wali se kyun jali thi?' Both knew the answer to both their questions were the same. Raghu stared deep into her eyes and slowly lowered his lips down on to hers.

Edited by mjhtgeetfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I couldnt write much.. As still i m blushing after reading.
The part when raghu came in kitchen... I knw something like will happen...

Raghu is so nUghty

Edited by tintin0602 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely loved it! ❤️ Oh my God, you write sooo well! 👏 This OS has made me a big fan of yours!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... Great update!!! Loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyarao27

Absolutely loved it! ❤️ Oh my God, you write sooo well! 👏 This OS has made me a big fan of yours!


that is so sweet of you to say :)

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