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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow lovely part..Pls update soon..waiting to read more...
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Awesome update dear
Raghu In red sherwani and antra in blue peacock saree hayee
Continue soon
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Superrr waiting to read the next part///
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wow yaar amazimg
pls cont soon
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OHHHMMMYYY!!! CUTIE, THIS WAS LOVELY! READ ALL THE PARTS JUST NOW N FELL IN LOVE WITH UR STORY! RanTara KISS!!! GOSH☺️☺️ UPDATE ASAP! WILL BE WAITING!
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Thanks for such wonderful feedback
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Originally posted by: mjhtgeetfan


MM: A re wah Ram ji usko to log Raghunath bhi bolathe the hain na?


MachMach stole the show man! 😃

Aage kya hua??? Jaldi update karo na pleeease!
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Great going, cant wait for the next one :)
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Amazing :) I loved it its super cute and romantic <3 Can't wait for next part!!!
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Hey guys this is the FINAL part. I want to thank everyone for reading. I apologise once again for all the mistakes. As i said i don't speak hindi so sorry for any mistakes. ENJOY


The evening progressed and Antara sat with all the ladies enjoying the festivities. Everyone was singing and dancing, even her mum got up to shake a few moves. Antara felt so happy seeing her mum enjoying herself after such a long time. She glanced at her mehendi to check if it had dried yet but some parts were still wet. Her eye fell on the R beautifully written on her hand. Something about seeing the R there felt so right to her, she was starting to make sense of her feelings for him. Her racing heart had calmed down since Raghu had busied himself with work around the house. With him nowhere to be seen she eased herself into the celebrations.

Mami: are Noor teri mehendi to ab dry ho rahi ha. Iss me nimbo lagana chahiye.

Aaji: maine aaj niboo mangwai thi. Yaad nahi a re ki bag kaha rak di? Antara beta zaara ja kar tu dekh na shayad upar ke kissi kamare main rakhi hai

Antara: theek hai aaji... lekin mere haath ki mehendi abhi bhi ghili hai main vo bag kaise utha payongi?

Aaji: Jab mil jaya to awaaz dena hum kisi ko bhedge denge

Antara went from room to room in the upper level of the Naik house. In her short time there she hadn't explored the house sufficiently. All she knew was the terrace, aaji's room, kitchen and store room. Oh god the storeroom that is one room she will never forget. As she was lost in her thoughts she stumbled on a room in the far corner of the house. She stepped inside to scan for the bag full of lemons. She couldn't understand why aaji didn't just put them in the kitchen. Yeh aaji bhi na" she thought as she glanced around the room. The room was neat and cosy much like aaji's room. There was a dressing table full of men's products. She knew this room was in use but who's could it be? Not Rasika chachi's as there was no sign on any women's clothing or products. Curiosity got the better of her as she crept over to the cupboard to see what sort of clothes were inside. She opened the cupboard doors, carefully without ruining her mehendi, to find a neat hung row of shirts and folded pants filling the wardrobe to the brim. yeh to Raghu ki samaan hai' she thought out loud.

Raghu: mera kamra hai to samaan bhi mere hoga na miss kaul

Antara froze, for the third time that day he had followed her into a quite room. She knew what he could do. She turned around slowly to meet his intense yet playful gaze.

Antara: T t tum?

Raghu: haan m m maine. Teri saans phir se zoor chalna shuru hogaya kya

He began backing her into a wall.

Antara: nahi to. Main vo nimboo ki bag doondh rahi thi. Yiha to nahi hai.

Raghu: haan yihan nahi hai. Tu muhjse darti kyun hai

Antara: main nahi darti

Raghu: to tum hamesh peeche kyun jaati ho

Antara: nahi.. main vo..

She hit the back wall and her eyes widen. She was trap he was going to kiss her again without getting any answers.

Antara: d dehko Raghu main tume vo karne nahi doongi.

Raghu smirked

Raghu: kya karoonga main? He asked in a low husky voice that made her knees go weak

Antara: w w wahi jo tum din bhar karte ay ho. Jab tak tum mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi dehte tum nahi kar sakte.

Raghu: acha to jawaab dehne ke bad kar sakta hoon?

His smirk getting cheekier and Antara growing red

Antara: haan.. mere matlab hai nahi.. vo.. muhje jaane do neeche sab interzaar kar rahe hai

Raghu: Aur main jo teri jawaab ka interzaar kar raha hoon uska kya?

Antara was melting under his strong gaze. She couldn't answer anything her heart was racing and she couldn't understand what she was feeling. She had to make a run for it she couldn't deal with this right now. She bolted towards the door which she noticed to be closed. Before she could reach it she felt Raghus hands on her bare waist. He encircled her entirely making her eyes close and her breathing erratic.

Antara: chode muhje raghu

She said barely audible

Raghu: Nahi chor sakta. Tumhe chodna ab mere bas main nahi raha

He slowly turned her around

Raghu: Aankien khol miss kaul. Dekhe meri aankon main. Pata hai muhje vo apna first impression tere saath acha nahi tha. Gunda, awara ladka samajti hai. To iss baat ka darr hoga ki yeh gunda awara ladka tere saath ye sab kya time pass ke liya kar raha hai. Hai na?

Antara was shocked at how Raghu could understand her every thought.

Raghu: Limit ka gunda hoon. Kaha tha na tujhse. Tere saath kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakta main. Teri sawaal ka jawaab mere aankon main hai. Lekin kya hai na tumhe vo aankon ke baasha college main nahi parahi jaati to main hi samjah dehta hoon. Pyar karta hoon tumse Miss Antara Kaul. Tujhe dekhta hoon to apne aap ko rok nahi paata hoon. Aaj jab dekha ki tuhje jalan ho rahi thi to maine socha ki dehkoon ki tuhje bhi muhjse pyar hua hai ki nahi. Iss liye ye sab.

He was still holding on to her which was a good thing because Antara couldn't feel her legs. A single tear streamed down from her eyes. Every word Raghu said made her dizzy and ecstatic. She could finally make out her feelings. She understood what was happening inside her. She knew she loved him too.

Antara: Raghu. A smile crept on her face. Main bhu

Raghu: haan pata hai tu bhi muhjse pyar karti hai warna itni dher mere bahoon main yu kara ho kari mere baton pe aanso nahi baha rahi hoti

Antara: Kya itna confidence? Aur itni romantic moment chal rahi thi to apni bakwaas thori dher band kar ke nahi rak sakte the?

Raghu: Kya boli tu? Bakwaas? Aur jot u din bhar kit pit karti rahi thi hai vo? Chup chap subha bol dehti ki muhje mehendi wali se jalan hai to muhje itna bhagna nahi parta.

Antara: Kya kyun bolo main? Muhje nahi jalan hai kissi se!

Raghu: acha

Said raghu with a smirk gripping her tighter

Antara: h haan bilkul nahi. Ab choro muhje warna maroongi tume.

Raghu: tu kuch nahi kar sakti tere haathon mein mehendi lagi hai. Ab tu lar, chila, yah gaana ga main tuhje nahi choroonga.

Antara: main kehti hoon choro

Raghu: pehle bolo tuhje jalan hui

Raghu began backing her into the door while still gripping her waist.

Antara: Nahi boloungi

Raghu: Nahi bolegi?

Antara: nahi

Raghu: theek hai

They reached the wall and Raghu once again slammed his lips onto her. This kiss was different. It was passionate yet tender. Antara was going crazy but this time she relished every moment because it felt right. The kiss was not only passionate it was full of love. He kissed her till they were both breathless

Raghu (out of breath): jab tak tu nahi bolegi main yeh karta rahunga

Antara: to main zindagi bhar nahi bolungi

And with that they kissed again...

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