Vishvaas 2 Part 16-the end
NOTE: I know by ending like this i have disappointed many readers but i am sincerly sorry. I just cannot carry on now,im so busy with personal commitments that i dont have time to update. Also i am beginning to hate my story now..its losely written n very confusing and i myself dont know where its heading, i think it needs to end...its better that way than forcing myself to write a load of rubbish
I will breifly explain what happens next followed by a concluding VV scene...i hope i make up for not being able to write everything in detail.
Pratap singh will enter the story, he will be informed by his guptachars that Veer is not Niviriti's biological son and he is the son of a maid.Niviriti on the other hand is heading for Ujjain to find Veer and bring him back as she feels its too dangerous for Veer to face Pratap Singh without an army. She meets Dharam and Sia on the way...by looking at Sia she think Sia cud be pregnant after Dharam tells her abt Sia vomiting and fainting...Niviriti agrees with Dharam that he should take Sia to Avail
Veer arrives at Pratap Singh's palace where soldiers try to stop him but he starts slaughtering them left,right and center.He finally finds Pratap Singh in the courtroom
Both confront each other...Pratap singh talks about hatred for Veer's dad and lis love for Niviriti when Veer says "meri maa ka naam apni gandhii zuban se mat lena" to which Pratap singh tells him that Niviriti isnt even his mum...she adopted him coz she desperately needed a child...Veer doesnt beleive a word....Niviriti arrives at the scene...when Pratap Singh tells her to tell Veer that she is not his mum...nivi breaks into tears ....Veer goes up to her "ye kaise ho sakta hai...ap meri maa ho...sirf ap...ye koi sachai,raaz,insaan ya koi bhagwan nahin badal sakta....ap meri ma ho...bolo maa...ap he ho"
Niviriti is still crying but replys "agar janam denese koi ma ban ti hai toh mein tumhari maa nahin hoon par agar aisi baat hai toh Yashoda ko Krishna ki maa kehlane ka koi haq nahin hai....par usse haq hai....jaise ke mujhe haq hai tumhe beta bulane ka haq aur is haq ko mujse koi nahin cheen sakta...bhagwan bhi nahin...tum mere bete ho...sirf mere"
Veer hugs her...Pratap Singh is about to hit veer but both nivi and veer move out of the way...veer draws his sword and both have a huge show down in which both fight the battle to their very best...soon after pratap singh's men arrive and together all are beating up veer and have tied Niviriti up to watch all this
Pratap Singh is about to finish Veer off but a swrd comes and stops him "Vishva ki suhaag ko mitana itna asaan nahin hai" Vishva,Parth and Sanchi had entered the picture
Pratap Singh passes comments on Vishva's beauty,"meri behan ke taraf aankh utah kar bhi mat dekhna" Parth shouted causing a distraction for veer who kicked Pratap Singh out of the way...hugged Vishva briefly and a huge fight broke out between 20 of Pratap singh's men along with Pratap singh himself and Veer,Vishva,Sanch and Parth
After much fighting Pratap singh alone remained as his other men had been killed...Veer and Pratap singh circled each other...the rest looked at then....they began to fight....Finally Veer overpowered Pratap Singh and had him on the floor...before Pratap Singh can committ any more sins Veer pierced the sword through his body
Vishva freed Niviriti and both hug....Parth and Sanchi take Niviriti to a seat while Veer eyes find Vishva...he had feared losing her today but once again her confidence in him overpowered his fear
He opened his arms for a hug and she runs straight to him and is folded into a tight embrace.
The news of Pratap Singh's death soon spreads in the whole of Ujjain...all are delight. Veer has decided to merge Ujjain with Rajgardh also but has decided on keeping the name Ujjain...also Veer and Vishva decided to give Ujjain to Parth to rule...it was their way of thanking him for his loyalty
He was relunctant in the beginning but then accepted after much insistance
Nivi was happy the truth was out before veer but there was a bigger truth than that which is she was,is and will always remain as Veer's mother and no one can change that
Parth had enoght courage to propose to Sanchi who finally did accept and their wedding took place in Ujjain itself where Parth was crowned king
Dharam came back from Avail soon
Veer: Dharam kya baat...sab teek toh...aur bhabhi kaisi hai
Dharam: Veer tum chacha ban ne wale ho!!!
Veer: kya sach...tab toh tummhe Sia bhabhi se dur he rehna chahiye
Dharam: kyun
Veer: honiwali maa ko sundar logo ke saath rehna chahiye...aur sundar toh tum ho nahon😆
all laugh at this while Dharam throws veer a playful punch
All are happy to here that Sia is pregnant(she is 19 btw and for the 13th century thats old enough for kids😳)
DharamVeer talk about who will tell Dharam's child their friendship stories and what they will name the child and all
Veer and Vishva return to Rajgardh soon after seeing Sia who wud be staying in Avail for a few days
It was nightime and Vishva was standing at the balcony of the grand chamber in Rajgardh waiting for Veer...he said he will be arriving shortly...just then he walked in...dressed in mignight blue night clothes he looked better than ever
He was carrying a tray with a gladd of milk
Vishva: veer ye kya...humme kahan hota..aur waise bhi mehal mein itni sari daisyan hai
Veer: dasiyon se kaam nahin chalta...waise bhi ap humare liye roz karti hai...humme bhi apki seva karne dijiye maharani vishva
Vishva: iss kamre mein hum maharani nahin hai...sirf vishva hai...veer ki vishva
Veer makes her drink from the glass
Veer: jiske bina veer adhura hai
He drinks the left over from the glass
Vishva: aaj itna pyar jata ne ka karan
Veer: vishva hum dar gaye teh...ke hum apko ko na de...par
Vishva: par kya
Veer: par apke Vishvaas ne humare dar ko mat deh de...apko vishvaas tha ke humme kuch nahin hoga...aur aisa hi hua
Vishva: veer....ek bar muskura dijiye
Veer smiles
Veer: kyun
Vishva: aisa hi...ap muskuratre hue bohat ache lagte hai...aur humme vishvaas hai ap zindagi bhar aisa hi muskurate rahenge
Veer step a lil closer to vishva
Veer: hum apse bohat pyar karte hai
Vishva steps a lil closer
Vishva: nahin hum apko ziyaada pyar karte hai
Veer: naa...hum apko jitna chahte hai utna shyaad koi kisi ko chah sakta hai
he comes more closer and slowly leans over and kisses Vishva passionately....it begins to rain
Vishva: ek bar phirse
Veer smiles and they kiss again....
The End
regards,
Shona
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Personal take-
Personally i dont like Vishvaas 2 at all...its confusing,ridiculous and its just messed...reasons are i dont ever proof read as im too lazy plus i cant fin time to update regularly and when i do i dont have enough time to write everything properly. I didnt like writing this FF as much as my other ones...im glad its over...
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CREDITS:
name-Lashy suggested Vishvaas as this was a continuation of it i used the same name so i guess the credit would go to her👏👏👏thx di
Pix-im not sure if i have used many pix here but for all the pix credit goes to Vinisha👏👏👏vini u rock
Everything else- All the DVians who read this FF-thanks guys i hope i havent let you down and a huge thank you to everyone for reading...i am sorry if in the course of my writing i have hurt anyone.
THANKS ALL👏👏
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago
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