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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

reaali...bt u were awsome loool....u shud b proud! hehe😆wow thanks...lol now i am proud
😆😆😆hehe...ahhh Veeer...kya kahaaa...hes too good lol...it just shows how much dey mean to each otha doesnt it! u av portrayd it soo well hunthx...lol yup veer is veer...just finds a chance to romance anywhere...well dne uuuuu👏👏👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ektay11

shona plzzzz cont soon

actually i was realli busy in the last few days so wasnt able to update...i will do it soon
sorry for the delay everyone n thanks for being patient
Shona😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**

actually i was realli busy in the last few days so wasnt able to update...i will do it soon
sorry for the delay everyone n thanks for being patient
Shona😳

ok dear
tk ur time😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 14

On the other hand Veer and Vishva were in the middle of the jungle, both were worn out

Veer: chalo acha hi hua ke humme raste mein ye log mil gaye, inke saath khel ne ka maza ah gaya

Vishva: hump

Veer: ye kis liye tha

Vishva: veer ap jante hai humme humari puri takat lagani padi thi in sainik on ko marne mein, toh sochiye ke puri saina(army) kitni takatman hogi

Veer: sab takat se badhi ek aur takat hai jo humare pas hai jo pratap singh khabhi thodh nahin sakta

Vishva: kaisi takat

Veer: humara Vishvaas .ek dusre par .apni praja par praja ka hum par ,apne doston ka vishvaas aur apne sainikon ka .mujhe pura vishvaas hai ke agar yudh hua toh jeet humari hi hogi kyun Ujjain ke sainik apne maharaj ka adesh palan kar ne ke liye ladh te hai par humare sainik apne rajya ki suraksha ke liye ladh te hai .woh ranbhumi mein ek junoon ke saath jate hai jeetne ka junoon

Vishva: jo shayad apse sika hai...Veer humme ap par aur apki saina pe pura vishvaas hai.

Veer: bas ap ye baat humse din mein do-teen bar kehti rehna

Vishva: kyun?

Veer: apse ye sun ke humara hosla badh ta hai

Veer looks down a little when he sees that Vishva has hurt her leg badly yet still is walking with him without resting

Veer: arre Vishva apko toh chot ayi hai

Vishva: nahin itni gehri nahin hai bas mamuli hai

Veer: nahin ap idhar betiye hum kuch der aram karte hai

Vishva: nahin veer bilkul nahin humme jungle ke us par jald he ponchna hai Parth-Sanchi aur Dharam aur Sia ke pas

Veer: par Vishva tum aisa kaise chalo gi

Vishva has a idea

Vishva: humne kab kahan hum chalenge....

Veer: toh kya akela jaunga

Vishva: nahin

Veer: toh

Vishva gets up limping a lil and puts her arms aroung his shoulders, Veer understands what she was doing and picks her up into a piggy bak n both smile as Veer walks across the jungle with vishva on his back

They recall past moments together

Veer: yaad hai jab hum pehli bar mile the'.kitni bar tumhe us din chot ayi thi

Vishva: haan sab tumhari waje se

Veer: meine kya kiya

Vishva: tumne he toh kaha tha chalo dohd lagate hai ye bhi nahin soch ke hum ek ladki hai

Veer: vishva tum mein ladkiyon wali baat hi kahan thi tab

Vishva: agar mujhe mein tab ladkiyon wali baat hoti toh shayad ap aaj taj kuware hote kyun apko ek rajkumari se pyar nahin hua tha

Veer: sach mujhe ek rajkumari se pyar nahin hua tha mujhe mere kwabon ki mallika se pyar hua tha aur who ap hai

Both recall some other moments

They have reached the end of the jungle where they find Dharam n Sia have already reached with a horse and so have Parth and Sanchi

Parth: maharaj ap teekh hai

Veer: Parth tum kuch bhool gaye ho

Parth: maf kijeye Vansh ap teekh hai

Veer: hum teekh hai.

Dharam: Veer tum teekh toh ho na

Both brothers hug

Veer: nahin Dharam ab koi mujhe Veer ya maharaj nahin kahe ga sab mujhe Vansh bulayenge aur Vishva ko Vinisha

Sanchi: vis....Vinisha ap teekh toh hai apke peer mein kya hua

Vishva: kuch nahin mamuli se choot hai

Sia n Sanchi put a bandage over Vishva wound as well as a herbal paste

Veer: ab humme chalna chahiye in pahadiyon ke uppar wahin pe hum aram karenge ye jungle surakshit nahin

Sia n Dharam go first then Veer and Vishva and Parth and Sanchi.

There is some khichad (mud) and its slippery but Vishva doesn't see it and slip right into it

All laugh at her as she is covered in mud apart from her face

Veer trys to supreess his laughter and offers Vishva a hand

Veer: ab oothiya vishva

Vishva: nahin .tum humme uthao

Veer: toh ap jahan hai waha achi lagti hai khichad mein .he turns to leave smiling the other way

Vishva starts pretend crying

Veer bends down n scoops her up in his arms .smiling at her

She beams at him as he slowly walks through the mud and leads her to the bottom of the slope

Parth and Sanchi act as though they havent seen anything and carry on walking while Veer and Vishva follow on.

Precap: Veer: humme tumhari mang bhare ne do....ho sakta hai ye akiri bar ho
Vishva puts her hands to his lips to stop him
She takes his hand and puts it on her head
Vishva: bolo...akadh sau bhagyawati bhava
Veer: akand sau bhagyawati bhava
Vishva: ab mere shuhag ko kuch nahin ho sakta kyunki mere bhagwan ne mujhe akand sau bhagwati ka ashirwad diya hai
hope that made up for the long wait...will try n update agen today if possible
Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was gud loved vv moments
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
@esha-thanks esha-im glad u liked VV moments
@ekta-thx ekta-im pleased to know u liked
@xoxcuddlesxox-thx-btw whats ur name?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update shona...Precap seems to be nice veer filling vishwa's mang with sindoor
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Thanks for the lovely update shona...Precap seems to be nice veer filling vishwa's mang with sindoor

thx megha for reading
yup...actually i realised i havent included scenes of VV with sindoor
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww it was very perfect ...... loved it👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: junglli billi

wowwwwwwwwwwwww it was very perfect ...... loved it👏

thx hun
im glad u liked!!

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