Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

shona.....lovely FF........ hey im glad u liked it Rashi!

loved it a lot.........🤗

im happy to hear that u liked it very much

will post my detail comment later....ok will look forward to reading that

but just thought to appreciate ur work thx hun!!🤗

Originally posted by: CutieA

oohhh Shona! woooow...loved da update huni! VV....hmmmmmmmm lol...wah am i to say to dem or to uuuu! its jst fab! plz add sum DS moments too lol...ur precap made me smile n brought tears to ma eyes! so much love....woow...update soon huni xx

Originally posted by: **Shona**

hey im glad u liked it!

will add Ds moment in next part

yh the precap will make u either smile or cry...its a very emotional scene that i managed to write after being inspired by another scene i seen somewhere

was ment to update today n yesterday but cudnt due to studies n preparion for navratri

Originally posted by: CutieA

ohhh yayay! lol...updte wen u can.. jst as make sure u doo lol...im eager to know abt that precap now...studiess come 1st...no questions lol...ajj yes...navarti....i cnt wait...hmmm bt dnt fink il b able to go cos i start ma uni soon...😭

oh...yh uni does stop u from enjoying festivals....

well heres wishing u a happy navratri

n on topic of navratri im hoping to do a navratri update of VV

Originally posted by: jigs_b

first of all sorry dear for not being able to comment on the last part.... its ok di...as long as u read

but i hv read it... it ws fantastic n soo lovely...i liked the PS moments...but parth lied to sanchi... 😕... n sanchi didnt liked it..awwwww...so she has started to feel something for him!!!!!!!..hope so!!!😊..finally they won....👏im glad u liked it...she is beginning to feel something

lovely part....action packed!!!!👏yup

now back to this part:

hmmm.... VV MOMENTS!!!!!!!!!!😍...Thanks dear...🤗lol yup specially for u!

hmm..veer ko dushmano se khelne me mazaa aaya...😆....kabhi nahi sudhrega...!!!yup he can never change...likes challenges as always

hmm...vishva ne achha point bataya...ki itne logo ke liye unko puri taakat lagani padi!!!!...so puri sena ke samne to...hmmmm🤔vishva thinks quite alot but not as much as veer...he always has his smart point of view

humara Vishvaas .ek dusre par .apni praja par praja ka hum par ,apne doston ka vishvaas aur apne sainikon ka .mujhe pura vishvaas hai ke agar yudh hua toh jeet humari hi hogi kyun Ujjain ke sainik apne maharaj ka adesh palan kar ne ke liye ladh te hai par humare sainik apne rajya ki suraksha ke liye ladh te hai .woh ranbhumi mein ek junoon ke saath jate hai jeetne ka junoon

very well said veer....all words r so true....yup he's smart naa?

n vishva's words jo veer ka hosla badhate hai...hume aap pe aur apni sainko pe pura vishvas hai.....

veer ..hmm...din me do tin bar ye words kehte rahiye..hamara hosla badhati hai!!!!!wowwwwww.......soo cute..😳yup he sed that before as well that vishva's words do give veer confidence

ohh..vishva ko chaut lagi... veer is worried....as usual😍

wow veer lift her...lovely!!!!!!!!😳😍.......yup its cute

heehe.again they r recallig their fist meeting!!!!!!!!!.... they had fight..😆the poast moments are golden memories that these two will cherish for ever

hehehehe..vishva ke words...agar hum me ladkiyo wali baat hoti to aap kuware reh jaate...soo true yaar..veer ko to waise bhi koi rajkumari pasand nahi aati...😆xactly she's got a point...veer wudnt hav fallen for any normal rajkumari

I just loved these VV moments..thanks so much Shona..muaaahhhhhhhhhh specially for VV moments!!!!!🤗im glad u liked them di😳

so finally they hv reched to the end of jungle....yh

hahah..again vinisha n vansh...(Shona..tumne vini ko khush kar hi diya aakhir..congrats vini😆😉)lol was planning that for a while...hehe yup vini khush hogayi hogi...if she reads😳

awww..dharam ws worried for veer...so lovely..yup its that brother moment

sanchi n sia put bandage on vishva's wound...so cute!!!!!😊i thought they shud get to do honours this time seeing as veer always does😆

ohh so they r going on some mountain...

what??????vishva slip in to mud???hahahahhah..

n veer tried to supress his laug..hahhaha..so funny...yup...i was inspired by KYPH scene

n vishva wated him to lift her..n veer dinied...hehehe..vishva pretended crying..hahhaha..n veer lift her...cute..vishva bhi na!!!!!vishva showing her bachpana

n sanchi n parth..hahhaha..bechaare...😆hehe

ohh no..ye kya precap hai dear????aakhri baar mang bhar lene do!!!!!!111😲it will be an intense scene...havent written one in a long time

no yaar..pls..aisa waisa kuchh mat karna mere cutu nonu veer ko.nothing will happen to veer...nothing much nways...it will lead to the first confrontataion between pratap singh n veer

shona....😕

i loveddddddddddd this part sweety.....glad u liked it

thanks so much for VV moments...my favorite......!!!😳yup i know

lovely lovely n just lovely part.................!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗thx di 🤗

waiting for the next part.....😍

One More IMP thing.....Thanks so much for writing VV moments for me🤗ur welcome di...as i sed will try to include as many VV scenes as possible

Originally posted by: **Shona**

Originally posted by: CutieA

oooo woow....im reali lookin forward to it now.yup it will be in one of the few future parts... welll i mite b able to go to Navrati after all lolthats gr8!!...thank god!😃