Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 57

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

nice part shona!
finally jai is dead...but i was wondering, wat will agni do?? bcz if all villain are killed then wat will happen with story? 😛
we will get to know who will be the future king, 👏
but so soon??

thanks archana
yh jai is now dead
well u have to wait n watch as to what will agni do and well no i won get agni killed 😳
there might be another twist n as for knowing the king so soon...well if u think about theres only 4 parts left

Originally posted by: **Shona**

thanks archana
yh jai is now dead
well u have to wait n watch as to what will agni do and well no i won get agni killed 😳
there might be another twist n as for knowing the king so soon...well if u think about theres only 4 parts left

😲waat???? nahiiiiiiiiin😭😭😭

but u will create viswaas 2 naa?? plz tell me u will do.....

ok next part:
bear with me...i havent added pix but will do so later

Agni stares at the letter...he thinks about all his father n his attempts to kill Veer n harm Dharam and how his father had always told him Aryavardhan was their biggest enemy and that the throne belonged to them...agni recalled the many occassions on which JV had slapped agni...and nivi and arya cared for him...he recalled an incident wen he was about 7 and fell really ill and chances of him surviving were very low and it was then when arya conducted a day long haven for agni's wellbeing...Agni also thought of Vishva...he realised she cud never love him because he was his father's puppet...whereas Veer was an ideal princess...agni realised he didnt deserve Vishva...He thought over the past and what had happen and had come to a decisions...he took out a quill with ink and then a red silken cloth to write on.

The following morning DV went to their gurukul.
DV took guruji's blessing and proceeded towards the outside jungle

both werent allowed to talk to each other for it was like an official exam...

Guruji: yahan se app khatron ki bhool bhulaiya mein pravesh karenge...nayam humne apko samja diye hai...humare admin ap pe kadi nazar rakhenge...agar apne unko bhang kiya toh humme paata chal jayega....humara ashirwad apke saath hai aur ummed hai ke app surakshit loten

Both boys were given the go ahead nod and both ran into the jungle...this was a race not only to see who was better but the one who acts fast and smart

Dharam choose to go to the right of the jungle...he didnt know it was full of secret traps and that it was very dense and he would easily get lost

Veer choose to go to the left of the jungle which was full of dangerous animals and deadly insects...it was a long route and full of natural dangers...of course Veer was unknown to this fact...

Dharam's first problem arrived in the form of a deep ditch...

Dharam: AHH!!

he lands to the ground..his body ached for a few moments....that wasnt a soft landing he thought

He got up rubbing his head...

Dharam: hum kaise bahar nikle

He saw that the ditch was of fertile soil n the soil was damp...it must have been dug up only yeaterday...it rained lightly last night
Dharam used his hands to make a few holes on the side of the ditch...he then put his foot on the holes and made his way up...he got out of teh ditch and sat on the flat ground...he was sweating...he gave a sign before getting up and moving on

Veer on the other hand came across his first problem which was a blocked path...there was three huge trees laid infront of him blocking his way...there was trees everywhere blocking his path...only way was climbing over the three fallen trees thought Veer

Veer climbed on top of the tree but he slipped and landed on his back...he was in pain but that didnt stop him...he got up and tried to climb over again and this time managed...he jumped of the last tree at the end and made his way forward

over the next hour and a half the boys were worn out mentally and phsically
Dharam had counters with other such trap...he got lost in teh jungle and ended up going in circles for ages and then he realised and so he decided to make marks on trees so he realises his way...he finally got out of that...one of the traps included Dharam hanged from a tree upside down and from there he freed himself

Veer encountered a snake who he smartly passed and then he came across a few wild monkeys and then had to cross teh lake which had 2 crocodiles and after that his final encounter was with a lion...Veer was not fighting teh wild lion for the throne...this was a matter of life and death...the lion had been angered by Veer for some reason and was trying everything possible to kill him...Veer somehow overpowered the lion and found a sharp and big log on the ground...he plucked it straight into the lions body which gave a deafening roar
of pain...Veer could barely move now yet carried on and came to the other side of teh jungle where he saw Dharam was just in line with him...Both boys had come out at the same time...Guruji was standing there looking impressed

Dharam looked at Veer
Dharam: veer...ye sab

Veer: tumhe ye chot kaise lagi

They both greet each other with a hug

Dharam: undar ek pal ke liye

Veer: mujhe aisa laga ke meine tumko koh diya

After Guruji got a vaid to treat both boys Guruji took them into a room seperately and asked them questions based on all they had learnt...he placed scenarios and all sorts which DV both amnaged to answer well

on the otherhand Sia n Vishva came over to Ambika MAa's ashram
Both were asked to demonstrate all they had learnt
Both had to show their cooking,dancing,singing,instrumental skills

Ambika maa came to the door to bid them farewell

AM: app dono ke bina humara yahan maan nahin lage ga

Vishva: humme bhi is jaga ke bina dil nahin lage ga

Sia: Ambika maa apke guru dakshina

Both girls pass on a big idol of Durga maa

Vishva: humare gyan ki kimat dhan ya daulat nahin

Both take AM's blessings and leave

Back in Aryanagar both boys have returned and a conference is held in the courtroom to hear what the decision the rajyasabha n guruji have come up with

all are settled well and looking at Rajyamantri

DV are nerveously looking at each other

Rajmantri: hummne faisla kiya hai ke aryanagar ka hoonewala maharaj hai....


Precap: Vishva: tumhare Rajya abhishek ki tayariya bhi toh karni hai

Veer: woh choodo...tum khush ho kya

Vishva looks away...feeling slightly uncomfortable


Enjoy

Shona

That was a nice one Shona.. Loved the test of DV.. but abhi bhi suspense 😕 Cant wait for the next update .. n Vishwa uncomfortable
I loved the way u depicted Agnis thoughts.. I actually felt sorry for him 😭
Awesome part 👏

that was great part thanx shona i think veer is aryanagar's maharaj that's why vishwa is uncomfortable newayz thanx you'r the best shona dear. 👏 👍🏼


hiri

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😲waat???? nahiiiiiiiiin😭😭😭

but u will create viswaas 2 naa?? plz tell me u will do.....

yh i will end Vishvaas here but will come back with Vishvaas 2-in a couple of months time 😛 -so cheer up archana

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

That was a nice one Shona.. Loved the test of DV.. but abhi bhi suspense 😕 Cant wait for the next update .. n Vishwa uncomfortable
I loved the way u depicted Agnis thoughts.. I actually felt sorry for him 😭
Awesome part 👏

thanx bhuvi for commenting
im glad u liked DV test...i cud have made tha more detailed but i guess after losing all the typed script once today i just wanted to post it quickly plus i got a bit lazy
well Vishva's reason for being uncomfortable will be clear 2morrow
yup i think killing agni wudnt have been rite...its time he left his father's finger n walked independently...n for that to happen he had to think...im glad u liked that part...i guess i did create some sympathy n positive feelings for him for once

keep reading n do comment 😳

Originally posted by: hiri

that was great part thanx shona i think veer is aryanagar's maharaj that's why vishwa is uncomfortable newayz thanx you'r the best shona dear. 👏 👍🏼


hiri

im glad u liked it esha
hey dont jump to conclusion that fast coz u'll be in for a surprise 2morrow
thanks 😉

Thanx shona i really liked the part... and now i can't wait for the next one cause of your recap od veer and vishva 😳 .......

Thanx and do contineu 👏 .......