Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 55

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry for the delay in the update as well as replying to all ur kind comments and suggestions guys....actually im so busy these days i dont have enough time to update Vishvaas...so i havent update in a couple of days but will try to tomorrow!

thanks for waiting patiently-(ahem ahem megha-lol onli kidding 😆 😳 )
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Posted: 17 years ago
okkkkk shona didi we will wait jab time mile toh update kar dena 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok time for the next update:

DV are informed that night that they have there final gurukul exams in a they day after tomorrow
Both boys are busy practising for it(the exam consists of one practical-obsticle course n another scenario and what they wud do if they were the king theory test)

DV are in their room thinking of a way to get to aryavardhan fast

That night they see two figures walkingout of the palace through the back...DV look at each other

Dharam: chalo veer

DV leave n go to aryavardhan

Dharam: pitahji ap humare saath chaliye...baas ap chaliye...aaj apne kanno se sach sun lijiye

Arya: par Dharam...

Dharam: apko humari kasam pitahji

Arya was left no option other than go with Dv so he follows them

The three of tehm follow the two figures secretly

the two figures come to a stop at a nearby cave

Jaivardhan tells his soldiers who are waiting for him

Jai: dhyan rahe koi indar na ah paye

Him n agni enter

DV go behind the soldiers and slowly n silently manage to kill all of them then with arya they all evesdrop on the conversation going on inside

Jai: dharamveer ki kismat he achi hai...is liye lakh koshishon badh woh bach jate hai

Agni: kaas karke Veer

Jai: par is bara aisa nahin hoga...is baar humme aisa kuch karna hai jis se woh bach na paye

Agni: haan pitahji humme aisa kuch karna hai jis se Veer bach na paye...phir dharam toh waise he mar jayega aur phir...phir maharaj aryavardhan....phir pitahji mein raja banuga aur vishva se shaadi bhi

Jai thinks in his mind: phir mein uss vishva ko bhi mar dalunga...agar ye he raasta ho mere paas usko tumhare khayalon se dur karne ka!

Arya n DV hear all this and make an entry into the cave

Jai and agni laugh evily wen they see Arya along with DV n get shocked!!


Jv: arya tum yahan kaise...mein yahan baas rajya karya ke liye aya tha

Arya: Arya: bhaiya hummne sab sun liya...ab humme DV pe yakeen hai...

JV: nahin aryavardhan woh toh baas...tum jante ho ye mere bache bhi hai...aur mein DV se bohat pyar bhi toh karta hoon

Arya: par singhasen se ziyada nahin

Veer: maharaj mujhe agiya dijiye ke mein unhe yaheen cheer dalun

Arya: nahin Veer mujhe aaj ye jaana hai ke bhaiya ke maan mein aisa zeher kyun hai

JV: huh...mein bada tha par sighasen muhje nahin tummhe mila...woh mera tha aur hamesha mera he rahega...aur ab tumhara beta Dharam aur phir ye Veer mere Agni se ye singhasen chin lenge....mein ye khabhi nahin dekh sakta Aryaverdhan....kehne ko toh tum mere bhai ho par asal mein tum mere sabse bade dushman ho...aur aaj jab tumhe sab sach paata chal gaya hai toh is ka kya fayda...aaj tumhari zindagi ka akhri din hai....

Arya is dumbfound at what Jai had said


Jai: tumne mujhe pe ankh band karke bharosa kiya...aur iska meine pura fayda uttaya....tumhari praja ke dil mein tumhare liye kitni nafrat bhardi meine...unse kitne saalon se doh guna laagaan lehte hai...ek goona rajya ke liye aur ek mere liye...aur woh bechare samajte hai ke ye sab ke peeche tum ho...kitne amm beguna aadmi ke jaan meine le...apne manorajan ke liye aur apne kaam ke liye...aur kya kya meine nahin kiya rajya karya ka bahaana banah ke

Arya is furious...he takes his sword out
Jai also pulls out his sword

DV also do but arya asks them to arrest agni n not interfere between him and jai

DV arrest agni with ease while arya n jai battle like animal...agni is lost in thoughts but also trys to help his father only DV dont let him

After what felt like hours of duelling Arya gets the better of Jai n slices him on teh leg n chest

Arya: bhaiya aryanagar ka maharaj hoone ke nate...mein apko saaza-e-maut sunata hoon...ye apke har ek atyachara aur zulme ke saaza hai


Arya cuts through Jai's defences and pushes the sword straight through Jai who looked pretty grusome and covered in blood

Jai: aryavardhan....singhasen mera hai...

he passes out....he was dead

Agni: PITAHJI

DV n Arya call for men n take Jai's body n an unstable agni back to the palace

All are shocked to see what was bought infront of them

Aryavardhan calls a court meeting in which he explains his actions and clarifies taht he decided to kill jai who was a criminal


All seem satisfied with the long and detailed lecture arya had given to sort things out

Jai's body was burnt then itself by teh royal family....all who didnt know how to react to everything which was happening so fast

Agni was in his room....think...all that hgad happen in the last 7 hours
him n jai made a plan...left to disscuss it..DV n arya came in...Arya n jai duel....Jai dies so suddenly...how agni did his antim sanskar straight after the hour n half long meeting in courtroom...

he was thinking when came in a messenger....she gave agni the message and went away

agni opened the message

Agni,
hum jante hai ke tum aaj bohat dukhi ho...
tumne apni maa ko bachpan mein koh diya
aur aaj pitaahji ko bhi
par ab shayaad tumhe usse dard ka ehsaas
ho raha hai jo un bekaasoor ko hua jinke parivaar ko
tum ne aur tumhare pitahji ne iss tara cheer dala tha

Hum jante hai ke tumne is tara akele kuch nahin kiya par aaj zaroor apne nazariye se kuch dekhne ki koshish karna...na ke apne pitahji ki....

Tumhare chichere bhai,

DharamVeer

agni looked at it n thought for himself for the first time


Precap:

DV are giving their final exams while vishva n sia are giving there gurudakshina

later on returning to aryanagar in the courtroon a conference is held

the rajyamantri: hummne faisla kiya hai ke aryanagar ka hoonewala maharaj hai....


enjoy

Shona

PS personally i dont like this part as theres not enough of either DV and teh girls are missing...but i think it was neccessary to end jai's track...maybe it is a bit rushed i guess...i dont know but i dont like this part much next will be better for sure




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Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!! 👏 👏 👏
thanks Shona 😊
finally jai is dead 👏
hope agni will learn some lesson from this. it was not boring a bit. agni jai are the part of the story . it is gud dont worry.I like this part also.story main action/thrill hona bhi to jaruri hai!!! keep writing. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx shona nice part... At last jai is dead {atleast in your storry} 😉

Lovely part assual 👏 ... keep it up 😉
Do contineu... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Finally that Jai vardhan is dead 😳 I am so glad that u killed one evil person today shona 😉 😆 😆 Waise actually u r right missed DV & Vishwa & sia in this part ...waiting for the next part....keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
finlly jai is dead 👏 đŸ„łloved it shona.. tho missed interactions of boys n girls 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowo shona nice update, loved ur new installment 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
y r u upset with this part đŸ€— ??u r a wannabe bollywud scriptwriter 😉 Tum yeh janti ho ki ek masal b'wud story mein romance ke saath saath action hona bhi zaroori hai 😊 Part achha tha 👏
if my frnd is upset I will 😭
plzz update sooner this time đŸ‘đŸŒ
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow shona nice update, 👏

keep it up

shona wht r u doing here better u join hands with ekta.....so we can atleast hope a better story in ekta's serial😉

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