Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 59

@spandita: thanks for the compliments 🤗
yh the exam was similar to 3rd task of GOF

well the suspense is neccessary naa?
😳

Originally posted by: hiri

yes thanx shona for such a good story really appriciate it.

thanks esha..im glad u liekd this part n hope u will like next parts also

yaaayyy! vishvas 2 🥳 🥳........ but when?? 😕
aw!! veer and vishvas realtions is as a married couple!! 😳 😍
and jump into conclusions meri aadat hei 😛 kya karoo..

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

yaaayyy! vishvas 2 🥳 🥳........ but when?? 😕
aw!! veer and vishvas realtions is as a married couple!! 😳 😍
and jump into conclusions meri aadat hei 😛 kya karoo..

wow archana u seem so excited
yh well in a couple of months time i will start it
ur already day dreaming abt Veer n Vishva as a married couple 😳 just imagine them 😍

well u'll be in for a surprise with the next part

sorry for late reply shona dear n thank u for the another lovely part 😊 👏
hope agni realise about his mistakes 😛
waiting to see more VV moments 😳
its so sad that u r going to wrap the story in next few parts 😭 but will wait for vishva part2
will miss ur ff 😊

ok agla part:

Rajmantri: hummne faisla kiya hai ke aryanagar ka hoonewala maharaj hai....

He opens the scroll on which the rayasabha had chosen the king

Rajmantri stops...he looks at the scroll

Everyone looks nerveous
Rajmantri clears his throat

Rajmantri: maharaj dono rajkumar Dharam aur Veer ke gurukul ke pradarshan ke badh Rajya sabha ne bohat socha aur is natije pe ayi hai ke Dharam aur Veer dono singhasen ke kabil hai...aur in dono mein se kisi ek ko hum nahin chun pa rahe hai

Everyone is surprised and slightly shocked...Arya calmly questions

Arya: toh ab kya kiya jaye

Rajyamantri: ab Rajgarane ko he dono mein se kisi ek ko chun na hai

Arya looks on annoyed slightly at being put into such a dialemma...he dreamed to see his son Dharam sit on the throne but he also loved Veer like his own son and didnt want to do any unjustice to him

Arya: humme sochne ka waqt chahiye

Veer steps up

Veer: maharaj agar agiya ho toh mein kuch bolun

Arya: agiya hai

Veer: maharaj ap Dharam ko utaradhikari ghoshit kar dijiye

Dharam: Veer!...ye tum kya keh rahe ho

Vishva too looked shocked... a loud buzz of whispers followed
Veer cleared his throat

Veer: Ye mein is liye nahin keh raha kyun ki mein Dharam ka choota bhai hoon aur usse jaan se bhi ziyada pyar karta hoon...balke is liye keh raha hoon kyunki mein kaise tee,teen rajya ko sambhal paunga

Everyone was shocked by this

Dharam: Veer kya mazak hai ye

Arya: Veer saaf saaf kaho tum jo kehna chahte ho

Veer: maharaj kuch dino pehle dadaji ne humme Rajgardh ke sighasen sambhale ne ki zimedari sopne ka paisla kiya tha aur Maharaj Samar ne bhi mere samne prastaf rakha tha Sumaiya ko un ke badh sambhalne ka...aur meine faisla kiya hai ke kyunki woh dono rajya ek dusre ke padosi hai unko ek bana ke mein chalaunga...usske upar mein Aryanagar kaise sambhal paunga...ap Dharam ko raja banaye

Nivi: Veer bilkul teekh keh raha hai...Dharam ko raja ghoshit kar dijiye bhaiya

Arya thinks for a bit and turns to the Rajmantri who nods in approval...Samar also looked extremely happy and so does Veer's grandfather...Veer's dadaji hugs Samar to mark the future union of the kingdoms

Dharam too seemed satisfied enough with this and hugged Veer and then beamed at Sia who looked very happy
Veer looks satisfied and turns to Vishva who smiled at him...Veer's smile vanished..he knew she had put on a false smile...but why was the question


Nivi: Agni kahan hai bhaiya...kal ka nazar nahin ah raha

Everyone looks for Agni and find a red silken cloth in his room with writing

Chacha,niviriti bua aur Dharamveer,

meine aur pitahji ne ap sab ko kitne dukh ponchaye hai
aur is sab ka prayashit karne ke liye mein ap sab se bohat dur ja raha hoon...mujhe doond na maat apko meri kasam

bas sukh shanti se jina...Dharamveer Aryanagar tumhara tha aur tumhara he rahega...usko achi tarah se sambhalna

App sab ka

Agni

Later that evening Samar came into Veer
Veer: arre ap...mujhe bula liya hota toh mein aaja ta

Samar: veer hum apka shukriada karne aye hai...ab hum nishchint reh sakte hai ye soch kar ke ab jaisa veer(braze warrior) Sumaiya ko sambhale ga

Veer: ap mujhe sharminda mat kijiye

Samar: arre hum toh baatana bhool gaye teekh teen din badh ka apka Rajya abhishek ka mahorat aya hai

Veer: par maharaj abhi toh ap hai

Samar: nahin veer...hum hai par Sumaiya ko sambhal te sambhalte hum kudh ko waqt nahin de paye...is beech humari maharani Meenakshi aur beti Saanvi ke lash ko bhi hum kandha de chuke hai...par ab humare paas tum ho...Vishva hai toh hum befikar ho kar todi zindagi ji le...aur haan jab kabhi apko humari zaroorat padeh gi tab hum apke saath honge

Veer looks at him...for the first time he felt the presence of a father figure in his life

Samar: aaj humme aisa lagta hai ke humme beta mil gaya...

Veer: aur shayad mujhe pitah...

Samar kissed Veer on the forehead n they hug

Veer felt how important it was to have your father...it was like having a shelter

Soon after Samar leaves Vishva enters

Veer: neela rang tum par bohat accha lagta hai...aaj bohat khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Vishva blushed slightly but then decided to play around with veer for a bit(tease him)

Vishva: aacha...dekhna ho utna aaj dekh lo kal mein chali jaungi

Veer: ayyy...
he goes right close to her..his voice is barely more than a whisper

Veer: tum hamesha mere pas thi aur hamesha mere dil ke itne karibi rahogi...tum mujhse khabhi dur nahin ja sakti kyunki mein tumhe chood unga nahin

Vishva: accha...mein bhi dekhti hoon

She turns to leave n run only to find Veer chase her around teh room...

Veer: Vishva tum dekh lo mein tumhe choodunga nahin...

Vishva: ek bar pakado toh sahi

She runs to the otherside and Veer goes behind her...Veer hides beehind the curtains

Vishva realises Veer is missing and looks around

Vishva: Veer...Veer kahan ho tum...Veer

Veer comes from behind Vishva and grabs her

Veer: teekh yahan...tumhare pass

both laugh...they dont let go of each other

Veer: waise kahan ja rahi ho

Vishva: ghar...

Veer: ye tumhara ghar nahin hai

Vishva: nahin mein Sumaiya ki baat kar rahi thi

Veer: kyun wahan kyun jana hai...mein toh yahan hoon

Vishva: Veer! tumhare rajya abhishek ke tayari bhi toh karni hai

Veer: woh choodo...tum khush ho kya

Vishva looks away...feeling slightly uncomfortable

Veer: kya baat hai..mein dekh raha hoon ke tum kuch khush nahin lag rahi ho jabse hum Raj darbar se aye hai

Vishva: veer tumne Aryanagar ke singhasen ko kyun tukra diya

Veer: Vishva...jahan tak mein maan ta hoon tum mere jeevan sangini ho...aur mujhe haar faisla kar ne se pehle tumhe puchna chahiye...

Vishva: nahin Veer aisi baat nahin...par mein janti hoon ke jo tumne rajsabha ke ageh bola tha woh sach nahin

Veer: Aryanagar mera nahin hai...Dharam ka tha aur hamesha uska he rahega...

Vishva: Veer tumhare isi soch aur samaj se hum beintiha mohabbat karte hai

Veer: sirf soch aur samaj se

Vishva: nahin nahin...aise kitni aisi aisi baate hai jinse hum bohat chahte hai

Veer: jaise ke

Vishva: aaj jan ne ki jaldi kya hai...shaadi ke badh

Veer: nahin aaj

Vishva nahin

with that she turns to leave and goes from there

Veer is left with a smile on his face


Precap: Panditji: in dono ki shaadi ho sakti hai...sab badhaye tal jayengi...jab MahaShaani puja hogi

Puja is carried out n VV n DS ke shaadi ka mahurat is taken out

all is happy and then prepare for wedding and rajya abhishek


Enjoy

Shona

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

wow archana u seem so excited how not, this is my night story 😳 aww..im pleased that u read Vishvaas everyday

yh well in a couple of months time i will start it ok, i will dedicate that time to others thingsthats a gd idea

ur already day dreaming abt Veer n Vishva as a married couple just imagine them yaa.. just imagine them, but i really liked when u said that veer already sees vishva as his wife, this veer is so cute
yup he does...yh i guess this veer is very romantic n sweet 😳

well u'll be in for a surprise with the next part will waitwaits over ...read part 49!