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Brilliant concept and written superbly👏👏

Loved it zainub... cant wait to read further please continue soon.

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Originally posted by: Shahista01
Brilliant concept and written superbly👏👏

Loved it zainub... cant wait to read further please continue soon.

Thanks for pm ... muuaahhh

Thank you Shahi..😳

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NOTE:-

Hello Everyone, doing well?😛

okay this note is too clear the confusion of many readers, who cannot understand the present track of the story.

As for now, the story is proceeding in the past, Manyata's past. what circumstances occurred in her life 7 years ago. further, you will know where is Udayveer and what horrible happened with them. I think it's enough, as for the rest, I'll leave on the future Updates. May God give me enough time and power to update regularly.😆

Thanks for reading, I hope it cleared much confusion.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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will be eagrly waitng for ur updatee!!!!!!!😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...anju...
but zinu wen will u update

difficult question... lol
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zainab

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Chapter 2

Perveez had witnessed the drama, he felt sorry for Manyata, but couldn't do anything.''

She is so innocent khushboo.'' said perveez, caressing his chin.''

Yes sir, what Udayveer sir is doing with her is not good. I feel bad for her.''

No Khushboo, I think whatever is happening is good, I can feel it. I can see something big between them...you know what?

What sir?

Did you hear what Udayveer sir said at last? It was something which he did not, but his heart said.''

Really sir? But what did he say?

He told her, that he hate tears in HER eyes...

What does that means sir?

Sometimes the heart sees what is invisible to the eye.''

She stared at him with a confused look.''

Oh dear!! Don't pressurize your tiny brain.''

Okay sir.'' she smiled, and blinked her eyes.''

***

Udayveer was rocking his chair back and forth, he was himself confused about his words. Why did he said that? Did he really mean it, it was rite he didn't like her crying, but why?

Ah, Udayveer you're thinking way too much today. It was just slip of tongue. He ignored is heart, as always.

I need to get in action now. He dialed a number eventually.

Hello Adhi?

Hey buddy, wazz up?

Nothing, just wanted a favor.

What favor?

Udayveer explained him the entire thing, and what he had to do.

Okay buddy, think it's done. No fear when Aditiya is here.

Udayveer smirked, and disconnected the call.

***

Manyata reached her home all gloomy, she knocked and knocked the door, but no body opened. She got scared, where did her mother and granny go? She took out her phone, from her bag, saw many missed calls from grandma's number, she called back but it was switched off.

Oh God what should I do now. She knocked her neighbors door. One lady came out and told her that, an ambulance came, which took them to the city hospital. She also told her that Manyata's grandma asked her to tell Manyata that where they are.

Manyata rushed to the hospital, she was worried about her mother. As soon as she reached there, she found her grandma sitting on a bench.

Grandma, what happened to maa, tell me, is she okay?

Calm down Manyata, nothing happened to her, and why are you asking this, didn't you send the ambulance for your mother's operation?

Manyata was baffled, the very instant her phone rang, and it was HIM again. Manyata went to a side and nervously answered the call.

Hey Wifey! Baffled han? I sent the ambulance with my friend, he told your granny that you've got the job and they've offered this free treatment for your mum.''

so don't take tension, your mother will be fine and normal within two days, then I will send my parents to your place for our marriage. Okay?

Manyata nodded her head in a yes.

Wifey, I can't see your moving head on the phone, so kindly say something in your sweet voice. Udayveer said flirtiously.

Ya, okay! She said in a meek voice.

So, wifey is shy from me?

No, she protested!!

Oh yea!

Nothing like that okay...

Fine, meet me at my pent house tomorrow, 9am sharp.

Without waiting for her reply he disconnected the call, leaving Manyata with no choice.

***

After waiting for what seemed like ages, the operation was successful, grandma and Manyata were very revealed and happy. It was very late and Manyata was already very tired. She laid on the sofa, and granny was on the stretcher as her mom was kept under observation for the night.

She had just closed her eyes, but to her disturbance her phone beeped. She checked the message and it was udayveer's text. I am waiting outside the hospital in my car, come out now.
Manyata was hell irritated now. But she had to listen to him, it was because of him, that her mother was okay now, she could do anything to repay him. She got up and left.
Manyata was looking for Udayveer outside. She was about to walk when a car halted in front of her, she was about to fall but somehow managed.
Udayveer opened the door for her and ordered her to sit in. As soon as she sat in, he drove the car to a dark corner and parked it. Came out and also asked her to come out.

Why did you call me at this hour?

Hmm, to check on you, see don't try to runaway.''

But why will I?

What if this thought came to your mind, and your mom is fine, you can escape easily.

See, I will not break my promise, I'll do what you'll ask me to.

Okay, I believe you.

Did you call me here, to ask this only?

Amm, yes!

Manyata stared at him in disbelief. Udayveer was looking at her from top to bottom, with a weird kind of feeling inside. She felt million butterflies dance in her stomach as he came near her, they were having a beautiful eye-lock. Udayveer approched her ear and ran his fingers into her hair.

You look beautiful in this lacy nighty...don't wear such nighty's after marriage, I won't be able to control myself. He whispered huskily, sending electric shocks into her body.
His nose was caressing her cheek, and his hand caressing her arm. Manyata was frozen by his touch. It felt right to them. As soon as his cold lips brushed against her neck, she breathed heavily and clutched onto his shoulder tightly. Udayveer was loving her smell, so sweet, so intoxicating it was. He was in some other world.

With honk of the other car she came to senses and pushed him away from. Manyata ran away from him as fast as her feet could take her, she stopped when she closed the door of the room. She was glued to the door, she was sweating and breathing heavily. She closed her eyes only to see him. What was that, which happened a while ago, what had got into her, why didn't she stop him. And his words.

Stop Manyata, just stop thinking about what happened. Forget like it was a nightmare. She made a mental note not to think about it.

***

Next morning, Manyata woke up at 8am had a look on her mother and went to meet Udayveer, she was feeling very awkward, after last night's event, how will she confront Udayveer now, but she had to anyway gaining some strength she walked in his pent house and knocked his room. The door was slightly open, but it was bad manners to go in directly, so she kept on knocking. After 10 minutes of constant knocking, she decided to go in.

Manyata walked in, but no body was inside, the room was huge and elegant. Manyata got drowned in the beauty of the room, and kept roaming here and there. It was a double room, one side had a small bar and a proper sitting area, while the other had bed, closet and dressing room with attached bathroom. She went to the bed side, which had a huge dressing table, several perfumes, lotions and what not was kept there. She smiled at herself looking in the mirror. Manyata was touching his stuff, when she saw another reflection in the mirror, she hurriedly turned around and was about to scream. But Udayveer caught her, pinned her to the wall and covered her mouth with his hand.

***

sometimes, life brings you to an unknown track, where you are not you, but someone else. And standing in front of the person whom you start loving, without your concern is something amazing, but when you lock eyes with them, you know at that very moment that they will affect your life in some profound way. That was the first time when I realized, that there's something very strong between us, but I wasn't sure enough of what was happening, was it liking? Fear? Anxiety? Or LOVE? My stupid heart raced a million times faster in his presence. I was afraid of losing my heart. Whenever his eyes met mine, I was always lost, lost in his world, which told that he's not a bad guy, but a man with a golden heart, so he is. Manyata finished with a smile, She was so drowned in her past, she said everything out loud, to the clouds, winds, everyone, that she never noticed a teenage couple who were sitting next to her, listening to her story.

Girl- where is he?

Manyata-He'll always remain In my heart, besides I don't know why didn't he came back.

Boy-So what happened after that?

Manyata smiled at him and continued.

***

Udayveer shook his head, throwing the water droplets from his wet hair on Manyata's face, which got her out of her eye-lock.

Ohh, Ehh, actually, I, I, I just, a, amm, forgot my file outside. She tried to run, but stumbled into his arms badly, making them both fall down. Manyata was covered by his hard body, she felt very weird things in her stomach, when his half naked body was above her face. Udayveer had just came after a bath, si he had wrapped only a towel around his waist, rest was naked. Udayveer moved above, to see her flushed face. She looked so like an Angel with pink cheeks, sure he was attracted to her, very strongly. He smiled looking at her scared frame and quietly got up, helped her too.

You can wait out, I'll be there in a moment, actually I wanted you to change your wardrobe, I have called the designers outside. You gi to perveez he'll assist you, I hope there's no need of mine, actually I have some important meetings to attend. Okay?

Yes okay.''

Manyata started walking with a bowed head.

Don't forget to knock next time. Okay?

She nodded and quickly left, leaving a smiley Udayveer behind.

***

Manyata's mother had recovered completely, she was back home. Udayveer's friend Aditiya had taken the marriage proposal to udayveer's parents, they really loved Manyata, they were pleased to know that Udayveer approved her and was ready to marry her, but were unknown to the game which he had played.

The proposal was further taken to manyata's mother and granny, they were obviously overwhelmed to have such a son-in-law. All was going well, there marriage was fixed within the coming week, Henceforth, they got married lawfully. Now they were lawful HUSBAND & WIFE, who were to live under one roof, in one room, for one year, TOGETHER!!!

***

This is all I can write for today, I'll try to update fast. do leave your views about the chapter? and don't forget to like. tell me if you like this story.? and please NO RES BOARDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Edited by -Zina- - 11 years ago

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

hey,
how are you?
i really missed you a lot...😭
at a point I thought you left if
thanks a tons for coming online
and updating yous stories dear
as for this update
it was so romantic
glad that manyata 's mother is all right
and entire time manveer was just
so romantic but the nightie scene
is my favorite
i feel that the little girl is their daughter
in your note you mentioned that something horrible
happened to uday and did he really start to love her
or after marriage he used her and then left her
this adhi looks fishy to me for some
weird unknown reason
thanks for the pm
left me with some solved question and just one question troubling me
where is uday now?
hope to get answer fast
do update asap
hugss
anni

Edited by annabh - 11 years ago

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pia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

thaaank uu fr updatingg,i wa sso waitng for it!!!!! manyata flrtatious talks r soo romnticc then dta parking lot waqla incdnt was sending gossebmpss!!!!! the last part was alsoo soo so romnticc,loving it a lott,do cntinue soon plzzz!!!!!!!😊😊

Edited by pia.raha - 11 years ago

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