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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

LOVED IT.AWESOME UPDATE.LOVED IT LOADS ZINU.

SEEMS LIKE MANVEER TO FALL IN LUV AFTER MARRIGE.IN PROLOGUE U SAID MANYATA IS WAITING FOR SOMEONE.IS IT UV.

ENJOYED IT.CONTINUE SOON.I DONT GET MY PM.

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Hi Zainab di 😊
How u?
Wow, chapter 1 was amazing, totally mind blowing 👏
Hope Manveer fall in love while they act as husband n wife 😃
Woa, Uday in love with a blond was shocking 😲
Totally love the update ⭐️
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃
Eagerly waiting for next chapter n the story is amazing 👍🏼

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey Zina nice plot and you wrote it soo welll

Keep it up dear 👍🏼

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

oh f**king shit wat the f**k i mean uday use her now its intresting I LOVE U ZINA wat a story maza aa gaya yr ... jaldi se second part de de plz !!!

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Wow that was awesome zina
And obviously u wrote it so its always worth reading for me!!!
Aahh the manveer sizzling chemistry from 1st chapter itself so nice!! Plzzz update soon!!!

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

A really nice start to your Short Story. You know it reminds me of hum aapke dil mein rehte hain with anil kapoor and kajol. I am eagerly waiting for the next few chapters and can't wait till the story takes its new route. Good luck and please PM me.

P.S> i forgot to mention you a GREAT, Imaginative and FLUENT writer. Continue soon please!!!

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

fab update...manveer gonna tie up in a contract marriage...wow i cant wait for it...thanks for pm...and really sorry for late commenting...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hey Zainab 😊,

amazing update!

Uday has given Manyata no choice , but to accept his offer. 1 year married to Uday - NOT A BAD OFFER I TELL YOU😉!

Awww, her mother has a brain-tumour , that's sad😭.

Now ... the bitch of the moment - BETHEL ! I hate her😡 ; hope u get rid of her fast😈.

Loved the first chapter Zina ...

Please do continue soon ,

thanks for the PM😊.

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Nice update Zina !

Perfectly written 👏

Loved it 😳

But i am confused 😕

Is the story going in flashback or like the prologue part would come further ????

Uday is a BEAST ... 😡

Taking advantage of Manyata for his own benefit !

But i like dhow he didn't like Bethel insulting her 😳

And even he feels bad for what he is doing !

I guess they would soften up after marriage 🤔

Waiting to read more !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

awesome zina loved it... poor manyata she has not choice other than to marry uday... but cant cant beleive that uday is using manyata so that he cant marry bethel but hope he falls in love with her within one year please update soon and thanks for the pm

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