ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59] - Page 14

Awww such awsum chappy plzzz continue soon...

when are you updating zainab?

Originally posted by: andy.a

Wow what an update
loved it so much
it was very funny
the way they spoke made me laugh so much
uday s love for manyata is now known to piya
but is it really to late
pls let it not be so
continue soon and thanks for the pm

thankyou andy😳 i am glad you laughed😃 yeah it is too late now! what can we do i acnt help baby😭 i will sooon😛

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Lajawab update

hillarious

Pine War was Amazing

wonder whr Piya went

mayb she is hiding to irritate Uday

cont soon

thanks for de PM

thank you dear😃 yea may be we never know what she is upto😉 i will very soon😃

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Bohut funny update tha. Par kitni badi yeda hai tu pia ko ghuma dia aur bure baccho ki tarah update vi khatam kar dia

thank you love😃 mje ganday bachoon wali bht adatien hai😉 don't worry she'll be back sooon😳

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

superb update zenu...too funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
kya dialouges...the zenu tussi gr8 ho...
awww...poor uday kitna pyara karata hai naa piya par wohhh...😡
OMG...now where piya went
plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.

aww...thank you so much sweta 😳 chal ab muje sajda krna band kr😆 uday ki chamchi😆
i don't know mje bta kr nai gai will do it soon!! 😉

Originally posted by: cnibir

Ahahaha!!! Such a humorous update!! Loved it!!!!!!!
Do continue soon and thnx for the PM

Plz PM me again when u r done with next chappy... Great work!!!

thank you so much 😃 i will pm you every time no worries😳

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Very entertaining update Zainab. Awww ... poor Uday was dreaming. DAMN!!! -Piya didn't even let him enjoy his dream😳. Their entire interaction thereafter was hillarious😆. Such colourful language ... Zainab - where do you come up with such words? Awesome - I loved it😉. The scene where Uday spoke about Manyata was very touching. And that was nicely written. Loved the update Zina, please continue soon ... ... then we'll know where Piya dissappeared to; Thanks for the PM😊.

thank you so much navina😃 well poor uday, khwaab main bhi bechare ko chainn nai hai😭 lol 😆even i have no idea where i come up with them😆 thank you😳 will continue it soon😉 you will get her back she never told me where is she going😭