ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59] - Page 16

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

O TERI!!!
YE KYA HO GAYA???
HUH!!!
NEVER THOT 'BOUT IT!!!
AB KYA WO JARUR BHAAG GAYI HOGI UDAY KO MAZA CHAKHANE KELIYE...
PIYA AGR BHOOT HAIN TOH WO PINE USKE SAR PE KAISE LAGA???
MATLAB WO INSAAN HAIN???

WTS THIS ZAINAB!!! MAKE IT CLEAR RE!!!

oyye!! ye kuch nai hua😆chill mar jani😳 umeed achi rakh na jani😃 its fiction babe kuch bhi hona jayaz hai😉 hmm pkka nai hai yar mje btati nai ye piya😭 this is it sanju😆 yar dimagh kia tunay rent par day rakha hai😆 socch jani soch😃

Originally posted by: manisha98

y did u had to stop there?!?

Now I can't wait to know what happens next...

plz...plz...plz...update as soon as possible!!

btw asum chappy...luvd it a lot!!😃

because i am so evil😈 hmm i will update soon chill maro babe😳 thank you love😃

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

dhamaka tha

it's fantastic

lol😆 thank you jii😃

Originally posted by: Shahista01

😉😆😆 awesome update zainab

Very entertaining and funny.

The clourful language between uday and piya... and nok jhok... hilarious

Piya did not even let uday enjoy his dream... bechara, lol

Very touching when uday spoke of his love 4 manyata...

And please update sooon... and let us know where piya disappeared.

thank you shah!!😳 i am glad you found it funny!! piya nay meray uday kay nak main dum kr rakha hai mai kia kru iska😭😆 i will update soon!! you will surely know that😉

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Zaini loved the update...alright when i start reading i thought its gonna be extremely hot... :Dbut then you throwed a bomb on your readers but showing it was uday dream... Well i think from many readers you will get rotten tomatoes :P

But when i read further trust me i laughed on each and every dialogues especially manyata calling him laal beg :D hahaha i laughed really bad...

Another best part was obviously pine war:P...

this was one of your best updates uptil now...

Loved it:D

thank you so much sarah😳 well i have to mantain a level for everyone's convenience from now on i have decided not to post explicit stuff in any update!!😲 means not too gutterish!!😃 yea surely i got many😆 lol i had to think a lot for this conversation and i thought to put this word as its quite funny😆 thanks a lot jani😳

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks...great

thanks ji 😊and ur most welcome too😆

Originally posted by: sirjee

Awww such awsum chappy plzzz continue soon...

thank you ji😳

Originally posted by: mah.noor

when are you updating zainab?

kr du gi jani😉 fikar not😃

Originally posted by: kaurz

hi Zina...Sorry for commenting here late too...i m unable to comment or like on FFs from my fone(dnt knw why 😭 😭)
both of ur stories are very good...m loving them...waiting for next part...

thanx for PM...next part ka bhi Pm kar dena plz

hello ji😛
koi nai ji chalta hai😉 roi roi na kr jani sub theek hojae ga fikar not😳 thankyou so much ji😊 yea!! no worries apka pm pakka!😃

Zenu ki bacchi agar tune jaldi update nahi kia toh teri wat laga dungi