The Player Manveer SS part7 updated pg 22

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Hi Guys!!!😃😃😃

Enjoy this while you're waiting for the Checkmate's 2nd part of the 17th chapter,😊😊😊

It's an introduction to my new😳'...well don't get angry'...it's😳 the new SS I'm planning to write

Tell me your views about it.😃😃😃

"Let's go Jay" Manyata said putting her arm around her younger sister's shoulders.

The girl was watching at the white walled large house with tear filled eyes.

"How can you jiji?"

She asked after a moment.

"How can you just leave your home and go without a single drop of tear?"

"It's not our home anymore" Manyata said trying her very best to control her voice from shaking.

"It's a property that belongs to someone else"

Jay made a tiny sob.

"And tears only make you weak they don't give you the strength to fight!"

"That line belongs to someone else I guess princess"

A voice made both sisters jump.

It was him the prince of Jaygar surrounded by his guards with a mocking smile in his face. His eyes lingered on Manyata's face for a moment.

"You!"

Manyata's voice was now full of anger. This man was something very intolerable.

"Yeah me...'let me introduce as you don't seem to remember" He came closer as Jay moved away.

"Your opponent"

"So it's a game" Manyata hissed.

"Cause it is baby...'everything's a game but this one is a special predetermined one..'"

"Really how so?" Manyata asked in a cold voice.

"Because here every time the winner will be me "

"Dream on" She turned to leave and he grabbed her arm pulling her towards him.

"You told me this once too remember...'and see"

He looked at the palace they were leaving.

"Today I bought your home...'tomorrow I'll...'" His smirk completed the sentence.

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Sooo😳

What do you think????😳

Tell me Tell me Tell me please!!!😳😳

Thanks for reading,😃😃

Sorry if I wasted your time😭😭

Eagerly waiting for your response ,😃😃

Cham

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-The_Tomboy- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one cham really update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm... seems interesting, but cant take a completely villian Uday, he should have shades of grey but should also fall for Manyata like hell.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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seems interesting 😊 continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

hmmm... seems interesting, but cant take a completely villian Uday, he should have shades of grey but should also fall for Manyata like hell.😊


Do I look that stupid😕 to put a villain and heroine scene as my introduction😉
It's their love story dear😃
In my head UV"s never a villain😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So is uday good then?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U should definitly continue it...
Edited by Fantasyangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg your SS's r always awesome ((:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh I loved it!!! Do continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very Interesting...Plz continue👍🏼

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