The Player Manveer SS part7 updated pg 22

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

OMG OMg OMG OMG OMG...manyata's ex bf her fiance ,nw uday will not spare her,i'm in luv with bad boy uday ,dey don't know dere real identities awww dam intrestng

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Now I think many would've realized the meaning of that confusing introduction:)

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow that was awsome. U r brilliant. Pls update soon.

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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Cham42195

Hayyy rabbaa will be M's next line not yours😆
Thanks for reading😃

Really ?? you want more lines like these for m will giv means wen a person is shocked wat kind of lines the person uses will giv means in two or three languages and ur welcome darling

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: wendy25
Great job cham,
lovely work.
So here manyata and UV were dating and now had break off and now manyata found out that his ex bf is her fiance. amazing story . both have hidden their actual identities from each other.
now i think story line is going to be revengeful . UV will take revenge from manyata for rejecting him.
OMG OMG OMG
super excited. please try to update next part today dear. its so interesting. brilliant plot.

ps: also update checkmate today. waiting for its update.
YOU ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!

M has an ill luck of always ending up messing things with UV
And he won't just let her go will he
I don't think so...
I can't update today sorry
But I'll try tomorrow for sure 😃

Edited by Cham42195 - 13 years ago

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mystic.charm

@mystic.charm

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

This is freaking cool!!! Do update soon...

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Simran234

@Simran234

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Cham, this is soo freaking cool and tbh, I was actually freaking out a minute cause u didn't update but I guess this ss makes up for it ;) please continue and PM me :) and don't forget to update "checkmate" :)

Simran :D...

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Radha

@RadhapriyaG_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

OMG OMG OMG, this is totally amazing, I loved it so much. Please update soon, like really soon...OMG- this is so nice. New storyline, excellent writing style and wow, just really good. Ok, no not just good. Absolutely awesome. Keep it up my dear