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Posted: 13 years ago
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HI!!!😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

You're going to read my new story!!😳

Do tell me what you think about it!!😳

This story talks about a quiet different angle in love,😊

Where love's there but you'll have to work hard for it…😊😊😊

Part one - The terrible mistake

This wasn't my first flight but the tension was still the same. It wasn't anything about the flight that tensed me it was the guy sitting beside me. I chanced a little glance at him. He looked normal a little white and a little silent but that's alright now isn't it?

I was flying back to India where my future awaits me while my past was sitting beside me. He made no notice that he saw me, no sign of reorganization though we came from the same place and were going to the same place.

Enough of curiosity I should tell everyone who he is. Can he be anyone else? He's the biggest mistake of my life: UV. Although I had dated him for months still I don't know what these two simple letters stands for. Maybe he had some silly old name which he wanted to hide or maybe he doesn't have a name at all which is which I would never find out.

The flight was about to take off. I closed my eyes just as I did in my first ever flight. It was my Gran beside me then. Strange enough I could hear her voice inside my head the last time she phoned me.

"Monu" I rolled my eyes that's what they call me at home (Just don't let anyone know). But here I used it as my name. Well I improved it a bit. Developed it into Monya so that no one here knows I am her highness Manyata at all. It's good to escape royalty sometimes. To be a commoner among the commoners. After all it was the person sitting beside me gave me the idea. As nobody knows what those UV stands for.

"Monu" She said again as I said nothing in reply.

"Ji dadi sa?"

"What are all those rumors beta?"

"About what dadi sa?" I was truly curios as no one here knows about me being Manyata it's impossible for them to create rumors about me.

"About you dating a boy?"

I gulped some air just in time. How could she know? I was about to tell her anyways but not just yet.

"Is it true?"

I gulped again. I'll have to tell her. I'll have to tell her very very soon.

"He's a good person dadi sa"

"So it's true" I heard dadi sa sigh.

"Yeah" I said slowly. "And I really like him."

"Do you know what you're saying beta?"

Her voice was serious.

"As the princess of devgar you're committed to the prince of…"

"Nobody asked me what I want dadi sa!" I cut in frustrated.

"And nobody ever will Manyata!" I caught the anger in her voice she called me 'Manyata' a sure sign that she is very angry.

"You have a duty towards your kingdom and your people"

"Yeah right!"

"And don't forget you have your parents' dreams to fulfill are you going to break their hearts?"

Well that was the end. I couldn't argue anymore. Dadi sa knows exactly where it hurts the most, my parents the only weakness in my life. Whenever they are mentioned I'll have to fight back tears. It was their last wish to see me becoming the queen of Jaygar, oh god I said to myself.

"And you don't want the king of Jaygar involved in this do you? I think you should value the life of that boy you're dating"

Before I recover from one bullet she shot another. I'm gone honestly.

"What do you want me to do dadi sa?" I asked in a small voice.

"You should break up Monu"

"What?"

Where were the sunshine moments of my life gone? I felt like suffocating. How could I do that? How could I hurt him in such a way?

Dadi sa was waiting for my answer. I had no chice.

"I will'

"That's my girl" She disconnected the phone before I had added the word TRY.

My life as Monya rotated around a few people. One of whom was UV once my best friend. Talking about him would mean talking about hundred girls all of whom he had dated. He never loved anyone so there was no pain in breaking up. Or at last I thought so.

But…

A part of my heart started arguing. He was changing. He was changing for me. He wasn't that old UV anymore to whom love was a game nothing else. He looked sincere when he was with me as my friends too noticed. He smirked a little and laughed a lot when he was with me. He was truly in love. But the problem is I never can. And now I'll have to tell him it was a game for me. That was the only way out of this.

"You can't do this" He said slowly when I tried.

"Oh come on UV! You know it wasn't something like that don't you?" I asked him in a light voice.

He looked at me with eyes that were filled with a burning pain.

"Tell me this is a joke" He crocked.

"It was a joke" I said.

He grabbed my arms quit painfully.

"You can't end it just like that got it?"

"Why" I asked him looking in to those burning brown eyes. "How many hearts have you broken on the way ha? So why I can't just do the same?"

"Because I love you damnit!" His voice was quiet terrible and unforgettable. For a moment I thought of leaving the argument. It was true he loved me. But this was also true that I can't love him.

"Now that's your problem isn't it?" I asked coldly pushing away his shocked arms. "It's your line remember?"

"So" He said in that terrible voice. "You did all this to teach me a lesson?"

Good. He gave me an answer to give.

"Yeah" I told him.

He said nothing just left after tucking back an escaped lock behind my ear. It was me who stood there shocked. It was all over so fast.

To be a royal you should say good bye to your emotions. But there were tears in my eyes and an urge to run after him. I saw a little of him after that incident. And that little was enough to understand that he was still in shock. I wanted to help him though I couldn't. I had more pressing matters to deal with like my finals then my journey back home. Even now I had a problem. I was going back to India to attend the funeral of the lady who if lived would've been my future mother in law.

I opened my eyes slowly to see him staring at me. As he noticed my eyes on him he jerked and looked away. That was all for the rest of the journey.

Murari Lal my trusted servant was there at the airport to pick me up. I looked around wishing to see dadi sa or my sister Jay there but no it was only Murari kaka.

"Kaka where's everyone?"

"They're a little busy your highness" He replied bowing down.

"Oh!" I said sitting down in the back seat of the car he brought for me.

So there begun being a royal again.

*

"You're late Manyata" It was dadi sa's greeting.

I knew I was. But sorry to point out the airlines aren't ruled by me are they? I was going to say something of the sort when the car stopped we were in front of the Jaygar palace. It would be my home some day. I shuddered a lot thinking about it.

The crowd was on lose. That Maharani must have been popular here all those people really seemed very sad about her death. They say it was a heart attack I wonder why though.

My question was answered the moment I set my eyes on the royal family.

Maharaj Giriraj was a middle aged man. He had his royal personality that made it easy for me to recognize him. There was his daughter princess Unnati a girl little older than Jay, her hands around a tall young man's neck she was crying her heart out in to his chest.

My heart skipped a beat. It was UV! What was he doing here? Then…just then a strange fear rippled inside my stomach. I turned to dadi sa?

"Who's the prince of Jaygar?" I asked her as normally as I could manage.

"You mean Udayveer? He's the one with Unnati"

My wish was finally fulfilled. Now I know what those letters U and V stands for. But something was telling me that I was right about my previous decision too. UV was the biggest mistake of my entire life. The one I could never amend.

*

Tell me what you think about it,😳😳😳😳😳😳

I can't wait to know😃😃😃😃😃

Thanks for reading😊😊😊

Sorry if I wasted your time😭😭😭😭

Cham

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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Again, its one in the morning my time. 😆

Cham, darling, you know what I will say about your beautiful talent and imagination...but unfortunately I didn't like it. It was perfect! 😃 Your imagination runs wild! I love the plot, storyline and problem! It is completely different from your other FF, Checkmate. This is gonna be exciting to read! 👏

Even though you just updated, I really hope you update soon!
Kajol :)

P.S. I hate when you write 'Sorry if I wasted your time' because my dear, you definitely did not. 😃

P.P.S. I love the first person point of view from Manyata.
Edited by Kajol17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg 😲😲😲
This was freaking AWESOME!! 👏
Where do you get such amazing ideas from??? They are all so unique and different.
I am so eager to read more of this SS. This is so interesting. Manyata's ex-boyfriend happens to be her future husband. WOW! So I think Uday is going to be damn pissed at her over the break up because he even told her he loved her and yet still she dumped him. I am guessing we'll see a bad boy UV here who'll teach Manyata a lesson 😉 . But he obviously still loves her. Just like in the show. Oh God can't wait to read more. This is so damn interesting. I am literally jumping in my seat 😳 . Your SSs make me fall in love with ManVeer all over again 😍
Update the next part soon and would be waiting for the Check Mate's update too 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
OMG u r FF is such a killer cant wait fr more and waitin fr ur chekmate one FF too plz update it fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kajol17

Again, its one in the morning my time. 😆

Cham, darling, you know what I will say about your beautiful talent and imagination...but unfortunately I didn't like it. It was perfect! 😃 Your imagination runs wild! I love the plot, storyline and problem! It is completely different from your other FF, Checkmate. This is gonna be exciting to read! 👏

Even though you just updated, I really hope you update soon!
Kajol :)

P.S. I hate when you write 'Sorry if I wasted your time' because my dear, you definitely did not. 😃

P.P.S. I love the first person point of view from Manyata.


Sorry
I always ended up updating at 1am it seems😆
Thanks for the appreciation,I'll exclude that sorry line from the next update,there are lots of people who hate it
I'm glad that you found the plot interesting😃
Cham
PS: This story is going to run in that first person point of view:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fia21

Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg 😲😲😲
This was freaking AWESOME!! 👏
Where do you get such amazing ideas from??? They are all so unique and different.
I am so eager to read more of this SS. This is so interesting. Manyata's ex-boyfriend happens to be her future husband. WOW! So I think Uday is going to be damn pissed at her over the break up because he even told her he loved her and yet still she dumped him. I am guessing we'll see a bad boy UV here who'll teach Manyata a lesson 😉 . But he obviously still loves her. Just like in the show. Oh God can't wait to read more. This is so damn interesting. I am literally jumping in my seat 😳 . Your SSs make me fall in love with ManVeer all over again 😍
Update the next part soon and would be waiting for the Check Mate's update too 😊


I like the bad boy Uday very much😳
Unfortunately the one in checkmate is just too loveable😳
So he'll be the bad boy here
Thanks for reading😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great job cham,
lovely work.
So here manyata and UV were dating and now had break off and now manyata found out that his ex bf is her fiance. amazing story . both have hidden their actual identities from each other.
now i think story line is going to be revengeful . UV will take revenge from manyata for rejecting him.
OMG OMG OMG
super excited. please try to update next part today dear. its so interesting. brilliant plot.

ps: also update checkmate today. waiting for its update.
YOU ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow completely different and good one ⭐️
i wanna see uv as a bad boy 😈 and M trying hard to manao him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hayyy rabbaa!!!! ye kya tha yaar!!! bhagwan manya ko ab bohut pachtana hoga!!!! kya plot hai!! what story line!! I swear u are gng to becum a very good writer!! very nice update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gowri05

Hayyy rabbaa!!!! ye kya tha yaar!!! bhagwan manya ko ab bohut pachtana hoga!!!! kya plot hai!! what story line!! I swear u are gng to becum a very good writer!! very nice update!!!


Hayyy rabbaa will be M's next line not yours😆
Thanks for reading😃

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