Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!)

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Payal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

they say good things come to those who wait..i waited n my wait was rewarded:) you r finally back wit an amazing update...if possible pls write d next one soon dear:)

awww thank you..! That was so sweet! :)
btw what's your name?

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Payal

@Grenade

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: tejuangel
that was too good poor M😭please PM 4rm nxt part

Thank you! :)

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fia21

@fia21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Loved this update. It was beautiful. Looks like Uday couldn't bring himself to leave.
Lol you should totally continue this for as long as you can as I would love to read more. And add some more dialogues too 😳
Once again amazing update. Continue soon!

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Payal

@Grenade

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: fia21
Loved this update. It was beautiful. Looks like Uday couldn't bring himself to leave.
Lol you should totally continue this for as long as you can as I would love to read more. And add some more dialogues too 😳
Once again amazing update. Continue soon!

Thank you..! Lol..I couldnt bring myself to make him leave! :p
And will keep the dialogue thing in mind next time..! Thank you! :)

Edited by Grenade - 13 years ago

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Inkpen4877

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Oh this was so beautifully well written! I am looking forward to the next part!!!

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Itz awesome yaar.loved it.Cont soon.

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Hey
read all upto 3rd part mst say it was awesome the OS was fab u described udays thoughts so well.. & the SS is so good really loved all the parts Manyata realization really want her to realize like that in show too u explained it so well awesome writing... 👏 now gonna read part4 jst saw u updated first wanted to comment... will do so after reading part4 as well... pm me nxt time too plz when u update...
take care

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Great upadte dear! Ty 4 d pm & update soon 😃

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

wowww...again...awesome!!and who is this guy!!!i hope UV..oh man who is this guy??plz continue soon...can't wait to raed the next part...

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Oh man seriously Payal...like seriously

how the hell do you do it??

I am seriously SPEECHLESS!

the update starts and i can feel Manyata's depression..then when she saw him,..i actually smiled and got happy with her..it was just her imagination..i frowned

and then the end...BRILLIANT but at the same time its torture caz i want to read more soo badly!! seriously continue as soon as you can..this is honestly one of the best pieces of writing i ever read..and i really mean it wen i say that!

also i understand that sometimes its hard to continue but really u have such amazing writing skills and it really feels like writing is just in-born in you so all i'll say is that even when ur depressed..use ur writing to free your mind and cheer urself up! and i agree..sometimes i have nothing planned out but when i sit down to write..ManVeer flows through so easily!

again amazing update adn please continue as soon as u can make time!